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Here and There Again
Posted:
January 26th, 2011, 11:42 amby Dr. Ocsid
EDIT AS OF 2016: please disregard this whole topic tbh
i was so young when i made these and i'm pretty embarassed of them now
Old Random test comics (Don't review these):
Comic 1: Shadow's Additude: show 
COMMENTARY: ...Yeah, first one. Kinda random.
COMMENTARY: I believe this was better, but still too random.
COMMENTARY: I improved upon everything here, but I badly resized the background and did a poor job with the speech bubbles.
COMMENTARY: A single panel comic. Not that funny.
Comic 5: Luigi and the Bob-Omb: show 
COMMENTARY: Better backgrounds, better speech bubbles, but still too random.
Comic 6: Wario's Casino: show 
COMMENTARY: Along with a new Segendo logo, This comic was a bit longer than the rest.
COMMENTARY: An old school project. Don't get butthurt about me not having a background.
Here and there again (DO review these):
Comic 1: The Beginning: show 
COMMENTARY: Yay new series! Notice: The next comic has an actual background.
Comic 2: Introduction: show 
COMMENTARY: I originally intended to add the background in the last panel and have mario surprised at it.
Unfortunately I forgot about that and put the same background throughout the whole strip.
Comic 3: The Adventure Begins: show 
COMMENTARY: Don't worry, you won't have to worry about getting bored from this. I have the comic planned out pretty far.
COMMENTARY: I think you can tell something's gonna happen.
Comic 5: Introducing: The Author: show 
COMMENTARY: And... something happened. In case you're wondering, that recolor of Mario represents me. More will be revealed about me later on.
Comic 6: When I can't think of a good title: show 
COMMENTARY: I realized it would be hard to come up with enough humor to put mario through his own games, so... you'll see.
Comic 7: Someplace green with lots of hills: show 
COMMENTARY: Here we go. Mario will have a hard time getting through sonic's world. Especially if he has anything broken after sonic accidentally attacked him.
Comic 8: Introducing: Sonic the Hedgehog: show 
COMMENTARY: Wait, they know each other?
COMMENTARY: Ah, rivals can never get along for extended periods of time. All for the sake of humor.
Comic 10: Explanations: show 
COMMENTARY: Wait, I never introduced myself?
Comic 11: What's the fourth wall?: show 
COMMENTARY: Yes, I'm gonna be breaking the fourth wall a LOT in this comic.
Comic 12: Special Effects: show 
COMMENTARY: This was mainly a test for the motion blur.
Re: Segendo Comics
Posted:
January 26th, 2011, 1:38 pmby Canine
That was pretty good, for the first time.
Keep updating, please.
Re: Segendo Comics
Posted:
January 26th, 2011, 7:28 pmby Panik!
Looks good! Maybe a little more humor, but great start!!
Re: Segendo Comics
Posted:
January 27th, 2011, 2:03 amby Dr. Ocsid
Okay.
EDIT: Comic 2 is up!
Re: Segendo Comics
Posted:
January 27th, 2011, 6:39 pmby Canine
I didn't really see humor into this comic...
But please, do continue.
Re: Segendo Comics
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January 29th, 2011, 11:40 pmby Panik!
That was really random...but it was kinda funny. xD
Re: Segendo Comics
Posted:
January 30th, 2011, 1:24 amby Ridder
This is the part where I say "eh" and give it a medium rating.
4.26/5
6.5/10
Re: Segendo Comics
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January 30th, 2011, 8:47 amby Avo
These are pretty funny, I always like a good sprite comic!
7.5/10
Re: Segendo Comics
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January 30th, 2011, 11:56 pmby The Masked One
Well, i have yet to see any humor.
This is where i give it a very low rating. -1.5/10
I have to give a higher score than intended since if i give it a low score everyone will shout at me and call me a noob for calling a good spritist bad when my own comics are crappy not so good.
0.5. I gave you an extra point.
Re: Segendo Comics
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January 30th, 2011, 11:59 pmby Dr. Ocsid
Are you kidding me??!?!?
People are supposed to give contructive criticism, not give in one and a half stars out of 5 and move on. Tell me what was good/bad about it.