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Re: Super Gmdragon11 Galaxy

Postby Zacky » August 8th, 2011, 8:30 am

gmdragon11 wrote:Why the hell are you sewaring :x .

Umm..."hell" is considered a swear word in some places. So you were complaining about him swearing...while you were swearing. :lol:
Can I add the quote to my sig? :troll:
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Re: Super Gmdragon11 Galaxy

Postby GMDragon11 » August 8th, 2011, 8:40 am

Can I add the quote to my sig? :troll:



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Re: Super Gmdragon11 Galaxy

Postby Nwolf » August 8th, 2011, 8:48 am

So... the review on your level Death Trap Galaxy is here!

Fun: 7.5+3/2=5.25/10 Guess what the 3 is? You're right, it's the Daredevil Run.

We start from the beginning: A koopa damages you, you jump into lava two times: The Daredevil Run started. You go through pipe and what happens? You get killed by the Boo cause he is flying in the exit. :o_O: . We go to the Sling Star. You spin and land in the water area. No enemies. I know, I said no coin-giving enemies. But I said you should replace them with Boos, Bullies, etc. In that case: Bullet Bill. They don't give coins, too. They fit PERFECTLY in that part. So... now you need Jump'n'Run skills. And we go to the Bowser Block platform. There is lava. Fine, but... no Bullies? They are missing here. They would make a challenge out of this part. Jump'n'Run skills again, the Bullies throw you down, you need to start over. :troll: No... actually after the Bowser Block platform I'm happy.

Graphics: 2.5/5 So... nothing special but something I don't like: The lava in the Dardevil Run is floating. And no, in the Battery Block Galaxy Daredevil Run was no floating lava. :o_O: x2

Other: 3/5

+0.5: The trap near the end is like "WTF?!" but it fits to the galaxy's name.
-0.5: You said the beginning of the Daredevil Run is like in the Battery Block Galaxy. Like I did it. All I can say is: Nope. Lava. Will. Never. Float. In. A. Level. Made or edited by me. Again.

Overall: 10.75/20 What you can do better?

The normal level: Nothing. I can't see anything that could be better in this level. It's not perfect. You can see this in the score. But again, it's not bad. But it's not perfect. It's average - a little bit above average.

The Daredevil Run: Give the lava some feet on the ground. It probably hates to fly. A put some more Bullet Bills in the water area and Bullies on the Bower Block platform. Place the Big Boo somewhere else, where he doesn't fly into the player. That's all.

And that was my part. No.2
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Re: Super Gmdragon11 Galaxy

Postby Harmless » August 8th, 2011, 8:53 am

Buy some lava.
Expect something cool here soon!

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Re: Super Gmdragon11 Galaxy

Postby Nwolf » August 8th, 2011, 9:01 am

I played it and the lava is floating. It ALMOST looks like in the Battery Block Galaxy, but it's not the same. In the Battery Block Galaxy the lava isn't floating. :troll:
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Re: Super Gmdragon11 Galaxy

Postby GMDragon11 » August 8th, 2011, 9:39 am

:facepalm: I don't even know what you are talking about...

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Re: Super Gmdragon11 Galaxy

Postby GMDragon11 » August 8th, 2011, 9:42 am

Nworlds wrote:I played it and the lava is floating. It ALMOST looks like in the Battery Block Galaxy, but it's not the same. In the Battery Block Galaxy the lava isn't floating. :troll:





Oh I get it.
Sorry about the mistake. I rechecked it.

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Re: Super Gmdragon11 Galaxy

Postby GMDragon11 » August 11th, 2011, 6:45 am

It has been 3 days and nobody is saying anything. What to do.

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Re: Super Gmdragon11 Galaxy

Postby Nwolf » August 11th, 2011, 6:59 am

Maybe you could redo the Daredevil Run in the Death Trap Galaxy. (Look at my review)

And if you think 3 days of no one saying anything is long, look at my level series topic. 2-3 weeks are now gone and no one said something. And Harmless needs to edit his review (If he still plays the levels.). So... do you still think 3 days are long? I don't. I don't even say 3 weeks are long. I just make the levels and hope that someone plays them. That's the only thing I do.
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Re: Super Gmdragon11 Galaxy

Postby GMDragon11 » August 11th, 2011, 9:08 am

Nworlds wrote:Maybe you could redo the Daredevil Run in the Death Trap Galaxy. (Look at my review)




The only thing you talk about is daredevil runs. :lol: I mean it is just weird. :o_O: In this topic,that is like the only thing you talk about.

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