12th Level Designer Contest

[AwesomeJRFD]

Yeah. Ninny's rules for the 13th are here: viewtopic.php?f=15&t=20993#p130687

[Killswitch]

Motherf*cking f*ck yeah! I'm done with calculating the average scores of the contestants and I'll do the honors for posting the results of this contest!





































































The Fake Medal of the 8th Place goes to......

this guy: show

FOURINONE!!!!!!

Now, the Fake Medal of the 7th Place goes to......

this person: show

KONRADIX!!!!!!

And the Cheese of the 6th Place goes to......

this mortal: show

MASTER1.0!!!!!!

The bottle of wine of the 5th Place goes to......

this human being: show

ALUCARDX60!!!!!!

The Peanut Butter of the 4th Place goes to......

this man: show

NANTHEDARK!!!!!!

The bronze trophy goes to......

this warrior: show

AWESOMEJRFD!!!!!!

The silver trophy goes to......

this legend: show

SM63CREATOR!!!!!!

The golden trophy goes to......

this god: show

STAR KING!!!!!!

These are the holy judgings......

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sm63creator
15/20
fun- 5/10, a little too time consuming, platforms were very hard to stay on. made me smile though. not much of a story. me like story. it seems like no effort was put into the story.
graphics-5/5 looks great. everything looks nice.
other- 5/5 adding many different challenges is nice. I like it. but, still too time consuming

FOurinone
13/20
fun- 5/10 no story, but hilarity all around
graphics-5/5 when I saw the code, I though this level would be long, and when it was short, I knew their had to be more. you made an awesome face!!! using items!
other 3/5 nothing much really

Alucardx60
17/20
fun- 8/10 great!!! a story signs were very well thought out. ! I also liked your puzzle. there are six doors, not 5 great riddle portion
graphics- 4/5 your cutoff at the transition to silent hill was not very appealing
other- 5/5 I noticed that you planned to have another ending where peach died. very nice

Konradix
10/20
fun- 2/10 it feels like it was not tested when I tried to play through it. the difficulty level is too high due to the standing logs and the difficulty of standing on them not much of a story either too much randomness takes too long
graphics- 4/5 OMG is that a replica of the start of the 2nd level of Last Legacy?
other- 4/5 good boss . good ideas, just not a good level overall, used two endings. My one problem is you talk to the judges. not good

Nanthe Dark
17/10

fun-8/10 great story other stuf, just not perfect. energy cubes killed dme instantly on third level when smashed into wall. when smashed down, I had to keep on going until I made it past the end.
graphics-4/5 is that a door I see behind the disabled silver star? also, bookcases do not look right.
other 5/5 yay! hidden 1-up rooms

Star King-
19/20
fun- 9/10 too long also and laggy a bit, but nothing else. no story, but that was cancelled out byhow you hit the difficulty spot=on, but still great effort
Graphics- 5/5 I like unusual text
other-5/5 nothing but awesomesauce

Awesome JRFD
19/20
fun- 9/10 great story, I loved the puzzles. made me forget how long it is.
graphics-5/5 nothing wrong with em loved the explosion animation
other-5/5 lightning, boom. boss awesomesauce

master 1.0
16/20
fun-7/10 liked the boo, the challenges. made me think. I like puzzles. it told me to do stuff, I did
graphics- 4/5 not enough variety. some areas are bland, some not. no balance whatsoever, but stil, variety counts
other- 5/5 liked use of disabling objects

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SuperMario63Creator's The S Dimension

Fun: 8/10
Graphics: 4/5
Other: 2/5
Total: 14/20

It was an okay level, the level however had a rather bigger than normal amount of lag, the lava land seemed a bit oddly shaped, and I found a few spots where if this or that happens, you have to restart. For example, in the ice land, if a certain penguin falls off the platform, it is impossible to get up. But good try though.

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Fourinone's The Fail Dimension
Fun: 1/10
Graphics: 1/5
Other: 0/5
Total:2/20

A complete joke of a level. Looks large from the code, but it really fools you into thinking it's good. A few grammatical errors here and there, way short, etc. etc. etc. However... There is a bit more to it than you think. Look to the left in the editing screen.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Alucard X 60's Silent Hill Aftershock
Fun: 7.5/10
Graphics: 3/5
Other: 4/5
Total: 14.5/20

A few grammatical mistakes here and there, and where exactly is this "Hare with the straw hat"? Not exactly what I would call "good", but you at least put some effort into it. You take one accidental step into a chance of 1/6 doors being correct, you go past a bunch of minions, and you still have to force death then. I am not trying to make fun of you, but let the others to encourage you to do better.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Konradix's Level of Whatever it was named Again...

Fun: 8.5/10
Graphics: 3/5
Other: 2/5
Total: 13.5/20

I like the idea of your level, but some parts of it lag and about impossible to manuver through. Good try though, I like it! ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
NanTheDark's Level I Also Don't Remember the Name to...
PART 1

Fun: 8.3/10
Graphics: 4.5/5
Other: 3.7/5
Total: 16.5/20

Very good job! I like the way you used the cave tileset to make planets, and the base of the castle. However, the judging isn't over until I view part 2...

Part 2

Fun: 6/10
Graphics: 3.3/5
Other: 3/5
Total: 12.3/20

A simple boss level. It's okay I would say, but I recommend having a little plant life and such that... well... spoof up the boss world. A good story though, and you did a great job altogether.

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Star King's Infinite Dimension!

Part 1

Fun: 8.555555 *shot* /10
Graphics: 4/5
Other: 3/5
Total: 15.555555 *shot again* /20

Very good job! You made well designed planet formations, plenty of glitches, and moar! However, I have to subtract points for a few things. If you don't know where the invisible blocks are, you actually can get squished by nothing. However, you did a great job none the less! Say hello to first place! probably

Part 2

Fun: 8.5/10
Graphics: 4.5/5
Other: 3.8/5
Total: 16.8
This is also a very good level! I'm taking off some points for reasons not mentioned. I look forward to seeing the final part of the level!
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Umm... A bit left to say. I accidently deleted the wrong draft and the level series judgings of WasonJFRD's levels were deleted. However, I'm obliviously too lazy to redo the whole damn thing, plus I'm not sure if YB had found my judgings. So there you have it.

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sm63creator

The S Dimension

FUN: 9/10

This level was amazing, the amount of variety in the tiles and how they're placed, amazing. Phenomenal. My only problem was the slight lag on my computer. But other than that, really fun.

GRAPHICS: 4/5

Graphics were almost perfect. It was very diverse in how you placed them, slight cut-off, but that's it.

OTHER: 3/5

Nothing special or bad.

TOTAL: 16/20 Great level. It looks great, it's really fun, and it's a level I'd like to play again.

fourinone

Alternate Dimension F

FUN: 10/10 SOMEONE GIVE THIS GUY A FREAKIN' MEDAL.

GRAPHICS: 10/5

OMG SERIOUSLY, I'LL MAIL YOU A MILLION DOLLARS, THIS IS EPIC.

OTHER: 10/5

+7 EVERYTHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIING.

TOTAL: 30/20

BEST LEVEL I PLAYED SINCE EVER. I RESPECT YOU FOR EVERYTHING.

[Joke Review Over]

Alucardx60

Silent Hill Aftershock

FUN: 7/10

It was pretty enjoyable. It had sort of a maze feeling to it. Pretty easy and short but still fun.

GRAPHICS: 3/5

Graphics were pretty par, nothing bad or anything. It just felt really plain and flat at times.

OTHER: 3/5

Nothing special or bad.

TOTAL: 13/20

It was pretty fun but also plain at times.

Konradix

Dimension G

FUN: 6/10

This level was pretty lengthy, but sometimes lagged. It felt pretty bare at times as well. It was still fun, though.

GRAPHICS: 3/5

Graphics were really are a lot. Flat ground and hardly any decorations.

OTHER: 3/5

Nothing special or bad.

TOTAL: 12/20

It has flaws, but if you get past that, it's a nice and long level that's fun to play.

NanTheDark

Out of This World

FUN: 6/10

Pretty good. But one thing that this level was lacking was enemies. You need to put more enemies in the level. Just putting a few in Lord Guy's Castle isn't enough. But other than that, it was pretty fun.

GRAPHICS: 3.5/5

Graphics were up to par. I hardly saw any cut-off but it mostly felt a bit flat and plain. More decorations would be good.

OTHER: 3/5

Nothing special or bad.

TOTAL: 12.5/20

There are some problems like hardly any enemies and plain ground but all in all, it was a nice level.

Star king

Dimension ∞ : The Garden of Illusion

FUN: 9/10

This level series is greatly enjoyable. I like how you used invisible blocks. It reminds me of using the Lens of Truth in Zelda. :p There was decorations and enemies everywhere. It was great. It was a bit confusing, though. And challenging, too! Good job!

GRAPHICS: 4/5

Hardly any cut-off, diverse tile placement and many decorations makes the graphics epic.

OTHER: 3/5

Nothing special or bad.

TOTAL: 16/20

There is a lot of fun packed into this series. It's challenging, and very nicely made. Great job!

AwesomeJRFD

The Transdimensional Dilemma

FUN: 7/10

This level was interesting, in a good way. I like the plot, the cool effects you did with blocks, etc. Although a bad part was the lag. It lagged quite a lot on my computer. But other that that, pretty good.

GRAPHICS: 3/5

There was nothing too special about the graphics. I saw hardly any cut-off but at times it felt plain.

OTHER: 3/5

+1 Cool lightning effects.
-1 Lag.

TOTAL: 13/20

Lags quite a bit, and a little confusing at times. But it has cool effects and other things to make this a fun level.

Master 1.0

Inside A Black Hole

FUN: 5/10

Let's start with the fact that it's extremely easy. Also, there are hardly any enemies. The effects were kind of cool, and I liked Boo Powers but this isn't that good. Just a lot of flat ground with hardly any decorations. Plus, the earthquake really hurt my eyes, and that's a really bad thing.

GRAPHICS: 2/5

I didn't see any cut-off but the ground was so bare and flat.

OTHER: 3/5

Nothing special or bad.

TOTAL: 10/20

This level was very plain and easy, there were some special effects, though. But the rest was...meh.

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Master1.0 (Inside the Black Hole)

Fun - 5/10

The level is long but most challenges doesn't interest me that much. I like the way you added the first 1-Up Mushroom secret. It's fun. But the second 1-Up Mushroom, it's kind of impossible until you find the invisible block, I revealed that if you keep on trying to get it, you may find the invisible block. I have no idea where the last 1-Up Mushroom is hidden.

Graphics - 2/10

Disabled Vertical and Horizontal Transitions? Eh, not really my type of graphics but cool. And in the other parts, most parts of the level have a few decorations. And a few parts were just OK. And also, I like the Rain effect.

Other - 3/5

Nothing special here.

Overall Score - 10/20

Dang, I like your entry better at the 11th LDC.

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supermario63creator (The S Dimension)

Fun - 7/10

Seriously, how awesome is this level? It's long but it has many interesting challenges. But some parts were frustrating too. There were a few problems you need to fix though. In the first room, give some clue on where will you go once you've pressed the switch. In the second room, make those falling logs enabled instead of disabled. In the third room, same with the first room except for the Invincibility Star.

Graphics - 3/5

WOah, very impressive at first four rooms. Decorations are just incredible at those rooms. The other rooms' graphics suck.

Other - 4/5

There was a twisted turn in this level when I saw the Shine Sprite was glowing, I thought that was it. When I fell down, there were more challenges than I thought. That was very unique. Plus, can add some Healing Pods or something that?

Overall Score - 14/20

Very impressive on one of your first LDC entries though, keep it up dude! Also, I suggest you test your level first before you submit.

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fourinone (Alternate Dimension F) - N/A

Sorry to tell you this baby girl, I'm confused. I thought your entry was going to be epic but when I loaded it, it was just a joke entry? Sorry to tell you this, I'm not going to judge it. But definitely nice graphics in the beginning though!

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AlucardX60 (Silent Hill Aftershock)

Fun - 2/10

So long but it was so boring! :O Some parts were just plain, no enemies. And some parts have enemy spam. The beginning was just OK.

Graphics - 2/5

Like Master's Entry, the graphics are not my type. And some parts were just plain, no decorations. I've also seen cutoff when I zoomed out especially in the grass fields. The graphics in the beginning were just fine. Some parts have a few decorations.

Other - 2/5

This level doesn't have a happy ending, the Princess dies and Mario commits suicide.

Overall Score - 6/20

I hope your level designing skills will improve a bit someday.

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Konradix (Dimension G) - N/A

Sorry to tell you this, but this level is impossible for me to beat. I die every minute in this level. But seriously, in this huge level you've worked hard on, you deserve a high score. Some graphics were genius, though.

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NanTheDark (Out of This World)

Fun - 6.5/10

Those levels were just OK. I like the way you added the secret Blue Coins in the first part. The second part was very challenging.

Graphics - 2.5/5

The graphics were awesome, you made an excellent use of some tiles there.

Other - 4/5

Those levels had an interesting storyline. The penguin is in distress and Mario has got to save him. The classic.

Overall Score - 13/20

Just like Master, your entry at the 11th LDC was better than this one.

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AwesomeJRFD (The Transdimensional Dilemma)

Fun - 6/10

Your entries are awesome. I like the way you add the cool effects and you hide secrets were awesome. But you need to give out hints on where are those hidden.

Graphics - 3.5/5

The graphics were awesome. I like the snow-like lightning effects. There was a bit of cutoff though.

Other - 2.5/5

You put of a lot of awesome HTML Coding, especially in the first part of your level. But most of them are reversed.

Overall Score - 12/20

Well, your levels ain't that bad.

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Star king (Dimension)

Fun - 8/10

Nice level series! You made the excellent use of the tricks originated by some Level Designing Legends. And yes, the level series is one of the most fun level series I have ever played.

Graphics - 4/5

Very clean! I like the graphics; the tiles with different colors, almost no cut-off.

Other - 5/5

Great HTML coding. And a lot of good secrets you made your own!

Overall Score - 17/20

I think you'll get a medal for this. Congrats!

Here are the average scores of the contestants......



Star king - (19 + 16.1777775 + 16 + 17) / 4 = 17.044444375

sm63creator - (15 + 14 + 16 + 14) / 4 = 14.75

AwesomeJRFD - (19 + 13 + 12) / 3 = 14.67

NanTheDark - (17 + 14.4 + 12.5 + 13) / 4 = 14.225

AlucardX60 - (17 + 14.5 + 13 + 6) / 4 = 12.625

Master1.0 - (16 + 10 + 10) / 3 = 12

Konradix - (10 + 13.5 + 12) / 3 = 11.83

fourinone - (13 + 2) / 2 = 7.5



Yay, Congratulations to All of the Judges, Contestants, YB, KS, and for those people who tried to join!

[MessengerOfDreams]

Holy ♥♥♥♥ StarKing blew the hell out of everyone. o.o

Good job bro.


I'd say more but I'M STILL SO PISSSSSED :raeg:

[Killswitch]

Oh yeah, I've fixed some mistakes though. OK, that's it.

[nin10mode]

Congrats guys!
Also, very large text. o.o

Finally, this hellish contest is over...

[Avo]

Thank god it's done. I say we pre-pick judges for the 13th that are dedicated so we don't run into a problem.

[AwesomeJRFD]

Can we get our medals now? :3

I thought the top three would be like this:

Spoiler: show

1. Star King
2. AwesomeJRFD
3. Superm63creator

If I had just 1 point more, I would have been in second.

you hide secrets were awesome. But you need to give out hints on where are those hidden.

Secrets are supposed to be hidden. That's why they're called secrets.

There was a bit of cutoff though.

Where?

You put of a lot of awesome HTML Coding, especially in the first part of your level. But most of them are reversed.

Upside-down text isn't html. And it's supposed to be upside-down because everything in the dimension is opposite and I couldn't do mirrored text.



Could someone tell me where the lag was?

And can we start the 13th NAO?

[AlucardX60]

As I thought no one saw the genius in my level. *sigh* Meh I still think 5th is a new record for me.

[Asterocrat]

GOD.GOD.GOD.GOD.

I BEATED FOURINONE YAY! *is shot*

Though I won, I'm not entirely satified Not enough (good) entries... Well great job everyone!
So.

Suyo GIMME THAT MEDAL
*is shot and recieve a pie painted in gold in the face as medal*

[Konradix]

Yeah I wasn't last after all!!!
...but wait.
Four's entry was a joke...
...so I'm still last after all.

Spoiler: show

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Thanks anyway