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ShapeVille

PostPosted: June 15th, 2011, 12:40 pm
by Cyvern
Okay, this comic series is about living shapes. The first three comics will be the intro, and then the rest are pretty normal. Beware: I am not a good artist, so the pictures aren't great. But that makes it even more funny, right? RIGHT?

SV NEWS: The next comic will be out by Friday, and maybe a short one Saturday. But for Sunday-Wednesday I'm on vacation, so expect nothing between those dates. Thursday, I'll introduce something new, so stay tuned! NEWEST COMIC UP! 6/16/11 Also, my computer is not functioning at all right now, so I will be slightly delayed. Sorry, this will be fixed as soon as possible. And thank you for all you comments, they are much appreciated.

COMIC #1: Intro 1/3
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These comics couldn't have been posted without Kirby859's assistance, so some credit, just some, goes to him.

Re: Shapeville

PostPosted: June 15th, 2011, 3:14 pm
by Cyvern
Second Intro!

Note some shapes aren't always like what this says. . .

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Re: ShapeVille

PostPosted: June 15th, 2011, 6:01 pm
by SuperLuigi9624
Oh god. I spit all over my keyboard.

That was hilarious!




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10/10.

Re: ShapeVille

PostPosted: June 15th, 2011, 8:32 pm
by Panik!
I loooove the first one. The second one is okay, though.
And I like the style :D
9/10

Re: ShapeVille

PostPosted: June 16th, 2011, 3:33 pm
by Cyvern
FINAL INTRO! After this, normal comics. Check first post for News updates.

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Re: ShapeVille

PostPosted: June 17th, 2011, 3:45 am
by Asterocrat
Hey, that's good! Congratulations! The first one was very good, I'm gonna give you 9.5/10. The second one was yeah, good, but not as much as the first one, so let's say 8/10. Finally the last one was really good, even if I took time to know what was the final picture, and I got it (I think) it's the red circle from behind (his back) and we see the shape of the Red Cristal coming in fact from his back! (I think it's that). That's giving you... a 9/10 YAY

Average: 9/10 I can't wait for the real comics :awe: Keep going!

Re: ShapeVille

PostPosted: June 17th, 2011, 3:59 am
by Master1.0
You just made me... barf laugh! :awe:

Comic Rating: 0/10 9/10! :troll:

Re: ShapeVille

PostPosted: June 17th, 2011, 4:04 am
by Cyvern
Star king wrote:Hey, that's good! Congratulations! The first one was very good, I'm gonna give you 9.5/10. The second one was yeah, good, but not as much as the first one, so let's say 8/10. Finally the last one was really good, even if I took time to know what was the final picture, and I got it (I think) it's the red circle from behind (his back) and we see the shape of the Red Cristal coming in fact from his back! (I think it's that). That's giving you... a 9/10 YAY

Average: 9/10 I can't wait for the real comics :awe: Keep going!



Yes, you got where the crystal came from. Congratz, I didn't think I made it plain enough. Thanks for the review, and thnks to Panik and LF as well.

EDIT: Thanks to Master as well, didn't see your post, lol.

Re: ShapeVille

PostPosted: June 20th, 2011, 8:08 am
by Karyete
Dude, this stuff's epic awesomeness! TO HECK WITH BATMAN, THIS IS GREAT!(I don't actually read Batman comics..... Good thing I didn't, either!)

Re: ShapeVille

PostPosted: June 22nd, 2011, 4:09 pm
by Genowhirl910
Damn... This is good!


10/10!