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Re: Marko12's Art!Soon:Comic

Postby Marko12 » June 11th, 2010, 1:19 am

I can't decide what to use for my sprite sheet,so pick one of the colors:blue or grey?
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What is better?the blue one or the grey one?
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I added a detail to the grey fox eyes...
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Re: Marko12's Art!Soon:Comic

Postby Worst_master » June 11th, 2010, 1:26 am

Well, no comics?
Nevermind, the animal (What is this? Cat? mouse?) is great, well, I don't want the grey one, because it is strange because it look like a grey slime. The blue one is better, ut it is too dark blue.
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Re: Marko12's Art!Soon:Comic

Postby Marko12 » June 11th, 2010, 1:32 am

If you read my title,it said Comic:Soon.That means I didn't say it would be right now!I need to get a resource first(a good picture of a gas station somewhere in Germany).
And,the animal is a fox.
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Re: Marko12's Art!Soon:Comic

Postby Marko12 » June 27th, 2010, 6:28 am

Here it is.The comic.I call it:Luigi Lacks Luck.Includes some facts in the last panel of a comic,that comes from various tests of unlucky things that happen to Luigi(in otherwords,the facts are based of Luigi's pain during the comic).

http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/3914/lll1.png

Description:Sonic is worried because he is mostly tortured in comics.But not everything is as it seems...
And,did anyone ask himself how heavy is a Thwomp?
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Re: Marko12's Art!Soon:Comic

Postby Worst_master » June 28th, 2010, 12:30 am

Very good, the brick is good. You also have 4 char, the last char (Thwomp dropped part.) is very funny! I think you may add a block for just giving Lugi's for crunch. You also need to add shadows for each thing. That may fine. The last block is quite annoying and lazy, need improvement, nevermind, ALL THING is already good enopugh.
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Re: Marko12's Art!Soon:Comic

Postby YoshiKid54 » June 30th, 2010, 11:57 pm

Good. Sprites were used well and all of that was well made. I have to say, it was slightly funny. The problem I encountered with thus comic was the words. The Green text was a little bit bright. you could have made it darker.
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Re: Marko12's Art!Soon:Comic

Postby Marko12 » July 1st, 2010, 10:32 pm

Luigi Lacks Luck 2:Thwomp Saga part 2(it will be a short saga)
http://img16.imageshack.us/img16/3637/lll2.png

Description:Luigi encounters the Thwomp again,and tries to avoid him knowing that normal Thwomps can only go down.But was it enough?
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Re: Marko12's Comics!

Postby YoshiKid54 » July 7th, 2010, 5:39 am

It failed. Yep, Luigi needs to learn more about Thwomps. Nice comic Marko12. Nice background and sprites.
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Re: Marko12's Comics!

Postby Marko12 » July 16th, 2010, 10:17 pm

Comic 3:Thwomp Saga Part 3:
http://img695.imageshack.us/img695/8641/lll3.png

Description:Luigi found out that the Thwomp that crunched him,can only go verticaly up after landing.That handicap last for a 4 panels,enough for Luigi to escape.So he hired Mario to run in his
green painted clothes and trick the Thwomp.However,is that enough?

(this one is with shadows,although I think it is not good.Worst_master,go to this link,on the left you can find comic,and tell me,
do you see anyone of these Authors using shadows?!
http://www.mgcomics.com/)
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Re: Marko12's Comics!

Postby YoshiKid54 » July 19th, 2010, 4:14 am

Nice work! My favorite part was Mario's Outfit. It loled, and I loved your recoloring. The colors were exactly the same as Luigi. And yes, loved the original Thwomp Attacks.
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