New super mario bros. Runouw !

[klk155]

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youssef (June 25th, 2013, 4:43 pm)

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klk155 (January 13th, 2013, 7:32 pm) • youssef (June 25th, 2013, 4:43 pm)

[klk155]

I'll be reviewing your first level! (I'm working on my own level series so I don't have a lot of time!) (It's a few topics below this one!)

It's great for a first level in the series! It had a lot of scenery. For a first level, it had an easy difficulty. I had fun on my first time playing it. And there wasn't much lag at all! One thing... Though it had a good amount of scenery, you should have been more creative with enemies. (You should have used more than just a few Koopas and Goombas.) And you should have had a story added to the beginning. And your grammar wasn't the best. For your first level you get........

7.5/10! Good Work! Besides the stuff above, your first level in the series was great! Please forgive me if this review was bad. (It's my first.)

thanks for the review , when i have some time il play your series and review too !