Super RazorBoy7667 Galaxy

[Nwolf]

Okay... After I already told you about the Daredevil Run, why shouldn't I review the Battery Block Galaxy?

Fun: 7.5/10 The level isn't bad, nothing to say against that. But there is nothing really special, it's just... a simple Jump'n'run level.

Graphics: 3/5 So... only the platform in the tower is missing!

Other: 3/5 (I'm so stupid, I started with 2 instead of 3. x999 Thanks Rep for telling me...)
+0.5: I like the name. (GMclocks, Nclocks, )
-1: The platforms at the beginning still make two little holes.
+0.5: The Daredevil Run is (almost) finished! But I won't give you 1 point, cause I did the beginning.

Overall: 13.5/20 Now it's almost above average. (3.5 is above average... or not? 13.5=3.25 in the LP) Just... do something against the bad points.

So... that was my part. After I edited it. Again.

[GMDragon11]

Thanks for the review Nworlds. I know I copyed Nclocks(the tilte) but wasn't that made like 3 months ago. I can't posbilly remeber that Nclocks was made.


Here is the new and better version.

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And the comet. I took the coins.

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So again. Thanks for the reivew.

[Mr_SaxMan]

Sorry guys, gonna have to delete the argument posts. Remember not to argue on somebody's level series page.

Also.

HEHE! It's funny cause GM misspelled "Dump." Oh this is hilarious I'm going to get wasted no- *is shot*
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[Nwolf]

@Gm: If it helps, I could make a beginning for the Daredevil Run (Battery Block Galaxy) for you and PM it to you. (Cause... currently the Daredevil is none and this just because of the beginning. )

@Sax: WTF? LAVA?!

[GMDragon11]

@Gm: If it helps, I could make a beginning for the Daredevil Run (Battery Block Galaxy) for you and PM it to you. (Cause... currently the Daredevil is none and this just because of the beginning. )

@Sax: WTF? LAVA?!

Okay Nworlds. Thank you

[Zacky]

Delete the posts? Okay, good. I was planning to do that anyway.
And I'd like some darned lava NOW plz.

[Mr_SaxMan]

@Sax: WTF? LAVA?!

You know you want to order right now.

[GMDragon11]

@Sax: WTF? LAVA?!

You know you want to order right now.

Ya I wanna have some LAVA. I NEED it byAugust 11!


I wannnnnnnnnnnnnaaaaaa have LavaNow

[Mr_SaxMan]

You haven't called yet. -_-

Also, just to tell you, I don't mean to be offensive at all. But I see in your sig, if you think you're the best level designer, you need to get it all straight. We barely know who the real one is, it's EXTREMELY EXTREMELY hard to get to the top these days. Believe me, you're pretty good, but not the BEST EVER.

[GMDragon11]

You haven't called yet. -_-

Also, just to tell you, I don't mean to be offensive at all. But I see in your sig, if you think you're the best level designer, you need to get it all straight. We barely know who the real one is, it's EXTREMELY EXTREMELY hard to get to the top these days. Believe me, you're pretty good, but not the BEST EVER.

I just you know pretending.

Your sig, Bro Why does it say F*CK in the Pac-man sound. Why the hell are you sewaring . Plus you are just prentending to have lava. Right. YOU REALLY CAN't sell lava.