Here and There Again

[Dr. Ocsid]

EDIT AS OF 2016: please disregard this whole topic tbh

i was so young when i made these and i'm pretty embarassed of them now

Old Random test comics (Don't review these):

Comic 1: Shadow's Additude: show

COMMENTARY: ...Yeah, first one. Kinda random.

Comic 2: Random?: show

COMMENTARY: I believe this was better, but still too random.

Comic 3: Loops: show

COMMENTARY: I improved upon everything here, but I badly resized the background and did a poor job with the speech bubbles.

Comic 4: FAILURE.: show

COMMENTARY: A single panel comic. Not that funny.

Comic 5: Luigi and the Bob-Omb: show

COMMENTARY: Better backgrounds, better speech bubbles, but still too random.

Comic 6: Wario's Casino: show

COMMENTARY: Along with a new Segendo logo, This comic was a bit longer than the rest.

Comic 7: Christmas: show

COMMENTARY: An old school project. Don't get butthurt about me not having a background.

Here and there again (DO review these):

Comic 1: The Beginning: show

COMMENTARY: Yay new series! Notice: The next comic has an actual background.

Comic 2: Introduction: show

COMMENTARY: I originally intended to add the background in the last panel and have mario surprised at it.
Unfortunately I forgot about that and put the same background throughout the whole strip.

Comic 3: The Adventure Begins: show

COMMENTARY: Don't worry, you won't have to worry about getting bored from this. I have the comic planned out pretty far.

Comic 4: World 1-1: show

COMMENTARY: I think you can tell something's gonna happen.

Comic 5: Introducing: The Author: show

COMMENTARY: And... something happened. In case you're wondering, that recolor of Mario represents me. More will be revealed about me later on.

Comic 6: When I can't think of a good title: show

COMMENTARY: I realized it would be hard to come up with enough humor to put mario through his own games, so... you'll see.

Comic 7: Someplace green with lots of hills: show

COMMENTARY: Here we go. Mario will have a hard time getting through sonic's world. Especially if he has anything broken after sonic accidentally attacked him.

Comic 8: Introducing: Sonic the Hedgehog: show

COMMENTARY: Wait, they know each other?

Comic 9: Arguments: show

COMMENTARY: Ah, rivals can never get along for extended periods of time. All for the sake of humor.

Comic 10: Explanations: show

COMMENTARY: Wait, I never introduced myself?

Comic 11: What's the fourth wall?: show

COMMENTARY: Yes, I'm gonna be breaking the fourth wall a LOT in this comic.

Comic 12: Special Effects: show

COMMENTARY: This was mainly a test for the motion blur.

[Canine]

That was pretty good, for the first time.

Keep updating, please.

[Panik!]

Looks good! Maybe a little more humor, but great start!!

[Dr. Ocsid]

Okay.
EDIT: Comic 2 is up!

[Canine]

I didn't really see humor into this comic...
But please, do continue.

[Panik!]

That was really random...but it was kinda funny. xD

[Ridder]

This is the part where I say "eh" and give it a medium rating.


4.26/5

6.5/10

[Avo]

These are pretty funny, I always like a good sprite comic!

7.5/10

[The Masked One]

Well, i have yet to see any humor.
This is where i give it a very low rating. -1.5/10
I have to give a higher score than intended since if i give it a low score everyone will shout at me and call me a noob for calling a good spritist bad when my own comics are crappy not so good.
0.5. I gave you an extra point.

[Dr. Ocsid]

Are you kidding me??!?!? People are supposed to give contructive criticism, not give in one and a half stars out of 5 and move on. Tell me what was good/bad about it.