Super RazorBoy7667 Galaxy

[Nwolf]

I'll review your level FROZEN MAGMA GALAXY

FUN: 5+6+4=5/10 Star1+2: The level is nice, nothing special, nothing bad. It's just there. But there is a shortcut leading to the secret sprite.
star 3: Same as the level before. But did you know that Purple Coin missions have 100 coins?
Star 4: There are 3 shortcuts. Every time it goes down. Just jump down. again. And again, it's nice, nothing special, nothing bad.

GRAPHICS: 1.5+4=2.75/5 Star 1-3: Only two trees. One in the lava. Little amount of coins. And there's floating lava again. (Or I'm too stupid to know that it has something to do with the snow/clouds and the platform) But after that there's my worst nightmare: Lava Cut-off. Again I know, this level was made before I reviewed the Battery Block Galaxy and before the Death Trap Galaxy. But really, were you too lazy at that time to make a wall? or something else to give the lava two ends?
Star 4: The graphics were better. No cut-off. And trees in the snow zone.

OTHER: 1.7/5
-0.5 On the sign you say there's a penguin but I see no penguin. He jumped into the water.
-0.05: You wrote reday instead of ready. (Sh*t happens)
-1: I hate it. It's like the Bully Platform in the Battery Block Galaxy. But worse. You can jump to the secret sprite. Really easily. And it's easy to find with zooming out.
-0.5: Purple coin missions in SMG 1+2 have at least 100 purple coins.
+0.75: The idea of the Ice volcano was good. And the secret star itself was great, too. If there wouldn't be a shortcut.

Overall: 9.45/20 So, first: The relativly low score isn't there because there is no Daredevil Run.

1: I hate to see that it's the 3rd galaxy with lava cut-off or floating lava. And I only played 3 Galaxies.
2: If you have SMG you should know that the Purple Coin missions are a replacement for the 100 yellow coin missions in SM64 and SMS. So, why are there 61 coins?
3: For the penguin, just disable a penguin or place a flying penguin next to the sign.
4: Test your level(s) before submitting. And try to get rid of all shortcuts which shouldn't be there. They can take the fun away, cause sometimes a longer path is better than a short one.

So, you know what you shouldn't do anymore, now make a great final level for W4. (Not like the one in W3.)

That was my part. x3

[GMDragon11]

So... the review on your level Death Trap Galaxy is here!

Fun: 7.5+3/2=5.25/10 Guess what the 3 is? You're right, it's the Daredevil Run.

We start from the beginning: A koopa damages you, you jump into lava two times: The Daredevil Run started. You go through pipe and what happens? You get killed by the Boo cause he is flying in the exit. . We go to the Sling Star. You spin and land in the water area. No enemies. I know, I said no coin-giving enemies. But I said you should replace them with Boos, Bullies, etc. In that case: Bullet Bill. They don't give coins, too. They fit PERFECTLY in that part. So... now you need Jump'n'Run skills. And we go to the Bowser Block platform. There is lava. Fine, but... no Bullies? They are missing here. They would make a challenge out of this part. Jump'n'Run skills again, the Bullies throw you down, you need to start over. No... actually after the Bowser Block platform I'm happy.

Graphics: 2.5/5 So... nothing special but something I don't like: The lava in the Dardevil Run is floating. And no, in the Battery Block Galaxy Daredevil Run was no floating lava. x2

Other: 3/5

+0.5: The trap near the end is like "WTF?!" but it fits to the galaxy's name.
-0.5: You said the beginning of the Daredevil Run is like in the Battery Block Galaxy. Like I did it. All I can say is: Nope. Lava. Will. Never. Float. In. A. Level. Made or edited by me. Again.

Overall: 10.75/20 What you can do better?

The normal level: Nothing. I can't see anything that could be better in this level. It's not perfect. You can see this in the score. But again, it's not bad. But it's not perfect. It's average - a little bit above average.

The Daredevil Run: Give the lava some feet on the ground. It probably hates to fly. A put some more Bullet Bills in the water area and Bullies on the Bower Block platform. Place the Big Boo somewhere else, where he doesn't fly into the player. That's all.

And that was my part. No.2

Holy crap. That was a easier version. Because I really wanted to see the level. I put the Mario and the end. But I edited it.
So check it out,unless you have played the version where Mario is at the begining because I don't remeber when I edited it to the good version

[Zacky]

Maybe you should change the name to "Super RazorBoy Galaxy". 'Cuz, well, you know.

[GMDragon11]

You are right. Done