Super Mario Sunshine the Series

[Boidoh]

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SuperLuigi9624 (July 7th, 2011, 7:43 am) • Zacky (July 8th, 2011, 7:11 am)

[Blablob]

You need three levels to start a series.

[Boidoh]

Ive just finished putting up the 2 other levels.. Im thinking of ideas right now.

[Zacky]

How do you get those picture of your levels? It would help me on my topic.

[Boidoh]

How do you get those picture of your levels? It would help me on my topic.

I clicked upload attatchment at the bottom then i went to the link where it was from then i clicked properties of the image then i took the link from the properties then put it in this

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And can you review my series?

[Zacky]

How do you get those picture of your levels? It would help me on my topic.

I clicked upload attatchment at the bottom then i went to the link where it was from then i clicked properties of the image then i took the link from the properties then put it in this

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And can you review my series?

Okay, I will, but I ment how did GET the picture, not how you put it on here. Should I play SM63 on runouw.com or someplace else? And I'll start the review RIGHT NOW.

[Boidoh]

How do you get those picture of your levels? It would help me on my topic.

I clicked upload attatchment at the bottom then i went to the link where it was from then i clicked properties of the image then i took the link from the properties then put it in this

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And can you review my series?

Okay, I will, but I ment how did GET the picture, not how you put it on here. Should I play SM63 on runouw.com or someplace else? And I'll start the review RIGHT NOW.

Play ANY SM63 FROM ANY SITE. If you have a pc use ctrl and print screen then paste it on paint. You can also cut some stuff off if you only need a small piece.

[Zacky]

Okay, review time!!!!
Mushroom Airstrip (fixed version): 7/10
Well, there is still cutoff. Didn't I PM the cutoff/not cutoff level to you? The Polluted Bully was cool, but you should've made the rotation speed of the blocks zero.
Delfino Airstrip/ Delfino Plaza: 6/10
Still some cutoff. You should probably fix your grammar and spelling errors. I liked the fruit store and how you could brake the "T". I destroyed and the sign said "Frui" But the silver stars didn't really serve a point.
Delfino Plaza (Shine Gate): 6/10
I noticed you didn't erase some mistakes you made. The Fruit Store's doors are annoyingly confusing and there is no way to kill the bullies. Is this even the same store? Also, the player was never even at the shine gate much.
Delfino Plaza (Fruit Store): 7/10
A little too little space at the start. I'm also getting a little sick of the fruit shop idea. But the quality looked much better.
Shadow Mario Strikes: 7/10
Okay, this was good. A little too easy though.
Bianco Hills: 8/10
Wow, Petey is crazy! Adds extra points to counter cutoff . Pinita statue was epic.
Red Coins @ Bianco Hills: 7/10
Not much to say.
P.P. Strikes Again: 8.5/10
Slopes have been added, but there's still cutoff.
Secret of the Windmill: 7.5/10
Pretty much same as last time, except Petey's easier.
Shadow Mario Strikes Again: 7/10
Just too easy.
Rico Harbor: 8.5/10
Well, you finally are using background tiles . I don't know how to win this though....

FINAL SCORE: 47.5/110 (double check the calculations)
I hope this review was helpful, and I have one favor to ask from you:

Favor: show

Please review my series? Look at my sig.

THANKS!!! P.S. try to fix up levels later and I will change this review to match new copies.

[Republic]

Stop calling people to review your series. >_> It's kinda annoying.

Level to be reviewed: Mushroom Airstrip

FUN: 2/10

Oh dear, it is not really fun. First of'all, the level lags well. You may add some level transition. Secondly, you may make your objective or story clearer, I don't understand what do you mean and the objective of the level. >_> On the other hand, you've put way too many enemies in the house and cause an epic lag. They didn't make hard challenges but they produce lots of lagging.


Thirdly, the level is fill in with many inappropriate items, like some star which is useless, and some clocks. They oughtn't to place here. Some interactive tiles are also located there unsuitably.

Lemme go to the "airship" area. What have you done? You just paced some cheep cheep in it, is it a swimming pool? Am I supposed to swim around? I think you may add some challenges inside. It is over tedious. Also, after that, there's an airship which include nothing. Actually it is not an airship anyway, it is just a broken ship. At least, please, I'm really unsatisfactory with that, put some enemies, this level is really appropriate for time wasters. >_>

Finally I got to the airship right? I do not understand why you put bunches of fludd which are not all really helpful. They're not decorations. You shall not make level for fludd, but place fludd for level. They're not supposed to put it here. (Not all of them) After that, I saw some bully, remember, bully isn't a boss. If you use bully as boss, it is an epic fail and ruin the whole level. (Although the level is ruined quite well.) Bully isn't an boss, it is only enemy, Multiple bullies are just annoying and tedious, and of course, lack of originality. After climbing up, I saw crapload of enemies, you put too many there. But there is no enemies on the top areas. So you don't place them very evenly. And you place too many inappropriate items and cause lag again. Okay, really, finally I see the star and two bullies. Bullies are not bosses. They're enemies, don't use them as bosses, they don't have that power. >_> And a bullet bill without setting, you may set it well. Okay, that ends, but what have I done?

I don't enjoy it at all. Now you're going to fix it. >_> Please read "overall".

GRAPHICS: 0/5

Firstly, the placement of the items is very bad, the boos in the house nearly stick to gather in an irregular pattern. The enemies are like waves, they are groups but not evenly placed. Even though you have place them like mad. >_> For solution, just delete some inappropriate items and enemies, mix, yes mix, mix, mix, mix enemies together evenly, don't make them assemble in a corner. Secondly, the level are placed with cut-off, the jungle tiles are all cut-off, they're floating in mid-air, you didn't even give some effort. There are no, no any decorations in the level. The bonus like mushrooms are also located quite inappropriately. They're too easy to get. The jungle tiles are all without slopes and cliff, you didn't draw a good landscape. A normal, realistic landscape should include some slopes and cliff. And of course some trees which you never plant.

After that, that is the airship. The airstrip isn't an airstrip anyway. It is just a red brick mixture. The red bricks are also floating in the mid-air. Oh dear. Please delete all red brick, make a better airstrip. It doesn't looks like an airship at all. I don't think anyone can imagine it is an airship.

OTHERS: 1/5

- Few typos and grammatical mistake
- Some unreasonable items, for example, bunches of mushrooms.

Please fix the typos, ("airstrip, etc.) and delete some "!", they're annoying. You're like yelling in a library.

OVERALL: 3/20

Oh my god, this is really a awful level. Firstly, to reduce lag, you may sever up the inside area and outside area. Basically it is not quite logical. Not sensible at all. After that, decorate the house well with CASTLE tile, not BRICKS tile. It is more beautiful. And remove all interactive tile, after they're demolished, the pipe is floating in the air oddly. They don't looks very good and sensible. Then, delete some inappropriate boos and merge them NOT in pattern and NOT in a group. So you can reduce some lagging too. After merging, you may make some SLOPES and HILLY CLIFFS on the jungle, as a recommendation. Please also lengthen the level a bit, it is quite short.

Finally, remake the airstrip area.
1) Delete the creepy airstrip with ice blocks, it doesn't looks like an airstrip, like ruins. Replace with snow#2 cabin blocks. And set some platforms for "air".
2) Remove all unreasonable non-acceptable terrible horrible deplorable bullies and all enemies, replace them evenly.
3) Add a block-based boss you like. No bullies.

By the way, I vomited after I saw dah airship JK

Hope I can help you, it is just my guide. ^.^

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I'm quite unsympathetic to you, since 8 bit Dude mess up his score, all levels score is upper average but the final score is lower than average. Self-explanatory. >_>

EDDIE: @ down: Are you saying that sarcastically?

Even though you said it is "aitstrip", but I still don't think it is a one, and "cut-off" is some pointless tiles like being cut and the side are creepy.

[Master1.0]

Oh Jesus WTF?!

This series rating is about as correct as Republic gets. Here, do you need the tutorial you can find here on special effects?

Trust me, it can be really helpful, and I have all this in my head now.

And if you want any tutorials you don't think are in there, PM me and I'll tell you about it.

Anyways, use some of the tricks from the guide up there. I'm sure it can be super helpful!