SM63 LDC Topic

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Re: SM63 LDC Topic

Postby Vajrin » August 1st, 2015, 6:33 am

After played latest version of Death's Castle. There are some reviews from me.


About gameplay: I have one problem with invincibility cap area, it damages to me everytime I played this level. Other than that, this level's gameplay is nice, especially the last room with flaming boos. It's pretty challenging.


Graphic: Very beautiful and gorgeous, but sometimes it's really creepy. It's great to replace some twisted wire with wall tiles.


If I were a judge, I'll give you 17.5-18 points for this level. And sorry for bad English. ;)
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Re: SM63 LDC Topic

Postby Jumbo101 » August 1st, 2015, 6:52 am

Hey guys, I removed the twisted wires in my latest version in the level vault.
I updated it there, go check it out!
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Re: SM63 LDC Topic

Postby Vajrin » August 1st, 2015, 7:07 am

Jumbo101 wrote:Hey guys, I removed the twisted wires in my latest version in the level vault.



Oh, I did't mean "it would be great if you remove some twisted wire and replace with wall tiles" but I mean "this version is better because replacing twisted wire with wall tiles". And I also played latest version of your level. It's awesome. :)
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Re: SM63 LDC Topic

Postby Supershroom » August 1st, 2015, 8:42 am

Finally finished my level. Ready for bugchecking stage, fellows.

Mario's Mysterious Merry-go-round

Not using any boos was intentional as well as using much decoration. I know it, no Supershroom level without some loading time.

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269,1,340|35,4989,250,1,25|35,5037,235,1,25|35,4943,264,1,25|125,4900,283,1,170|120,4312,424,1,0|119,4312,464,0,0|126,4704,448,1,145|9,5840,208,0,0,0,0,0,0,Right,none,0.5,96,12,Left,0,0,1|9,5744,240,0,0,0,0,0,0,Right,none,0.5,96,12,Left,0,0,1|9,5808,208,0,0,0,0,0,0,Right,none,0.5,96,21,Left,0,0,1|137,5823,144,1,0|137,5459,347,1,20|105,5523,513,1,65|105,5552,512,1,280|144,5790,152,1,0|144,5856,152,1,0|7,5200,352,4,1,102,102,0,0,Left,Down,1,1,1,102|2,4808,416|2,4824,416|2,4816,400|51,4656,376,1|9,5232,400,0,3,0,51,0,0,Right,Up,1,32,16,Left,0,0,1|9,5168,400,0,3,0,51,0,0,Right,Up,1,32,16,Left,0,0,1|9,5200,256,0,3,0,51,0,0,Right,Down,1,32,15,Left,0,0,1|51,5744,96,1|129,5744,472,0,0|126,5313,187,1,10|114,5334,187,0,0|105,5238,112,1,165|106,5232,136,0,0|105,5301,122,1,220|116,5253,184,1,45|105,5708,189,1,0|77,5268,144|2,5352,408|2,5352,384|2,5352,360|116,5560,152,1,180|116,5512,152,0,180|111,4688,292,1,180|4,4288,480|2,4272,456|2,4256,440|2,4214,424|2,4235,430|105,4592,400,1,225|43,3808,91|56,5496,456,1|54,5032,440,1|102,4968,528,1,0|104,5000,496,1,290|138,5644,499,1,130|113,5674,392,1,195|114,5680,352,1,0|110,5768,384,0,285|2,5552,304|2,5536,288|2,5512,280|2,5488,280|140,5455,294,1,245|140,5416,312,1,235|73,5680,498,Mario%3A%20%22Huh%20%2E%2E%2E%20where%20am%20I%3F%22%0D%3CBR%3E%0D%22Hmm%20%2E%2E%2E%20this%20place%20is%20pretty%20%2E%2E%2E%20plenty%20of%20plants%20%2E%2E%2E%20do%20I%20have%20to%20get%20up%20there%20somehow%3F%22%20%0D%3CBR%3E%0DJumbo%3A%20%22Don%27t%20spoil%20the%20ending%20of%20this%20level%21%20My%20yellow%20comrade%20Supershroom%20won%27t%20be%20amused%20of%20that%21%22|125,4328,352,1,330|2,5072,344|2,5048,352|2,5024,360|2,5000,368|125,5088,416,1,335|125,5312,416,0,25|116,5904,224,1,65|116,5992,192,0,295|2,5976,56|2,5976,80|2,5976,104|138,5439,534,1,285|54,4296,320,1|44,1056,24,0,6,16,7,1,0.1,3,30,1|44,1344,24,0,6,16,7,1,0.1,3,30,1|117,5633,288,1,325|116,5599,262,1,315|132,4288,24,1,0|132,4224,24,1,0|2,5672,144|2,5652,156|2,5632,165|2,5688,128|110,5852,80,1,0|131,5042,26,1,30|131,5025,38,1,0|129,5059,38,1,0|9,5216,80,4,0,40,0,0,0,Left,none,1,32,12,Left,0,0,1|9,5304,80,4,0,40,0,0,0,Right,none,1,32,12,Left,0,0,1|145,3979,440,1,0|138,4576,136,1,345|130,4494,183,1,0|120,4336,88,1,0|119,4336,128,0,0|144,5254,24,1,0|144,5274,24,1,0|55,5432,144,1|4,5344,192|4,6272,448|108,4764,11,1,165|0137,2992,416,1,0|0137,3056,416,0,0|0137,2992,400,1,0|0137,3056,400,0,0|0137,2992,384,1,0|0137,3056,384,0,0|0137,2992,368,1,0|0137,3056,368,0,0|0137,2992,352,1,0|0137,3056,352,0,0|0137,2992,336,1,0|0137,3056,336,0,0|0137,2992,320,1,0|0137,2992,304,1,0|0137,2992,288,1,0|0137,3056,320,0,0|0137,3056,304,0,0|0137,3056,288,0,0|0133,2480,240,1,0|0133,2480,280,1,0|0133,2480,320,1,0|0133,2480,360,1,0|0133,2480,400,1,0|39,2408,416,1960,448,5|39,2424,416,1976,448,5|39,2408,95,2408,96,5|39,2424,95,2424,96,5|131,3021,467,0,0|130,2928,536,1,0|129,2808,552,0,0|130,3056,536,1,0|130,3184,536,1,0|133,3120,512,1,0|133,2896,512,1,0|133,2992,512,1,0|124,4981,38,1,220|125,4348,235,0,190|111,4170,128,1,0|111,4216,128,1,0|35,4176,192,1,0|35,4208,192,1,0|35,4192,192,1,0|18,4672,96,2,0|18,4672,96,2,60|18,4672,96,2,120|111,5080,-8,1,135|42,4832,88,1,0|41,4832,136,1,0|41,4832,164,1,0|41,4832,192,1,0|57,4896,152,1|44,4416,104,0,6,16,7,1,0.1,3,30,1|120,4832,312,1,0|119,4832,352,0,0|119,4816,320,1,0|120,4669,497,1,0|120,4668,438,0,0|120,4669,556,1,0|120,4669,615,1,0|140,5360,16,1,180|12,2688,200|10,3360,192|10,3344,192|137,3537,161,1,0|137,4079,161,0,0|108,3954,581,1,0|108,4004,564,0,0|108,4039,562,1,0|105,4240,512,1,35|108,4024,456,0,180|129,4032,432,1,0|129,3936,432,0,0|116,5407,434,0,20|116,5423,473,1,340|116,5426,483,1,345|116,5442,424,1,245|108,3662,581,0,0|108,3616,564,1,0|108,3577,562,0,0|108,3592,456,1,180|145,3637,440,1,0|129,3680,432,1,0|129,3584,432,0,0|110,4128,520,1,0|110,4144,504,1,0|110,3488,520,0,0|110,3472,504,0,0|10,3376,192|10,3328,192|130,3478,20,0,0|130,3242,20,1,0|137,3424,0,1,0|105,3328,24,1,0|105,3392,24,1,0|145,4688,168,1,0|74,176,184,15|144,2449,87,1,0|144,2479,87,1,0|140,3952,304,1,270|140,3664,304,1,270|123,3952,238,1,180|123,3664,238,0,180|145,3980,376,1,0|145,3880,376,1,0|145,3636,376,1,0|145,3736,376,1,0|124,3896,240,1,180|124,3720,240,0,180|111,3712,368,1,0|111,3904,368,0,0|59,3960,376,1|59,3640,376,1|2,4256,264|2,4232,256|2,4208,252|2,4184,256|2,4016,336|2,4016,304|2,4016,272|2,3600,272|2,3600,304|2,3600,336|105,2656,48,1,0|105,2752,48,1,0|116,2704,50,1,0|131,2804,24,1,0|131,2604,24,0,0|9,4192,592,0,0,0,0,0,0,Right,none,0.5,96,21,Left,0,0,1|9,3424,592,0,0,0,0,0,0,Right,none,0.5,96,21,Left,0,0,1|18,2692,528,2.5,90|18,2692,528,2.5,0|71,3152,256,Right,90,8,20,0,8,0|71,2896,256,Left,270,8,20,0,8,0|35,2835,468,1,40|35,2795,436,1,35|35,2863,456,1,35|35,2821,430,1,30|35,2825,444,1,15|35,2852,470,1,75|7,2676,424,6,0,30,0,0,0,Left,none,1,1,0,25|7,2616,440,6,0,30,0,12,0,Right,none,1,1,0,25|104,2768,520,1,0|117,3328,392,1,0|111,3398,471,1,130|111,3349,501,1,185|116,3341,452,1,205|116,3373,390,0,55|120,2864,302,1,0|120,3184,302,0,0|119,3184,344,1,0|119,2864,344,0,0|138,3247,557,0,325|7,2544,424,6,0,30,0,0,0,Right,none,1,1,0,25|7,2603,440,6,0,30,0,12,0,Left,none,1,1,0,25|4,2776,448|4,2760,448|77,2800,468|60,2624,512,1|120,2520,232,1,0|119,2520,272,0,0|55,2672,304,1|51,2752,328,1|59,3024,424,1|2,3248,432|2,3248,456|2,3248,480|125,3351,313,0,10|126,3184,464,1,0|122,3208,472,0,50|109,3464,360,1,0|2,3296,296|2,3288,280|2,3280,264|57,2864,400,1|71,3152,256,Left,90,8,20,0,7,0|145,3024,136,1,0|57,2968,64,1|57,3048,88,1|140,3232,144,1,110|138,2864,184,1,0|138,3184,184,1,0|28,3504,192,1,0|101,3696,88,1,0|101,3920,88,0,0|105,3576,32,1,115|117,3432,152,1,0|116,3454,216,0,180|116,3466,142,1,40|117,3138,39,0,170|116,3132,81,0,180|115,2800,80,1,35|113,2807,112,1,145|111,3312,78,1,205|139,2896,-8,1,50|111,4944,24,1,90|111,4944,8,1,90|111,4816,24,0,270|111,4816,8,0,270|132,4608,12,1,0|2,4464,112|2,4480,120|2,4496,124|2,4512,120|2,4528,112|116,4376,192,1,0|116,4344,208,1,0|2,4888,104|2,4880,80|2,4872,56|73,5792,66,Mario%3A%20%22Gosh%2C%20I%20made%20it%20in%20time%20%2E%2E%2E%20now%20I%20can%20go%20back%20home%2E%22%20%3CBR%3E%0DSupershroom%3A%20%22Good%20game%2C%20Mario%2E%22|120,4288,108,1,0|119,4287,150,0,0|108,4152,16,1,215|55,4048,96,1|2,4792,96|2,4784,120|2,4776,144|105,4498,70,1,175|4,4160,264|108,2654,316,1,340|145,2552,368,1,90|145,2552,268,1,90|112,2733,371,0,350|2,2752,280|2,2736,272|2,2720,268|2,2704,272|2,2768,293|2,2784,311|110,2499,48,1,0|120,2672,112,1,0|119,2672,152,0,0|111,5536,32,1,0|132,4704,56,1,0|113,4029,22,1,245|105,4416,8,1,0|9,2672,592,0,0,0,0,0,0,Right,none,0.5,96,12,Left,0,0,1|35,5632,223,1,35|35,5634,210,1,5|35,5584,207,1,0|35,5538,205,1,5|35,5489,198,1,10|35,5439,195,1,0|35,5392,195,1,0|35,5440,183,1,25|35,5400,160,1,35|41,1200,144,1,0|41,1200,112,1,0|41,1200,80,1,0|42,1200,32,1,0|131,405,285,1,135|131,235,285,0,225|130,379,312,0,135|130,261,312,1,225|105,312,432,1,45|105,216,400,1,45|130,207,454,0,30|131,144,374,1,0|71,2896,256,Right,270,8,20,0,7,0|39,1960,447,1960,448,5|39,1976,447,1976,448,5|39,1960,159,2408,96,5|39,1976,159,2424,96,5|35,200,198,1,0|35,152,198,1,0|74,176,242,0.1|35,200,256,1,0|35,152,256,1,0|73,271,419,Mario%3A%20%22What%20is%20this%3F%22%20%0D%3CBR%3E%0DSupershroom%3A%20%22This%20is%20a%20short%20timed%20challenge%2E%22%20%3CBR%3E%0DMario%3A%20%22Really%3F%20I%20know%20your%20time%20challenges%21%22%20%3CBR%3E%0DSupershroom%3A%20%22You%20can%20reset%20the%20timer%20if%20you%20want%2C%20and%20don%27t%20try%20cheating%20by%20riding%20on%20top%20of%20the%20flipping%20platforms%2E|19,496,48,2,0|19,496,48,2,60|19,495,432,2,0|19,496,432,2,60|19,496,432,2,120|19,496,48,2,120|9,496,432,0,0,0,0,0,0,Right,none,0.5,32,10,Left,0,0,1|9,496,48,0,0,0,0,0,0,Right,none,0.5,32,10,Left,0,0,1|45,1344,408,0,30,20,5,45,0,30,1|45,1344,392,0,30,20,5,45,0,25,1|9,728,200,0,0,0,0,0,0,Right,none,0.5,16,15,Left,0,0,1|45,809,240,90,30,32,5,35,0,0,1|45,836,240,90,30,32,5,35,0,5,1|45,864,240,90,30,32,5,35,0,10,1|45,891,240,90,30,32,5,35,0,15,1|45,912,265,180,30,32,5,35,0,20,1|45,912,292,180,30,32,5,35,0,25,1|45,912,320,180,30,32,5,35,0,30,1|45,912,347,180,30,32,5,35,0,35,1|45,888,368,270,30,32,5,35,0,0,1|45,861,368,270,30,30,5,35,0,5,1|45,833,368,270,30,32,5,35,0,10,1|45,806,368,270,30,32,5,35,0,15,1|45,784,343,0,30,32,5,35,0,20,1|45,784,316,0,30,32,5,35,0,25,1|45,784,289,0,30,32,5,35,0,30,1|45,784,262,0,30,32,5,35,0,35,1|45,1344,376,0,30,20,5,45,0,20,1|45,1344,360,0,30,20,5,45,0,15,1|45,1344,344,0,30,20,5,45,0,10,1|45,1344,328,0,30,20,5,45,0,5,1|45,1344,312,0,30,20,5,45,0,0,1|9,760,200,0,0,0,0,0,0,Right,none,0.5,16,3,Left,0,0,1|9,712,200,0,0,0,0,0,0,Right,none,0.5,16,10,Left,0,0,1|9,744,200,0,0,0,0,0,0,Right,none,0.5,16,16,Left,0,0,1|9,912,368,0,0,0,0,0,0,Right,none,0.5,20,15,Left,0,0,1|9,784,240,0,0,0,0,0,0,Right,none,0.5,20,15,Left,0,0,1|9,784,368,0,0,0,0,0,0,Right,none,0.5,20,15,Left,0,0,1|9,912,240,0,0,0,0,0,0,Right,none,0.5,20,15,Left,0,0,1|8,848,312,0,1,0,0,1|9,776,200,0,0,0,0,0,0,Right,none,0.5,16,10,Left,0,0,1|9,792,200,0,0,0,0,0,0,Right,none,0.5,16,15,Left,0,0,1|9,808,200,0,0,0,0,0,0,Right,none,0.5,16,16,Left,0,0,1|9,824,200,0,0,0,0,0,0,Right,none,0.5,16,3,Left,0,0,1|9,968,200,0,0,0,0,0,0,Right,none,0.5,16,10,Left,0,0,1|9,984,200,0,0,0,0,0,0,Right,none,0.5,16,15,Left,0,0,1|9,1344,424,0,0,0,0,0,0,Right,none,0.5,16,16,Left,0,0,1|9,952,200,0,0,0,0,0,0,Right,none,0.5,16,3,Left,0,0,1|9,904,200,0,0,0,0,0,0,Right,none,0.5,16,10,Left,0,0,1|9,920,200,0,0,0,0,0,0,Right,none,0.5,16,15,Left,0,0,1|9,872,200,0,0,0,0,0,0,Right,none,0.5,16,16,Left,0,0,1|9,1344,440,0,0,0,0,0,0,Right,none,0.5,32,3,Left,0,0,1|9,840,200,0,0,0,0,0,0,Right,none,0.5,16,10,Left,0,0,1|9,856,200,0,0,0,0,0,0,Right,none,0.5,16,15,Left,0,0,1|9,936,200,0,0,0,0,0,0,Right,none,0.5,16,16,Left,0,0,1|9,888,200,0,0,0,0,0,0,Right,none,0.5,16,3,Left,0,0,1|9,1104,368,0,0,0,0,0,0,Right,none,0.5,32,15,Left,0,0,1|9,1104,392,0,0,0,0,0,0,Right,none,0.5,16,10,Left,0,0,1|45,1104,416,180,30,32,5,45,0,30,1|45,1104,442,180,30,32,5,45,0,25,1|45,1104,468,180,30,32,5,45,0,20,1|45,1104,49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Tell me pls what you think. And if you think gameplay is nice and not too hard ... who knows, maybe the things I've tried out in the castle transition could be also an inspiration for you, Jumbo.

Also two graphical details for FL:
  • The first building. On both sides, there are four white Outside bricks (two full ones, two staircases) which are hanging loosely. They can simply be deleted to make the building look better.
  • At the place where you've used Bowser ceiling tiles, putting staircase tiles above them makes it thinner than the rest. Full tiles above the Bowser tiles, and staircase tiles left to that.
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1 star: (0 - 5.75 in LDC) These levels need a lot of work. They're totally un-elaborated, and/or inherently flawed due to things like cutoff or enemy spam, or they're untested and there are too many bugs gameplay-wise, in short: Many many things went wrong in such a level.

2 stars: (6 - 9.75) These levels are not terrible, but poor. They're too short, lack scenery or they have errors and/or bugs but it's still barely enjoyable. Again, spend more effort and try to do better. (if it's your first level that I rate two stars, it's not bad. There's a long way you can still go)

3 stars: (10 - 12.75) These levels are about mediocre. They may be still a little bit short, the gameplay is fine but not very original and graphics are also solid, but not breath-taking. Try to keep improving!

4 stars: (13 - 15) These levels are nice, but not the best. Effort has been put into them, there can some professionality be seen in gameplay and graphics, they're a nice experience to play, but there are still things you can do to make it even better. Try to go the extra mile!

5 stars: (15.25 - 20) These are really great levels, those which, as said, I would give more than 15 in an LDC. These suffice many high requirements, and it already goes into subtleties if you want to make them better. These levels are successful all around. Bravo.

These are just general principles I try to follow when rating. Sometimes I don't leave a further comment when rating, most times I do, if you have questions about it, feel free to ask further.
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Re: SM63 LDC Topic

Postby Vajrin » August 1st, 2015, 6:43 pm

About Shroom's level:

-Gameplay: At the third level transition, it's very hard, I can't pass the spinning platform at the third level transition. I died more than ten times at this and it makes me very boring when loading level. But other than that, gameplay is nice and challenging.

-Graphic: It's gorgeous. Great usage of tiles and items. It mixed very well. Even though this level hasn't any boos but graphic is still awesome with horror-themed level.

And I also fixed my level. Here's level code.

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Edit 2: Oops. It would be "third" not "second" level transition.
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Re: SM63 LDC Topic

Postby MessengerOfDreams » August 1st, 2015, 8:01 pm

AniLo is who you have to thank for this. I think it's the perfect instrumental for both a merry go round (It's some great 40s esque ragtime theming) with an industrial beat to match the darker mechanical decor of the level.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F4i3EJTj7yM
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Re: SM63 LDC Topic

Postby Jumbo101 » August 1st, 2015, 8:59 pm

Finished playing your level Shroom.
It was great! Despite it having a few flaws to adjust.

First off, the graphics are truly astounding.
The gameplay is good, just lasts a short
time due to this level being short of course.
Also another thing I'd like to point out is
where you press the timer button, it's sort of impossible
for casual players to make it with those logs on the left
transition. I know you were trying to make it challenging.
But it just kinda seemed hard to get pass.

Overall this level was absolutely fun and amazing.
I would give you a 16.5/18

Btw, watch out for MP3 Amplifier. She's entering this LDC.
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Re: SM63 LDC Topic

Postby Supershroom » August 2nd, 2015, 1:51 am

Wow. Didn't expect so much positive feedback.

Put two extra logs at the start of the switch challenge and slowed down the blocks at the start of the castle (from 3 to 2), so you can walk over two approaching blocks instead of jumping again.

When I've listened to MoD's track, I've cringed a bit at the start but then it sets the mood right off. I've decided to take both tracks of yours.

EDIT: Thank you, AniLo. :)

FluorescenceLight wrote:What do you think about my level? Gameplay and graphic? Please tell me.

Okay, I've looked very deep into it.

Gameplay: There are still a few "choose your own door"-instances where you get thrown back to the starting area without reaching a star. Also for some reason I had trouble opening the underwater doors. And noone likes hidden pipes if there are no clues for them. "Something weird" sounds kinda vague.

Solution: Only one door in the middle pool, which leads to the star to the right of the invincibility. Cheep-cheeps in the right pool cause forced damage, so you should remove them as well. The door in the right pool leads to the star underneath the Thwomp building, which makes the hidden pipe dispensable.

Graphics: The thwomp building shows the same problem as Jumbo's level did before - the wire mesh. It's a problem when it covers large objects such as thwomps (at the start it's fine). The neighboured "awkward tile" is an equivalent alternative. Also, there are two types of underwater wall (80, 81) and underwater tile (82, 83). You get the best effects with them if you order them in a checkerboard pattern. For decoration, maybe also use some cave trees next to snowy trees.

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Jumbo101 wrote:Btw, watch out for MP3 Amplifier. She's entering this LDC.

But she's got lots of wire mesh in her level. :lol:
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1 star: (0 - 5.75 in LDC) These levels need a lot of work. They're totally un-elaborated, and/or inherently flawed due to things like cutoff or enemy spam, or they're untested and there are too many bugs gameplay-wise, in short: Many many things went wrong in such a level.

2 stars: (6 - 9.75) These levels are not terrible, but poor. They're too short, lack scenery or they have errors and/or bugs but it's still barely enjoyable. Again, spend more effort and try to do better. (if it's your first level that I rate two stars, it's not bad. There's a long way you can still go)

3 stars: (10 - 12.75) These levels are about mediocre. They may be still a little bit short, the gameplay is fine but not very original and graphics are also solid, but not breath-taking. Try to keep improving!

4 stars: (13 - 15) These levels are nice, but not the best. Effort has been put into them, there can some professionality be seen in gameplay and graphics, they're a nice experience to play, but there are still things you can do to make it even better. Try to go the extra mile!

5 stars: (15.25 - 20) These are really great levels, those which, as said, I would give more than 15 in an LDC. These suffice many high requirements, and it already goes into subtleties if you want to make them better. These levels are successful all around. Bravo.

These are just general principles I try to follow when rating. Sometimes I don't leave a further comment when rating, most times I do, if you have questions about it, feel free to ask further.
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