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Hello! My printer got swapped for one with a scanner so... DRAWINGS!!!



#1: MyWorld Volume 2 Ad








#2: MyWorld Zombie Drawing







#3: MyWorld Membership Card

Nevermind...it's making a INDEX CARD about five feet long.




Next up, my futile attempts for anime drawing.


#4: Dante Baladeva (me)






#5: Fox Demonlover






#6: Boss

They're so CUTE!!! ^_^

Cool artwork! Can't wait to see more!

Like I said before, they look like Pez Dispensers you find on Ebay.
No Neck, Ankles, REAL EARS, Wrists, or anything that doesn't make them look stiff.
The Clouds (are those clouds?) Look like ~ Those, Heads are too round and screwed up, and the faces look all....wrong.


On the bright side, I like your zombie, and your weapons were designed well.

EDIT: NEWEST THREE DEARAWINGS.

ON THE SURFACE:
Definite improvement over the last two drawings.

The people look somewhat taller, it might be some sort of trick my mind is playing on myself, but they definitely don't look like midgets now.
I like how you used quoting next to them so it wouldn't just be focused so much on the drawing itself, and it gives people a little taste on their personality.
Heads, Clothes, Feet, EVERYTHING, nearly EVERYTHING looks better.
Indication of Pockets (except Boss)

For this, I give you clapping.
*Clap, Clap, Clap, Half-Clap*
Three Point Five Claps out of Five equal a 3.5/5 from me.

BELOW THE SURFACE:
Okay, here's where things get rough for you Nero.

They still look like statues, aside from Boss's arched legs and arms, they don't look too good, it would be nice if they weren't standing in a soldier position, with their arms to their sides and their legs together, something........different. I would Imagine something like Dante looking Emo-ish with his left sleeve torn up, with the sleeve pieces in the air still, and his robotic arm showing, I don't know, things like that.
Feet still look like they don't have ankles, Sorry, but even boss's feet look weird. feet are supposed to protrude (Did I use that word right?) out from the pants, not be covered by them, unless they were like, planning to trip over their pants again and again.

The Heads still don't look right, the ears are still missing, except Fox Demonlover, but with the round head, she looks more like a rabbit.
STEREOTYPICAL ANIME FACES FOR THE LOSE.

Whew......that was long.....wait, you think it's over? No, that was just for Overall of the drawings.....get ready, you're about to leave the pan and get yourself into the fire.

DANTE BALADEVA

Mr. Emo-Man, the third picture.

Good:
Nice Haircut, I likes how you look now, drastically, several levels above that other Dante.
HURRAH FOR A JACKET! No really, I'm glad he has one. What else can I find that's good about him? Well, his Scars aren't exaggerated, and he seems to fit the "Emo" Persona quite well, it helps that his Shading hath been done well.

B-B-B-BAD:

Even though I said "Nice Haircut" I can still see the lines that indicate his head, which, in this kind of drawing, makes it look bad. It doesn't help to know that his head is completely positioned wrong, his body is statue still, but his head shows that his neck should be on the right side of the head, see, the right side shows a sort of border between his neck and his chin, but his neck is in the center, making it look like he was decapitated, and a monster tried to reconstruct him. But you know what? He actually has a neck, so I give you points for that.
because his body is positioned so, I can't really tell if those half circles are some sort of augment to his body, or his hood.....
Anyways, Jacket and pants don't meet very well, the jacket perfectly becomes the pants at his waist, showing that his jacket must be tight, but if that was the case, the sleeves would be on his arms like a snake on a bunny. and he would be grabbing for his neck, yelling for "AIR!!! AIR!!!"
Hands.....no wrists.......Well, it certainly looks better but..... There is no joints in those hands, I just noticed, none at all. for a while I thought his robot arm was a gauntlet, the things knights use as part of their armor......you really need to work on the fingers, wrist, and the feet.
Oh, the shoes, did I mention the shoes?
yeah, the day black sacks become the new shoes of today is the day I lose faith in humanity. Sorry, but put some detail into those shoes man.
If not for the pocket indents, I would not know Dante was not wearing a long skirt. honest. You need a zipper, a belt line, and something that would set him far from regular humans.

OVERALL FOR DANTE BALADEVA:

Well, it's got the right stuff, and with little tweaks here and there, He could look like a real BAMF, or just, you know.........an emo.

Fox Demonlover

The Goddamn Furry.

Good:
*Sucks in rage*
Okay....Okay......to find the good in this, I will try.
Hey look at that, a neck! A place for assassins to kill her with! Her whole Head area looks better, her Eyes aren't over sized, She is using a more pleasant expression, Ears aren't too different in size, and I can actually stand looking at this longer than I can stand looking at the older version of her!

....Alright, I'm sorry, but Now is the time to show you a long paragraph.


B-B-B-BAD:

I just really want to scream at you right now.
A furry, one of the most stereotypical non-humans to make besides angels and demons (Modern style, old style, it doesn't matter, it's still a d***** with wings.), really, and I mean REALLY infuriates me.
I believe it was based on the old theory "Adding animal ears and a tail makes something already sexy even more sexier" They aren't used like that anymore, but I sure am pissed that people still believe a furry was ever a good idea.
But if I said that, it would make me sound so..............................Biased.
No really, I don't like it as much as I could have due to that single pair of ears and the tail. Really.

More Baggage to come.

Hey guys. Zero here. I can't get into my profile for some reason so i took over my sister's profile. Anyways, i have new dawings for you all.


KYO





TERRA





and for some topics, you guys might need this.




and here's its link. http://i260.photobucket.com/albums/ii36 ... erious.jpg

Complete awesomness is all I have to say, compared to your old artwork.




I do believe

Wut raddar sahz.

I like the Terra drawing most. Great shading and stuffz. Only thing that looks odd is her left index finger. :s

I cant even draw a dog or a stick figure -.-
GREAT JOB NERO!
:3

Thanks guys. It means alot... especially from Mr. "Critic-that-makes-people-feel-bad". (Ridder)