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[Scientist-Yoshi]

Yoshi's Prank Calls
STORY:
One day, Yoshi had nothing to do so he decided to call his friends. What he did wasn't a regular phone call, it was a ridiculous prank call! Yoshi talked to his friends, disguising as others. What he doesn't know is that he's about to get backfired! Oh, Yoshi! Well at least his boring time flew by...

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Part 2:

Part 3:

Part 4:


Hope you enjoyed the comics! =D Please let me know what you think!

[MushYoshi]

I like the first and third comic.
Btw, How long did you made all four comics.

[Scientist-Yoshi]

I like the first and third comic.
Btw, How long did you made all four comics.

Thanks! Oh, umm... I think I took about 1-2 hours on each. =)

[Killswitch]

Oh yeah, I love all of those four! The third one was the best and genius! The second part was the second to the best! I also like the last part; it had an interesting twisted turn at the ending. I like the graphics in the first part but still good. Nice comics! I'll rate 8.5/10! Keep up the brilliant work!

[nin10mode]

Dayum. The art is amazing. Did you draw that with a mouse? O_0

10/10.

[Scientist-Yoshi]

Dayum. The art is amazing. Did you draw that with a mouse? O_0

10/10.

Thanks! And yes I did use a mouse. =P

[Scientist-Yoshi]

Oh yeah, I love all of those four! The third one was the best and genius! The second part was the second to the best! I also like the last part; it had an interesting twisted turn at the ending. I like the graphics in the first part but still good. Nice comics! I'll rate 8.5/10! Keep up the brilliant work!

Thanks very much! Oh and they're still going to be more parts to come! (*HINT* Next to be prank called is BOSHI!*HINT*)

[Killswitch]

Oh yeah, I love all of those four! The third one was the best and genius! The second part was the second to the best! I also like the last part; it had an interesting twisted turn at the ending. I like the graphics in the first part but still good. Nice comics! I'll rate 8.5/10! Keep up the brilliant work!

Thanks very much! Oh and they're still going to be more parts to come! (*HINT* Next to be prank called is BOSHI!*HINT*)

You're welcome, old friend.

[AlucardX60]

Like everyone else I must admit that the art it amazing. Also you use many panels not unlike a Comic book. (Marvel, DC, etc.)

The delivery of the jokes are pretty good but could use work. But I think the real problem with the series is that they jokes, to put it bluntly, aren't funny.

Yoshi makes the bad joke, the victim overreacts, Yoshi reveals himself. And that is generally how it goes. What I'd like to see is Yoshi not revealing himself and the said victim goes out and does something utterly stupid based off of there conversation. Or go and lash out at Yoshi's Alias.

All in all it's a decent read but the humor leaves much to be desired. 7.5/10 For now but I want this earn a 9, or a 10. because I think it can. It's just not ready yet.

[Scientist-Yoshi]

Like everyone else I must admit that the art it amazing. Also you use many panels not unlike a Comic book. (Marvel, DC, etc.)

The delivery of the jokes are pretty good but could use work. But I think the real problem with the series is that they jokes, to put it bluntly, aren't funny.

Yoshi makes the bad joke, the victim overreacts, Yoshi reveals himself. And that is generally how it goes. What I'd like to see is Yoshi not revealing himself and the said victim goes out and does something utterly stupid based off of there conversation. Or go and lash out at Yoshi's Alias.

All in all it's a decent read but the humor leaves much to be desired. 7.5/10 For now but I want this earn a 9, or a 10. because I think it can. It's just not ready yet.

Yeah, you're right. But Yoshi always wants to reveal himself afterwards. I guess I could also change what can happen in the next parts. Thanks so much for the criticism! =)