Here and There Again
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Re: Here and There Again
by Dr. Ocsid » June 2nd, 2012, 8:17 am
Sorry I haven't posted a new comic in a while, been busy with school and disneyland. But a new one's finally up!
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Re: Here and There Again
by UsuarioTHf » June 2nd, 2012, 6:07 pm
Two things:
1. Usually different types of sprites and backgrounds (eg. 8-bit/16-bit/GBA-style sprites/backgrounds) don't really clash up together. It looks weird. Try to keep it 8-bit with 8-bit, GBA-style with GBA-style, and so on.
2. You could try and do the motion blur way better. Lines look too unprofessional. If you're using Paint.NET, then this could work.
Other than that, it's pretty good, even though the humor is kind of simple sometimes.
1. Usually different types of sprites and backgrounds (eg. 8-bit/16-bit/GBA-style sprites/backgrounds) don't really clash up together. It looks weird. Try to keep it 8-bit with 8-bit, GBA-style with GBA-style, and so on.
2. You could try and do the motion blur way better. Lines look too unprofessional. If you're using Paint.NET, then this could work.
Other than that, it's pretty good, even though the humor is kind of simple sometimes.
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