Dark Yoshi: 4 + 2 + 3 = 9/20
Comment: The art style has, admittedly, improved since your first couple of comics . I found that there wasn't really a main punchline to go off of or any consistency to the panels other than the numbers. The moral of the story wasn't really funny, and even though many of these events may be true, you didn't apply it in a humerus way. I get that it's supposed to be a Minecraft joke, but it honestly doesn't work very much.
Suyo: 7 + 3 + 3 = 13/20
Comment: The art style is a tad rough, but otherwise clear. I've seen the joke used several times before, and while it's still funny, it's not exactly original. I may have laughed more if you involved Gordon's inability to speak in the crime that is the delay of Half-Life 2 Episode 3.
YB118: 8 + 3 + 3 = 14/20
Comment: Oho ho! This one was a little bit different. While a sprite comic is rather easy to do, it's always possible to rate how well the comic was done. Now, the panels lack proper borders, which makes some of the screens bigger than the rest, which in some cases, it's better if it isn't. The close-ups and afterimage effect are well done The joke and originality may not be the best, but that doesn't deter this from being a good comic.
Star king: 7 + 3 + 4 = 14/20
Comment: This comic was rather well done, The joke is not entirely original, but it still works. Very well, actually. I still have problems with the little white bits surrounding the bagz, they're very noticeable and makes the comic looks rough. The text boxes aren't very stylish, but they're clear and readable. A fine comic indeed.
Doram: 6 + 3 + 5 = 14/20
ARI Comment: Short and to the point, I find this joke to be rather shallow and pedantic original and somewhat humerus. The art style is very original and nice. It lacks depth and seems a bit rough edged in some bits. Not much of a comic, more of a cause&event sort of thing, but it's still pretty good.
Usu: 6 + 1 + 3 = 10/20
Comment: I don't really know why this isn't working. The immediate "comic" at the top is swell and may have worked by itself. The text box and sprites are very well defined.......and yet....... As far as I could see, it was a random jumble of images from the internet and Usuario playing through Touhou, Osu, and an image from Triple Baka. There wasn't really a joke to understand or laugh at after the initial comic defying, and it lacked an ending, for that matter. It seems that it could have been a lot more, Usu, really. keep trying.
Ace: 8 + 2 + 4 = 14/20
Comment: Omfg. Alucard, Y u no do original artwork liek dis? The art style itself was superb, and I assume, original. The whole 4th wall breaking.......not really working. I believe that if you'd made a joke while going with your mom instead of just opting to immediately break the 4th wall, a lot more could have been achieved.
Posted: July 24th, 2011, 3:35 pm
) though, since I've never seen a comic idea like this before.
Wow. Another Surprise First Place. Thank you guys so much. This is awesome. All the entries were great. Wow. Thank you. Just... wow.
