20th Level Designer Contest

[Doram]

Awww. You spilled the beans on who was who. :p I was hoping to keep the guessing going for a while... Anyways, Yes, I am a major Mario geek, and can do a decent voice impression of him. I hope everybody enjoyed it. Now I just have to clean up the judgings... 3AM work on such things can lead to such havoc.

[MessengerOfDreams]

This post by Buff_ was thumbed up by:

MessengerOfDreams (August 22nd, 2012, 12:31 pm)

[~MP3 Amplifier~]

Great job Doram. I think you were an awesome Mario.

(oh yes and I was so nervous about seeing the results today I couldn't stop saying "Let's go!" and "I'mma tired!" in a Mario accent today :3)

Edit: Oh yeah Buff, it wasn't a deduction for the red coin challenge, it was just that seeing the silver star at the end made the challenge feel pointless. However don't be mistaken- I found the level a whole load of fun, as you can tell. I've never played Yoshi's Island myself so I had to rely on the references that were obvious and given away, like the arrow boosters and the formation of the coins.

[-BY]

My judgings for Wario: show

TLLOSM63:Tiny Huge Island by Pedalpowerluigi

Fun:

Meh. After running endlessly through a really confusing level, really simple platforming and meeting link, I knew already that the level can’t get a really good fun score.
I mean. It took extremely long time to find the silver stars and the bonus level was not really interesting at all. It lacked at enemies. But it has of course ’’good’’ aspects too. It was a really accurate remake of the SM64 level. But not really more. It was not really interesting. I haven’t seen evil bugs that avoid playing the level to the end.

3.5/10 Hmpf.

Graphics:

Lots of cut off through the whole level. And some parts looked complete empty.
Even I think that more plants can sometimes look better. The tile combination was really similar through the whole level. How about slopes or more different tile combinations?
I think the level looked not good at all.

1.25/5 Sigh...

Others:

- 0.75 Lack of coins. I hope I don’t meet you. Coins are the most important part in a level.
- 0.25 Link in a mario themed LDC. I don’t think I have to explain that.
- 0.5 Not player friendly level. Arrows could make it easier to find the way through the level.
+ 0.25 Exact remake. Even when it could be made better.
+ 0.25 A bit of lag and a bit of loading time.

2/5 ...

All 3.5 + 1.25 + 2= 6.75/20

Well. The level needs much improvement. Read the review and I think you find the answers by yourself.



Inscius Memoriam by BrawlerEX

Fun:

Nice gameplay and a good use of power ups. Both levels had neat platforming and puzzles.
Some enemies were used too and it wasn’t too hard to went through the level. But then came the bugs.... I got squished by a too small passage. Maybe because of my awesome playing skills. But that was the only bug I noticed. Well done there thought. Too bad it wasn’t finished.

7/10

Graphics:
Neat Graphics. The use of tile combinations and decoration was great. It felt real.
Only a bit cutoff sometimes. In the beginning for example. The metal cages looked a bit strange sometimes. But I think there was nothing better anyways. Well.

4/5 That was luck!

Others:

+ 0.5 No loading time and not much lag.
+ 0.5 Nice fire spitting piranha plant.
+ 0.5 Original ideas. Platforming for example
-0.5 The end of level 1 from part 2 leaded me into nothing. I didn’t liked that.

4/5

All 7+4+4-16 Muahahahahaha. Ok. 15/20

Great level. Except the things I mentioned is the level well done.
Good job.

I should be mean. :3
And I think you know it is probably the opposite of me. Don't be angry when I was too mean.
Edit: Less grammar mistakes...

[lordpat]

Doram-> Mario: CALLED IT BIATCHES!

Luigi-> MoD/MP3= The first was obvious, the second surprised me! (Oh MP3, in your judgins you are such SUCH a good actress I didn't even notice you were luigi *is shot*)

Wario -> SuYo= Pre-announced

Yoshi -> YB= That was kinda retarded. Just beacause they have Yoshi in their names XD

[MessengerOfDreams]

This post by KevinOC was thumbed up by: 3

MessengerOfDreams (August 22nd, 2012, 6:02 pm) • SuperMIC (August 22nd, 2012, 3:42 pm) • ~MP3 Amplifier~ (August 23rd, 2012, 4:17 am)

[Charcoal]

I placed 9th. What a disappointment.
I've gotta stop being ordinary and show some creativity on my levels.

[~MP3 Amplifier~]

Can we call Kevin the only member to have placed last twice and then win? Just for the lulz? :> And DB 9th isn't so bad especially considering this was a tricky LDC. I placed 9th in a tricky LDC too before. :3

[BrawlerEX]

10th...














in five days...














So technically if I had more time...

[CrazyMario]

At least I got a higher placing than I expected.