24murph's Course Series Remake COMPLETE (19 Courses)

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Re: 24murph's Course Series Remake COMPLETE (19 Courses)

Postby 24murph » November 1st, 2009, 2:23 pm

Kirby_999 wrote:Here's my review!:

Peach's Castle

10/10
Really like the design of it! Awesome!

Mushroom Road

7/10
I like how you put Toad town in it! I love exploring things like cities or towns! Excellent work!

Snowy Mountain

10/10
Like Mushroom Bridge's Toad Town, Snowy Mountain's Penguin Village in a wonderful small town full of jolly penguins. Just Loved it!

Shy Guy's Dessert

6/10

I just really don't get it. I figured how to pass the level in like 3 tries! Overall the pyramid was confusing, I ran outta water, and liked the whole thing almost!

Boss Fight 1

8/10
Fairly easy! But you used lots of tiles and it didn't lag! That was the most surprising part! Awesome!

Boo's Mansion

10/10
It reminds me of my Boo's Mansion! I think you should add nothing else to it since it's so great!

Underground Cave!

1001/1000
My favourite of them all!
It's just like a big maze!

Cheep Cheep Ocean

5/10

It was really hard, so I coudn't finish it... Good anyways..

Boss Fight 2

7/10

Fairly easy again. But good level making skills!

Peach's Castle
10/10

This time you just added lava which made it look so much better!

Bully's Fire Feild

10/10 I love this one!

Bully's Castle

10/10

Just darn awesome! You made it look so confusing I had to do one part over and over again to get it right!

The Final Rush

10/10

I liked the astroied field. That was the difficult part about this level. You had no Fludd at the beginning! Sweet H2O!

Boss Fight 3

I think you should lower it a little, so it dosen't take as long.:D
Overall Good!

Well yeppers! That's my review! Hoped it was good! I'll be responding to your future levels too!



Thanks for the review! Sorry about how long this took for me to reply, my computer screwed up and I was nailed with home work.

Peach's Castle:
Just a simple intro level to the level series. I made over ten different castles, and this looked the best.

Mushroom Road:
This level was based off my first three levels off my original level series, Thanks.

Snowy Mountain:
Once again, this level is based off my next three levels from my original series. Yes, It is sort of like Toad Town, expect it snowy.

Shy Guy's Dessert:
This is really one of my favorite level formats. Its really simple: First you find Turbo FLUDD, then Hover FLUDD, then Rocket FLUDD, and then collect the Silver Stars. I
used this format in the 4th level designer contest.

Boss Fight 1:
It doesn't lag because I use alot of level transitions, and large gabs. I didn't have boss fights in my old level series.

Boo's Mansion:
I think this is my greatly remade level. Surprisingly, this was my first remade level!

Underground Cave:
Believe it or not, this is my least favorite level. Why? I didn't use "curves" in it...

Cheep Cheep Ocean:
I though this was going to be my best level... I was wrong. I didn't really think of this idea, my little brother did!

Mushroom Bridge:
You didn't review this level? I think it is because it might have crashed the game, or you got a message. If you get a message about abode, click no. The level should work
perfect! This is my favorite level I ever made, sadly, this is going to be the only level in my 2nd Course series that will not be in it again.

Boss Fight 2:
Yes, easy. Better then my other Boss Fight 2 I made before this one, it sucked.

Peach's Castle:
My second favorite level! I wanted to remade it hard because it is way to easy.

Bully's Fire Field:
Just a hard lava level, in my original course series, right now, the level started to suck.

Bully's Castle:
This is my third favorite level! Plus, I used the base of this level into my 2nd level designer contest level, that won 1st with Krazy.

The Final Rush:
The name is from Sonic's final level on his story in Sonic Adventure 2 Battle.

Boss Fight 3:
Nah, I am not going to lower it, that will made it too easy. The format of this level is your falling and avoiding every thing until you get the bottom were the boss is, and with the life that you have, you fight him!

Once again, I am sorry for taking so long, and thanks for the review... again!
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Re: 24murph's Course Series Remake COMPLETE (19 Courses)

Postby Canine » November 7th, 2009, 3:40 pm

No problem 24murph ;) . I understand that it took a long time, and mine took a long time, but overall it was great!
:) I also noticed where FLUDD is ;)
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Re: 24murph's Course Series Remake COMPLETE (19 Courses)

Postby Drksteel » November 8th, 2009, 9:04 am

i foucus on those key's too. but i can't make it not too laggy! >.< i put in enmies.... like 10-20 of em... BAM! laggy my courses are good.... but laggy.your levels inspiere me.
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Re: 24murph's Course Series Remake COMPLETE (19 Courses)

Postby 24murph » December 26th, 2009, 12:33 pm

O: I bumped this thread from the grave!
But anyway, I did it JUST in case anyone wanted to look at them for more "24 ideas" for the 5th LD Contest.
(BTW: I reread very ones reviews, ^_^ )
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Re: 24murph's Course Series Remake COMPLETE (19 Courses)

Postby NanTheDark » November 21st, 2014, 5:06 am

24murph, why did you remove your levels?
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Re: 24murph's Course Series Remake COMPLETE (19 Courses)

Postby MessengerOfDreams » November 21st, 2014, 5:09 am

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Re: 24murph's Course Series Remake COMPLETE (19 Courses)

Postby NanTheDark » November 21st, 2014, 5:45 am

No idea, I just came here and the levels were gone, replaced with lyrics of Crush 40's Live Life! (awesome song btw) What the hell?
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Re: 24murph's Course Series Remake COMPLETE (19 Courses)

Postby Supershroom » November 21st, 2014, 5:56 am

and lol now it looks like shameless postcounting

that's just unexplainable and sad, so bring them back!
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Re: 24murph's Course Series Remake COMPLETE (19 Courses)

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Original: Your Hand in Mine
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Re: 24murph's Course Series Remake COMPLETE (19 Courses)

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Postby ~MP3 Amplifier~ » November 21st, 2014, 2:36 pm

Its not so much the levels missing that's upsetting for me. Its more that, I wonder what drove him to want to delete them. Its sad, I hope he's at least saved the codes for himself because those were masterpieces.
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