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Re: WITBLO14 and WITBLOAT 2014 Entrants Topic

Postby Supershroom » January 10th, 2015, 1:48 am

MessengerOfDreams wrote:Looking over the levels I want to add to this, I know I want to add Yurimaster's Red Fortress, Harmless' Frenchy level, and FrozenFire's Halloween level. I also want to add two of the levels from the 28th LDC to the list. However, I'm unsure if I'm missing any levels. Any idea of levels I could add?

Well, Boolord's Castle could be in as well, I think both of them are pretty equal (especially after I've fixed the bugs it had before).

I could indeed have four or even five levels in.
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2 stars: (6 - 9.75) These levels are not terrible, but poor. They're too short, lack scenery or they have errors and/or bugs but it's still barely enjoyable. Again, spend more effort and try to do better. (if it's your first level that I rate two stars, it's not bad. There's a long way you can still go)

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Re: WITBLO14 and WITBLOAT 2014 Entrants Topic

Thumbs up x3

Postby MessengerOfDreams » January 10th, 2015, 7:52 am

Lets not get too cocky again.
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Re: WITBLO14 and WITBLOAT 2014 Entrants Topic

Postby Harmless » January 11th, 2015, 1:21 pm

MessengerOfDreams wrote:Harmless' Frenchy level

I know that level was different and all but honestly, that wasn't a very good level.
Expect something cool here soon!

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Re: WITBLO14 and WITBLOAT 2014 Entrants Topic

Postby MessengerOfDreams » January 11th, 2015, 1:42 pm

Honestly whenever people say "my level wasn't good" I tune out as fast as when people say "my level was so good". I'm reading up on public speaking and I just read that "it always looks worse from the inside". That is to say, what you think is not very good I think is pretty damn well executed and neato, and worthy of the list. Whether it's #20 or #1 is to be seen but I wouldn't include it if I didn't feel it was worth including. Don't insult my taste, you dork. ;)
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lying little ♥♥♥♥ with your ♥♥♥♥ story ♥♥♥♥ you
also Diddy/Lucina <3

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Fanfic: Ecstatic Silence
Just wanted to write and ♥♥♥♥ like this happens, you'd think I'd know better.
Fanfic: Far From the Edge
It's a dance that's been a long time coming for a brand new man and an unchanging woman, but once one takes the plunge there's no falling back up.
Original: Jealous Ghosts of the Mississippi
The story of Rachel meeting Amber after a lifetime of silence and being shunned
Original: Your Hand in Mine
One of my most personal stories about a dangerous romance. Now to be published in a college lit journal!
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Level Series: Leaves From The Vine (ft Star King)
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Re: WITBLO14 and WITBLOAT 2014 Entrants Topic

Postby Harmless » January 11th, 2015, 5:20 pm

I was just saying that from an aspect of how it appealed to everyone else.
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Re: WITBLO14 and WITBLOAT 2014 Entrants Topic

Postby Supershroom » January 14th, 2015, 3:11 am

IMPORTANT: As I've suddenly got the idea to make a Course Series in the way of Super Mario Countdown, with the beginning being Tall Tree in the Water Forest, I'd like it to be left out this time and the entire series being (hopefully) entered into WITBLO15 or WITBLO16 instead.

(I don't have a name for it already...)

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Planned: Forest --> Sky --> Mountain --> Volcano --> Ice --> Town -->
Sea --> Sunken Ship --> Beach --> Desert --> Pyramid -->
Underground --> Space --> Bowser's Castle --> Final Battle
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2 stars: (6 - 9.75) These levels are not terrible, but poor. They're too short, lack scenery or they have errors and/or bugs but it's still barely enjoyable. Again, spend more effort and try to do better. (if it's your first level that I rate two stars, it's not bad. There's a long way you can still go)

3 stars: (10 - 12.75) These levels are about mediocre. They may be still a little bit short, the gameplay is fine but not very original and graphics are also solid, but not breath-taking. Try to keep improving!

4 stars: (13 - 15) These levels are nice, but not the best. Effort has been put into them, there can some professionality be seen in gameplay and graphics, they're a nice experience to play, but there are still things you can do to make it even better. Try to go the extra mile!

5 stars: (15.25 - 20) These are really great levels, those which, as said, I would give more than 15 in an LDC. These suffice many high requirements, and it already goes into subtleties if you want to make them better. These levels are successful all around. Bravo.

These are just general principles I try to follow when rating. Sometimes I don't leave a further comment when rating, most times I do, if you have questions about it, feel free to ask further.
Look at this!: show
My total SM63 level experience: 2803 levels.
Total coins collected in these: 306800

The WITBLO11 Tribute


A showcase of the 25 best levels of 2011, including such fantastic levels as Niveau Victorieux Galaxy, Plastic Beach, Dimension Infinity, Realm of the Heavens/Parallel Spires, and more!

My Level Collection: http://runouw.com/forums/viewtopic.php?f=25&t=47186

Other Important Links:
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Re: WITBLO14 and WITBLOAT 2014 Entrants Topic

Postby MessengerOfDreams » January 14th, 2015, 7:26 am

I don't think I was considering that level anyways and I don't enter every level in a series of more than 5 levels.
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Silent Conversations and a Crow's Final Song!
My latest story, and one of my personal favorites. A girl bound in silence finds the words to say to her prospective girlfriend as they visit her religious father in a dusty town on the edge of Kansas, where the crows' migration south brings forth anchored memories, the path to resolution, and a new start.

Form (25quared)
This might be like nothing you've seen before.
Updated Works! Some of my past best and current stuff: show
Writing Works!
Fanfic: Shut Up and Dance
why do I write so much about dancing you don't dance you've never danced in your entire life
lying little ♥♥♥♥ with your ♥♥♥♥ story ♥♥♥♥ you
also Diddy/Lucina <3

Fanfic: Worth a Thousand Words
Because the world needed a Samus/Dedede story
Fanfic: Ecstatic Silence
Just wanted to write and ♥♥♥♥ like this happens, you'd think I'd know better.
Fanfic: Far From the Edge
It's a dance that's been a long time coming for a brand new man and an unchanging woman, but once one takes the plunge there's no falling back up.
Original: Jealous Ghosts of the Mississippi
The story of Rachel meeting Amber after a lifetime of silence and being shunned
Original: Your Hand in Mine
One of my most personal stories about a dangerous romance. Now to be published in a college lit journal!
-------------------------
Recent LDC Work:
Level Series: Leaves From The Vine (ft Star King)
For the 29th LDC, a theme of grassland taken through the growth of our designing society. Won the 29th LDC!
--
Levels at Large:
Level Topic: Collection of MoD's Levels!
If you've ever wanted to see any level I made worth a damn, go here! From the quiet 14th LDC entrant Finis to the megasmash level series Dark, you can find links here!
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Re: WITBLO14 and WITBLOAT 2014 Entrants Topic

Postby Nwolf » January 14th, 2015, 12:02 pm

Supershroom advertise less please <.<
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Re: WITBLO14 and WITBLOAT 2014 Entrants Topic

Postby ~MP3 Amplifier~ » January 16th, 2015, 12:46 pm

Just a heads up, I have made edits to the story of Hell's Rebellion. It's no longer a wolf story, but idc I'm keeping that wolf statue in the middle of part 2 whether you like it or not, that took ♥♥♥♥ effort that did. :L

I'll make more bug edits in the future but at least the most important part is done.
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Re: WITBLO14 and WITBLOAT 2014 Entrants Topic

Postby MessengerOfDreams » January 22nd, 2015, 6:07 pm

So, it's time to announce the official WITBLO14 list.

In the middle of the year I announced a list of 13 levels that'd be voted on, 6 of which would make it into the WITBLOAT list that celebrated 5 years of WITBLOAT. WITBLO14 will be delayed to take care of that ♥♥♥♥ first and foremost, but that should give you plenty of time to edit your levels.

The seven levels inaugurated into WITBLOAT, of course, will make the list. And I've already gathered a few other levels that I stand by. But I think a list of 20 is more than enough given the quiet, tepid year, and I also think that I picked some levels that were weaker than I anticipated to pad out the earlier and later lists. I will replace them with better levels by the same people, or omit them altogether. I want to try not to delete levels from the rough list freely, but I do think the list needs to be tighter, and due to the low activity there's hardly any concentrated places to find them.

Without further ado, here's the list:

Hell's Rebellion by MP3 Amplifier
Freezestone by Yurimaster
KoopaCorpTM by Kaboom
Echoes of Time by MessengerOfDreams
Neon City by Star king
Candy Coaster by Star king
Gemstone Temple by Emelia Kaylee/Star king
Exploring the Unknown by Yurimaster
Aquatic Breach by Triple J
Urban Climb by NanTheDark (yes, 2 25quared LDC entrants this time!)
Red Sun Fortress by Yurimaster
Le Casse-tête de la Grotte by Harmless
Tall Tree in the Forest by Supershroom
Futuristic Dream by Supershroom
Tree Festival Galaxy by lordpat
The Water Butterfly by Mp3 Amplifier
Dead Valley: The Nightmare by FrozenFire
Paco Hills by TurboFunder
Darkwater Caverns by Harmless
Mountain Fortress by 1018peter

Hopefully this list works out okay.
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My Most Recent Works: show
I switch my signature a lot. If you wanna see some of my past ones, here you go.
Silent Conversations and a Crow's Final Song!
My latest story, and one of my personal favorites. A girl bound in silence finds the words to say to her prospective girlfriend as they visit her religious father in a dusty town on the edge of Kansas, where the crows' migration south brings forth anchored memories, the path to resolution, and a new start.

Form (25quared)
This might be like nothing you've seen before.
Updated Works! Some of my past best and current stuff: show
Writing Works!
Fanfic: Shut Up and Dance
why do I write so much about dancing you don't dance you've never danced in your entire life
lying little ♥♥♥♥ with your ♥♥♥♥ story ♥♥♥♥ you
also Diddy/Lucina <3

Fanfic: Worth a Thousand Words
Because the world needed a Samus/Dedede story
Fanfic: Ecstatic Silence
Just wanted to write and ♥♥♥♥ like this happens, you'd think I'd know better.
Fanfic: Far From the Edge
It's a dance that's been a long time coming for a brand new man and an unchanging woman, but once one takes the plunge there's no falling back up.
Original: Jealous Ghosts of the Mississippi
The story of Rachel meeting Amber after a lifetime of silence and being shunned
Original: Your Hand in Mine
One of my most personal stories about a dangerous romance. Now to be published in a college lit journal!
-------------------------
Recent LDC Work:
Level Series: Leaves From The Vine (ft Star King)
For the 29th LDC, a theme of grassland taken through the growth of our designing society. Won the 29th LDC!
--
Levels at Large:
Level Topic: Collection of MoD's Levels!
If you've ever wanted to see any level I made worth a damn, go here! From the quiet 14th LDC entrant Finis to the megasmash level series Dark, you can find links here!
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