25th SM63 Level Designer Contest

[Doram]

This post by Doram was thumbed up by:

Dtroid (September 27th, 2013, 1:22 am)

[Asterocrat]

Judging: show

TRIPLE J
Fun: 7/10
Graphics: 4/5
Other: 3/5
Overall: 14/20

TIMI
Fun: 8/10
Graphics: 4/5
Other: 4/5
Overall: 16

KEVINOC
Fun: 7/10
Graphics: 4/5
Other: 4/5
Overall: 15/20

NWOLF
Fun: 9/10
Graphics: 4/5
Other: 4/5
Overall: 17/20

MP3 AMPLIFIER
Fun: 7.5/10
Graphics: 5/5
Other: 3.5/5
Overall: 16/20

1018PETER
Fun: 7/10
Graphics: 4/5
Other: 4/5
Overall: 15/20

THEENDLESSJOURNEY012
Fun: 7.5/10
Graphics: 3.5/5
Other: 4.5/5
Overall: 15/20

JSLAYERXERO
Fun: 9/10
Graphics: 2/5
Other: 4/5
Overall: 15/20

DTROID:
Fun: 5.5/10
Graphics: 3/5
Other: 3.5/5
Overall: 12/20

KARYETE
Fun: 6.5/10
Graphics: 3/5
Other: 3/5
Overall: 12.5/20

SPROCKET
Fun: 6.5/10
Graphics: 2.5/10
Other: 2.5/5
Overall: 11.5/20

MICROPHONE
Fun: 8/10
Graphics: 3/5
Other: 5/5
Overall: 16/20

YOSHI NNB
Fun: 5/10
Graphics: 1/5
Other: 2/5
Overall: 8/20

DORAM
Fun: 9/10
Graphics: 3/5
Other: 5/5
Overall: 17/20

VOLKOVE
Fun: 7.5/10
Graphics: 3/5
Other: 5/5
Overall: 15.5/20

-KT
Fun: 7.5/10
Graphics: 5/5
Other: 4/5
Overall: 16.5/20

MESSENGEROFDREAMS
Fun: 8.5/10
Graphics: 4/5
Other: 5/5
Overall: 17.5/20

Yes I did them the quick way because I wanted the judging to be as fast as possible. If you want me to expand on your review (and maybe post it in your level post in the Portal if you have one), feel free to PM me. I'll be happy to help. Just know that the main cause for Fun points removal is difficulty and/or shortness (but the latter is a lot rarer), and the Other section usually gets its points from original or just great challenges and additions (ie Bullet Bills runs in Volkove's, or the incredible story in MoD's). Again, if you want why you got 4/5 in Other, PM me.

I'll lock this in 12 hours so there is time for you to leave any comment.

[MessengerOfDreams]

This post by MessengerOfDreams was thumbed up by:

Asterocrat (September 26th, 2013, 10:46 am)

[JSlayerXero]

Suddenly two pages of posts happen when I'm not looking, marvelous. Awww yeah, tanking on the graphics points.

[MICrophone]

I really have no idea how I did that well given how incomplete that level was. Ah well. Not complaining. Maybe next summer I'll actually have the time to do a complete entry. Maybe.

[MessengerOfDreams]

Highest scoring eighth placer ever, actually. It was actually higher scoring than your 2nd placing level in the 6th LDC...

[CedarBranch]

What about mi--*head shot*

[Timi]

Actually surprised that I did that well (rushed entry) 16 points from Star king O.o

Ice-Fire-Temple by Timi
Fun: 4/10 Your level had nice ideas and some were well executed but most of them backfired too. The fire vines made the time switch kinda impossible (just that it's not but it made it pretty annoying), the area where the only ground is platforms with 3 flame towers where you also have to go back because time switch blocking path is kinda annoying because the flame towers and platforms don't work that good together in the way you did it (some timing changes and it would be better though) and the bullet cannons stop shooting bullets if you are too far away and that is where you still need one.
Graphics: 3.75/5 Everything looks fine but lava cut-off ;_;
Other: 3/5 +0.25: Hardly any lag but medium-length loading time
-0.25: Never use the invincibility star with flying Bumpties this way. It glitches.
Overall: 10.75/20

This is intended. You should still have one or two bullets following you when you reach the last platform. I will test that later because I don't have much time right now.

However I agree that the platforms can be quite ... hard ...

[KevinOC]

>2013
>Still not giving Kevin 1st place
>Being this plebeian
>Still using meme arrows

[Harmless]

Well then.

I suppose we have another great LDC to look back to. And no, I'm not talking about Page 20+.