by Ridder » January 16th, 2010, 9:15 pm
Okay, so, as I promised, here it is.
Minor Gods
Well, I think I'll just go and spit it out.
I don't like it that much.
Again, it seems Ears are not welcome in the Art Museum of Runouw Artists, I mean, really, Ears are a plus and must when it comes to drawing people.
It looks like you tried to give Mongor muscles, but it just doesn't seem to pop out right, It could be hair, scars, heh, even buldges to indicate worms!
The heads seem too round, I mean, if that was what you were going for, okay, but really, I can't take any of them seriously when they look like the shift stick of a car. And the Faces......the noses look like holes, The Hair looks like wigs placed on very badly.
Let's move a bit downwards....
Okay, so, the necks are.......off. You know what I mean, some of them are about as wide as sticks, Necks are supposed to be as big as the head. Collarbones would be nice as well, some of their shoulders look too......you know, circular.
Arms are......off. No Elbows, bad. No wrists that look wright. bad. Fingers........look more like webbed feet of a frog. Now for the beef.
Abs, Breasts, everything in the body area.......don't look right.
The Abs look more like an upside-down T, the bodies are too oddly shaped, Mongor's upper body kind of looks like a big Parentheses when it doesn't have the arms, his lower body.......too small.
And Flightere.....the way his/her face is, s/he looks like a witch, no matter what. and yes, I can't tell if it's a woman/man.
You say Aria should look like a 13 year old girl.....but.... you know, I had no way of knowing that.
Mongor......Mongor, Mongor, Mongor......*tsk tsk tsk*
Flamiere.....well, I can't tell if she's wearing bracelets or some sort of hybrid jacket so.....yeah....
Overall: Could use some work.
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