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okay, i'm gonna allow a few more things on this one that wasn't allowed in V1 of CYOA:MS.
.you can now post as many choices as you want for the user to make, as long as there are at least 2
.if 2 people post at the same time, rather than an argument coming up over who posted first, the person who posts next can just quote the person's side of the story there using, so nobody gets confused.
.options can lead to death! that's right. if you have picked an option that leads to death, then you must put in bold letters The End... don't forget to add those 3 dots at the end. if a person picks an option which leads to death, somebody else must go back to the previous list of choices and make another choice.
. although this is mario-themed, the story will now be told in 3rd-person, rather than 1st-person. so now you can tell us what the rest of the world is doing. just make sure that all desisions have to do with Mario making the choice. okay, i will start:

..........mario wakes up, drowzee. "uh, man, that was some party last night". mario had gotten drunk with luigi and friends, mario said he was tired and going to sleep, walked.........................somewhere, and now, "WHERE AM I?"
A. you're on mars
B. you're in the mushroom kingdom
C. you're in bowsers castle
D. you're somewhere
E.you're nowhere
F.you don't know where you are
G. you are at the bar, and you're just drunk

F.....

What about the original?
And I thought you said 3rd person,but all the Choices are in 1st.
Mario stumbles about, drunk and generally dazed.
When he takes a look around, he see's overturned tables,spilled drinks, and Luigi,Donkey Kong, and Pit on the ground, asleep from too much Vodka Sour and such.
No one is behind the counter,Mario looks out a Window to see a city at night.
Mario checks the clock on the wall, seeing that it is 4:57 in the morning, so he decides to pick up Luigi and heads out the door.
As he steps out, he notices a bum in a alley, his car, and a few crows on the rooftops.
Mario then......
A.Throws rocks at the birds.
B.Throw a rock at the bum,hoping to start a pokemon-ish battle.
C.Heads on over to the bum to chat.
D.Gets in his car and drives home.
E.Whips out his cell phone.

D

Ridder wrote:
What about the original?
And I thought you said 3rd person,but all the Choices are in 1st.

off-topic: first off, the original can still be used. this one is just for more improvements and a different story. second, the story ITSELF is 1st person, but as i said the choices will have to revolve around things mario does. so for that, you will have to pretend you are mario.

on topic: so mario drives home but gets in a kart accident because of drunk driving. The End...

(did you guys read over the rules? you ARE allowed to go back to the previous choice)

D.

But mario got in a car accident and woke up. It was all a dream! However, he realizes that bowser has kidnapped peach so he...

A. Goes to Bowser's castle by himself by walking.
B. Goes to Bowser's castle with an army.
C. Does nothing. He's afraid the whole thing will last 8 worlds!
D. Goes to Bowser's castle by himself by truck.
E. Goes to Bowser's castle with Luigi by walking
F. Goes to Bowser's castle with Luigi by truck.

F.
MMM,please.stop it with the DREAMS please.
You just did that so the accident wasn't real and Mario would realize something.Really?

So Mario heads on over to Bowser's castle with Luigi's truck.
and Mario ran over a Toad along the way.
Mario stops the truck and checks on the Toad.
All he see's is the cap.
Then he.......
A.Picks up the cap.
B.Get's back in the truck and pretend like nothing ever happened.
C.Laugh at what you did.
D.Search for a dead body.

B.

He gets in the truck and drives away. He then realizes he had passed out for the rest of the trip, because he immediatly sees bowser's castle when he got in the truck. He grabs...

A. A shotgun
B. A Mega Star
C. A fireflower.
D. A machine gun.
E. A map of Bowser's castle.

A. A shotgun

Mario and luigi cautiously approach the door to the castle, look inside a window, to see that there were koopas everywhere, and kick the door down, and began shooting koopas like they were tony montana. After a fierce battle, Mario and Luigi had defeated the koopas, but were out of ammo, so they had to get rid of their guns. Now, you'd have to use a melee weapon in order to fight bowser. what will you use?

A.your fists
B. break luigi's arm and use that as a weapon
C.a machete
D.A knife
E.a sword
F.just slap people
G.Cut out luigi's tongue and use that as a weapon
H.just kill luigi and continue this journey alone

C.
But you don't have a machete.
Luigi is killed by an arrow from someone carrying the Huntsman.
"Dominated!"Someone shouts.
Mario goes and tries to beat the Sniper Koopa up, but the Sniper pulls out a Machete! Perfect!
Mario swipes the machete away from the koopa and decapitates him.
"How do you like them meatballs,eh?"Mario cries out as a taunt.
Mario moves on to try the door ahead of him.
The room was weird.
Beyond that door was a Platform with people waiting for a train.
A train rolled in steadily to a stop to carry the people to their next location.
Mario heads on over to a hobo next to a box and wonders what to do next when the hobo suddenly shouts-
"Get in the damn box!" The hobo is suddenly behind you and kicks you towards the opening in the box.
As you are thrown towards the box with the help of gravity, time seems to slow down, this is your chance.

A.Quickly do a button prompt and stop yourself from getting tossed in so easily and chop the Hobo's head off with the Machete.
B.Quickly do a button prompt and stop yourself from getting tossed in so easily and run towards the train before it closes.
C.Quickly do a button prompt and stop yourself from getting tossed in so easily and Jump on over to the ticket booth.
D.Quickly do a button prompt and stop yourself from getting tossed in so easily and Run for the door.
E.Quickly do a button prompt and stop yourself from getting tossed in so easily and fight the Hobo.
F(cuk).Let yourself get thrown in the box.

F.

Mario waits, then sees the hobo is helping him get to Bowser! The hobo...
A. Mails Mario to Bowser.
B. Puts Mario in the train.
C. Hides Mario in a koopa's car