Paper Mario Time Revolution

[Bomberman101]

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Parts are:
P-1
P-2
and P-3.
This is my first level series so don't be too harsh ok? Also if I did something wrong tell me!

[Pencilmaster]

Nice! I like it. The cave needs a bit more cavey tiles, because it doesnt look that right. New levels soon?

[Zacky]

L-1

Fun: show

Honestly, I could beat this level far under 40 seconds. There is pretty much no challenge in it at all. It is also very annoying that there is no way possible to kill the big bullies.
Grade: 2/10

Graphics: show

Okay, so I get out of Mario's house thinking "alright, could use a little work, but not bad", and then I walk out of the transition and think-scream to myself "WHAT THE PEANUTS!?!?!". Obviously, you don't know how to make castles in this game, because the look more like mutated letters of the alphabet than any structure I've ever seen. Also, there is cutoff near the shine. There are not any plants, either.
Grade: 2/10

creativity: show

...Um...wow. Maybe the plot is sort of creative, but that does not matter to me, only the gameplay does.
Grade: 1/10

Final Grade: 5/30

Look, I know this is your first level series and all, but try going back and editing it a bit. Fix up those mistakes.
I can also PM you an edited version of L-1 to show you how it's done.
Also, might I request changing the name to "Super Mario Time Revolution" because there is nothing "paper" about the series.

[Bomberman101]

Thanks! And can you pm me an edited version of l-1?

Nice! I like it. The cave needs a bit more cavey tiles, because it doesnt look that right. New levels soon?

I may not make new levels in the forum. But I will make them in the level portal.