So... the review on your level Death Trap Galaxy is here!
Fun: 7.5+3/2=5.25/10 Guess what the 3 is? You're right, it's the Daredevil Run.
We start from the beginning: A koopa damages you, you jump into lava two times: The Daredevil Run started. You go through pipe and what happens? You get killed by the Boo cause he is flying in the exit.

. We go to the Sling Star. You spin and land in the water area. No enemies. I know, I said no coin-giving enemies. But I said you should replace them with Boos, Bullies, etc. In that case: Bullet Bill. They don't give coins, too. They fit PERFECTLY in that part. So... now you need Jump'n'Run skills. And we go to the Bowser Block platform. There is lava. Fine, but... no Bullies? They are missing here. They would make a challenge out of this part. Jump'n'Run skills again, the Bullies throw you down, you need to start over.

No... actually after the Bowser Block platform I'm happy.
Graphics: 2.5/5 So... nothing special but something I don't like: The lava in the Dardevil Run is floating. And no, in the Battery Block Galaxy Daredevil Run was no floating lava.

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Other: 3/5 +0.5: The trap near the end is like "WTF?!" but it fits to the galaxy's name.
-0.5: You said the beginning of the Daredevil Run is like in the Battery Block Galaxy. Like I did it. All I can say is: Nope. Lava. Will. Never. Float. In. A. Level. Made or edited by me. Again.
Overall: 10.75/20 What you can do better?
The normal level: Nothing. I can't see anything that could be better in this level. It's not perfect. You can see this in the score. But again, it's not bad. But it's not perfect. It's average - a little bit above average.
The Daredevil Run: Give the lava some feet on the ground. It probably hates to fly. A put some more Bullet Bills in the water area and Bullies on the Bower Block platform. Place the Big Boo somewhere else, where he doesn't fly into the player. That's all.
And that was my part. No.2