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The Sonic Comic

Postby megamario126 » November 20th, 2009, 5:49 pm

Okay! Here's a part of the first issue of my fancomic, The Sonic Comic! I made one with the same title a few years ago, but I discontinued it because I was lazy. Now, I rebooted it! (The original didn't make sense & I can't find it, for now.....) I know some drawings are sloppy, but at least it looks like the character itself. ;)
(NOTE: I CAN ONLY UPLOAD A MAXIMUM OF 3 FILES PER COMMENT. SO, IF YOU WANNA SEE MORE, YOU HAVE TO COMMENT FIRST.)


TSC #1 Cover.jpg
Looky here. It is Sonic. Y'know, Sonic, putting up a "Thumbs Up" to you looking at this, yeah. A little plain, but it is better than just the title enlarged. ;)
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TSC #1 Page 1.jpg
Here, I show you Eggman in his base. Well, the section of his base, called the "Bio-Lab". This is where he will make his clones at. He didn't make one, yet. However, he is trying to see how his clone should look like & make him look like a cool, evil-looking character. And then he starts laughing that weird laugh some person made up & then "Meanwhile..." comes out of nowhere.........
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TSC #1 Page 2.jpg
.........And then some hill pops up. But, Sonic comes! And Tails visits Sonic. :D
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If you can't read my handwriting, (Sorry if it is sloppy. I'll make the words neater on the next parts of the 1st issue.) here are what they are saying:

PAGE 1

Panel 1
Narrator: At Eggman's Lab....

Panel 2
Eggman: (Thinking) Hmm...I wonder what should my 1st clone of Sonic look like?

Panel 3
Eggman: (Thinking) Yes! I got it!

PAGE 2

Panel 3
Sonic: Nothing like a Friday run in Teal Hill.

Panel 4
???: Hey, Sonic!
Sonic: Hmm?

Panel 6
Tails: How are you doing?
Sonic: Fine.
See my levels! http://www.runouw.com/forums/viewtopic. ... 5037#p5037<--i may make a comeback to level-making
See my level series! (In progress!) http://www.runouw.com/forums/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=1011<--i still have the work doc for the world names, lvl names, all that
See my YouTube channel! My levels will be posted on there soon! https://www.youtube.com/user/VidGmr1996/videos<-- i lied
See my chatbox! http://www.xat.com/chat/room/76422579/ <--uhh..that's dead
UPDATE (Since March 31th, 2013): Coming on here may be rare. Yeah.<--'tis true
I'm that guy over there who seems to be the 12th Memeber of the Legendary 12.<--who cares anymore, i wasnt even a nice guy at the time (i was 13 at the time)
Y'know, I have infinite lives. (Using UltraGameSharkGenieActionReplayHax!) So, there's no reason to kill me. ;)<--...wha??????
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Re: The Sonic Comic

Postby HyperSonic » November 21st, 2009, 8:14 am

Very cool! Cant wait to see more
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Re: The Sonic Comic

Postby GalaxyMario » November 21st, 2009, 8:20 am

Those are neat!

Your handwiting is sloppy though.
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Re: The Sonic Comic

Postby megamario126 » November 21st, 2009, 1:25 pm

Thanks, guys. Here are some more of the comic! (Note: I made the handwriting neater.)

TSC #1 Page 3.jpg
Now, they are just looking at some lake. However, someone is trying to get them......it's Metal Sonic: Model Invisi!!
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TSC #1 Page 4.jpg
Tails was too late to notice, so he got shot with a dart! Sonic tries to FALCONE PAWNCH Metal, but was too late & he got shot with a dart, too. LOL.
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TSC #1 Page 5.jpg
A while later, Sonic wakes up in Dr. Eggman's Base! However, Eggman has a 'special surprise' for him..... (Sorry for the lazy shadow coloring. Also, I made some mini-anime-y expressions on him. I did this with my very old comics & I decided to do it on here. But, I won't express too much anime expressions on the characters.)
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If you still can't read some of the speech bubbles, here are what they're saying (Making the letters REAAAALLY NEAT NEXT TIME, OKAY?):

PAGE 3

Panel 1
Sonic: Y'know, just usual. Chilling.

Panel 7
Tails: What is it?
See my levels! http://www.runouw.com/forums/viewtopic. ... 5037#p5037<--i may make a comeback to level-making
See my level series! (In progress!) http://www.runouw.com/forums/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=1011<--i still have the work doc for the world names, lvl names, all that
See my YouTube channel! My levels will be posted on there soon! https://www.youtube.com/user/VidGmr1996/videos<-- i lied
See my chatbox! http://www.xat.com/chat/room/76422579/ <--uhh..that's dead
UPDATE (Since March 31th, 2013): Coming on here may be rare. Yeah.<--'tis true
I'm that guy over there who seems to be the 12th Memeber of the Legendary 12.<--who cares anymore, i wasnt even a nice guy at the time (i was 13 at the time)
Y'know, I have infinite lives. (Using UltraGameSharkGenieActionReplayHax!) So, there's no reason to kill me. ;)<--...wha??????
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Re: The Sonic Comic

Postby HyperSonic » November 25th, 2009, 11:45 am

Cant wait to see more mega!I want you to continue the story ;)
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Re: The Sonic Comic

Postby megamario126 » November 25th, 2009, 3:27 pm

Thanks, HS. I know everyone that saw this wanted to see more...but here's the reason that I didn't post more on my previous comments..I could only post 3 pictures on a comment at a time! So, please comment if you want to see more pages of my comic! (If you want to!)

TSC #1 Page 6.jpg
So, what's this 'special surprise', Robotnik? Wait, Dark Demon? Something tells me this isn't right at all...(More anime gestures!)
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TSC #1 Page 7.jpg
Oh crap! It's X-onic! He's just like Sonic--only with Dark powers! (Also, I modified Robotnik's face a bit, to make him look less ugly. Does it look better? (Sorry for the lazy coloring of black...))
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(NOTE: I'LL POST PAGE 8, LATER, OKAY? SO JUST IMAGINE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT.)
See my levels! http://www.runouw.com/forums/viewtopic. ... 5037#p5037<--i may make a comeback to level-making
See my level series! (In progress!) http://www.runouw.com/forums/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=1011<--i still have the work doc for the world names, lvl names, all that
See my YouTube channel! My levels will be posted on there soon! https://www.youtube.com/user/VidGmr1996/videos<-- i lied
See my chatbox! http://www.xat.com/chat/room/76422579/ <--uhh..that's dead
UPDATE (Since March 31th, 2013): Coming on here may be rare. Yeah.<--'tis true
I'm that guy over there who seems to be the 12th Memeber of the Legendary 12.<--who cares anymore, i wasnt even a nice guy at the time (i was 13 at the time)
Y'know, I have infinite lives. (Using UltraGameSharkGenieActionReplayHax!) So, there's no reason to kill me. ;)<--...wha??????
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Re: The Sonic Comic

Postby Avo » November 27th, 2009, 12:14 pm

Great work!!

It's very impressive!!

Keep it up!!!
Credit to Ridder for the awesome going-away avatar (:
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Re: The Sonic Comic

Postby megamario126 » December 3rd, 2009, 5:34 pm

Half-way done with Sonic fighting X-onic!
See my levels! http://www.runouw.com/forums/viewtopic. ... 5037#p5037<--i may make a comeback to level-making
See my level series! (In progress!) http://www.runouw.com/forums/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=1011<--i still have the work doc for the world names, lvl names, all that
See my YouTube channel! My levels will be posted on there soon! https://www.youtube.com/user/VidGmr1996/videos<-- i lied
See my chatbox! http://www.xat.com/chat/room/76422579/ <--uhh..that's dead
UPDATE (Since March 31th, 2013): Coming on here may be rare. Yeah.<--'tis true
I'm that guy over there who seems to be the 12th Memeber of the Legendary 12.<--who cares anymore, i wasnt even a nice guy at the time (i was 13 at the time)
Y'know, I have infinite lives. (Using UltraGameSharkGenieActionReplayHax!) So, there's no reason to kill me. ;)<--...wha??????
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Re: The Sonic Comic

Postby Ridder » December 4th, 2009, 4:58 pm

Hmmm.....well, the facial expressions are fine by me, but the body language is somewhat terrible.
Like on page 7, Sonic is just standing there like he is waiting in line
"What the? How?"
Well, the expression he is making with his body makes it sound like he is reading off a script.
Plus, many characters are facing left or right or some version of it, and it just doesn't look right.

It's okay, but it could be better. 7/10.
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Re: The Sonic Comic

Postby megamario126 » December 4th, 2009, 6:01 pm

Ridder wrote:Hmmm.....well, the facial expressions are fine by me, but the body language is somewhat terrible.
Like on page 7, Sonic is just standing there like he is waiting in line
"What the? How?"
Well, the expression he is making with his body makes it sound like he is reading off a script.
Plus, many characters are facing left or right or some version of it, and it just doesn't look right.

It's okay, but it could be better. 7/10.


Well, it's your opinion. :roll:

Anyways, it's not really a fight, but more like a chase.

TSC #1 Page 8.jpg
Oh noez! Soinc is dead! Why!?! Why!?! Why does have to end so early? He was too young......:(
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TSC #1 Page 9.jpg
Yeeeeeeeeeeesh! Sonic is still alive! All he did is just that he curled up into a ball & hits his clnoe. Yeah, that's you get...;)
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TSC #1 Page 10.jpg
Ahahahahahaha! Sonic, Sonic, Sonic.....
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See my levels! http://www.runouw.com/forums/viewtopic. ... 5037#p5037<--i may make a comeback to level-making
See my level series! (In progress!) http://www.runouw.com/forums/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=1011<--i still have the work doc for the world names, lvl names, all that
See my YouTube channel! My levels will be posted on there soon! https://www.youtube.com/user/VidGmr1996/videos<-- i lied
See my chatbox! http://www.xat.com/chat/room/76422579/ <--uhh..that's dead
UPDATE (Since March 31th, 2013): Coming on here may be rare. Yeah.<--'tis true
I'm that guy over there who seems to be the 12th Memeber of the Legendary 12.<--who cares anymore, i wasnt even a nice guy at the time (i was 13 at the time)
Y'know, I have infinite lives. (Using UltraGameSharkGenieActionReplayHax!) So, there's no reason to kill me. ;)<--...wha??????
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