The Boss Series: Mario's Regret

[BluePikmin11R]

Rate these levels, I worked hard to make it feel like a boss

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[Harmless]

While I understand that you are new here, it is recommended that you should not ask people to play your levels, because sometimes it kinda bothers them. Yet it's ok, I'm up for giving a review for what is up currently.

First Level (The 'II Ack Holk): 4/10. The level was pretty short, and, being honest, a little easy. I also saw a lot of cut-off tiles (Tiles that don't "agree" with each other in making landscape or such), such as in the beginning and throughout the level, which seriously cut down the overall rating. Also, there were no coins or decorations to go along with the "boss" (if any, I really didn't see one...).

Second Level (Drillgondar): 8/10. Major improvement from the previous level. Fun and challenging, yet some questions came up when playing.

- Why did you have that invincibility star in the middle? It severely cut down the difficulty, making it less enjoyable.

- Maybe limit the Hover Fludd by giving you it before you enter the boss, thus making it so you can't reach it again?

- The boss stayed on the ground the whole time, yet a lot of the space was near the top of the level. Focus some enemy attacks and such near there.

Also, I saw some in-placed coins. They made the difficulty just right (except for the various points mentioned above).

Third level (Bouldergeist Vita): 6/10. Ouch. Ouch. Ouch. OUCH. I died the first two times I played this, because of the sudden boulder that came in and killed me instantly. Seriously, at least make some warning or something in a boss level before you get pummeled to death. But at least it was somewhat fun/challenging, but I seriously expected more air-attacks/traps, because that's where all the silver stars were. Pretty much similar to the previous review on Drillgondar.

Other notes:

- However, on the other hand, I have to give you points for creative bosses. (+2)

- Umm... creative names? (+0.5)

- Please imput a storyline if you want this to be a successful level series. Level series are a series of levels that usually follow a storyline of some sort, along with the actions and such in those levels. You can include it in the description of your level series (basically in the post where you have all of your levels), or even in the level itself, your choice. (-3)

Overall, you scored a...

17.5/30! Not bad for your first time here, but improvements as shown above can really strengthen your Level Designing experience/talent. You seriously show some strong points on creativity and design of the bosses though.

[BluePikmin11R]

Thank you for reviewing this.. I haven't had a real review since I joined here.... Also I will improve on making it feel like a boss....

[Harmless]

No problem.

But about the plotline and such, unless if you just want these as various stages for fun (in this case you would move this to the "levels" topic), I would suggest adding a storyline and such.