GOOD POINTS:
+ I really like the idea, it's a brilliant SM63 game. I really like it.
+ I like those green platforms - you've made it so people really want to avoid them so they concentrate on the cannons more. And plus it's a good obstacle.
BAD POINTS:
- The game is very laggy which makes it difficult to shoot out of the cannons.
- It's almost impossible to get through that breakable brick wall with the amount of lag in level 2. I had to stop the game there - which was a shame.
- I also noticed in some other rooms that there was a lot of signs, you might need to try reducing them.
IMPROVEMENT POINTS:
= In the future, maybe take out some of the green platforms - that's what seems to be causing the lag.
= And because of this the breakable brick wall might be more achievable.
Overall, I think your level achieved... 14/20!








