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[Buff_]

I have fixed your first post. Please post all your stand alone levels in here from now on.

Please read the level posting rules.

[~MP3 Amplifier~]

Hey I've decided to review your level:

GOOD POINTS:

+ It was fun for the short while it lasted.
+ It was enjoyable zooming around with the Turbo FLUDD!

BAD POINTS:

- It was really short and easy.
- There wasn't much decoration, just very boring.
- It wasn't a very original idea, and plus, it needs to be more like a maze and much longer.

IMPROVEMENT POINTS:

= Add an interesting background with some decorations rather than just bland bricks.
= Get a more original idea.

Overall, I think your level scored... 11.5/20!

[Republic]

Okay, Lemme Reply to this level.

Level to be reviewed: The Fludd Race(Turbo Maze)

FUN: 1.5/10
You completely failed here. Why? I've to disapprove MP3 here.

Firstly, there's no guidelines to the level, I even don't know what I've to suppose to do. What shall I do? Get the fludd and travel around? At least put a sign and tell people what should we do. We're not just playing level for shine sprites or what, we're playing levels for fun. We're not just going to check whether the level is playable or not, we're playing for the objective. Since you've no objective. You're just trying to imitate some other used ideas like "Maze", "Fludd Race". When you made this level, it shown that you're just copying ideas. Lack of originality is the biggest objective of your level. Right? >_>

Secondly, look at what have you done first. You just tried to draw lines/ hold blue brick tiles to draw an irregular, actually I can say it is "horrible" maze, without anything. You look, there's no challenging puzzles at all, the platforms can be counted by all my fingers. There're no obstacles for me to challenge. I've to disagree it is a "maze" too. You look, you just give out 3 roads, it can be only classified as "Choose a road" type level. Is that enough? A maze is supposed to be craploads of way, a way is severed up to more ways, until you find the real way. That's a type of illusion, but this level is not, you've just tried to make a "maze" with 3 roads, without anything have been added.

Thirdly, you said it is a turbo race, but I can finish it without the turbo, than what's the point of giving us the turbo, if I'm not supposed to use the turbo fludd, why you give us the turbo? I can only say you tried to force the level to be a "turbo"-fludd-based level. You've no point at all.

Fourthly, yes, lack of originality. This ideas have been used, at least you may add more than one type of idea, instead of just making a "maze". Don't you think it is tedious? For example, when you find a "road" is wrong, it is quite tedious, but if it is a "maze", it doesn't. Why you're not going to try the platforms? There're enough types for you to choose, are you really 'fraid with them or you want to get much reputation by making those levels? You just tried to spam some enemies and put some ugly platform on your level terribly. I cant stand it at all.
(Much, not "more", I'm not talking the pre-thump-up period, but the post-reputation period)
Graphics: 0.5/5
Sorry again, but what have you done? You just tried to hold on the blue bricks, and tried to spam anywhere and claim it is a maze. The tile is completely cut-off at all. At least you use some background-tile to decorate a bit, but you didn't do it. Ehhhh...I'm completely disappointed. Totally fail.

Secondly, you've not put even one decoration at all. And coins? Lacking of decoration cause serious drops of marks in graphics. Even though one? Try to place one, they're not that hard for you. Also, the Fludd is floating in the mid-air a bit. I'm on the moon or space? <_<

Thirdly, I don't understand why there's lava in that "maze" and with the blue bricks. You can put them, as long as they don't cut-off, rite? Try to place them regularly, horizontally and reasonably. No sense at all. >_>

Fourthly, I really suggest you to choose another background. It doesn't fit. And the music. Secret course music sucks.

Others: 0/5
Self-explanatory, rite?

Overall: 2/20
Don't be too surprised, this level isn't really enjoyable. To prevent this, just tried to make your level longer, with the following tips,
1) Erase some inappropriate items
2) Try to place the blue bricks horizontally, don't spam them, and add some background "wall" tiles as well.
3) Add some more ways, it is a maze rite?

[GMDragon11]

Okay, Lemme Reply to this level.

Level to be reviewed: The Fludd Race(Turbo Maze)

FUN: 1.5/10
You completely failed here. Why? I've to disapprove MP3 here.

Firstly, there's no guidelines to the level, I even don't know what I've to suppose to do. What shall I do? Get the fludd and travel around? At least put a sign and tell people what should we do. We're not just playing level for shine sprites or what, we're playing levels for fun. We're not just going to check whether the level is playable or not, we're playing for the objective. Since you've no objective. You're just trying to imitate some other used ideas like "Maze", "Fludd Race". When you made this level, it shown that you're just copying ideas. Lack of originality is the biggest objective of your level. Right? >_>

Secondly, look at what have you done first. You just tried to draw lines/ hold blue brick tiles to draw an irregular, actually I can say it is "horrible" maze, without anything. You look, there's no challenging puzzles at all, the platforms can be counted by all my fingers. There're no obstacles for me to challenge. I've to disagree it is a "maze" too. You look, you just give out 3 roads, it can be only classified as "Choose a road" type level. Is that enough? A maze is supposed to be craploads of way, a way is severed up to more ways, until you find the real way. That's a type of illusion, but this level is not, you've just tried to make a "maze" with 3 roads, without anything have been added.

Thirdly, you said it is a turbo race, but I can finish it without the turbo, than what's the point of giving us the turbo, if I'm not supposed to use the turbo fludd, why you give us the turbo? I can only say you tried to force the level to be a "turbo"-fludd-based level. You've no point at all.

Fourthly, yes, lack of originality. This ideas have been used, at least you may add more than one type of idea, instead of just making a "maze". Don't you think it is tedious? For example, when you find a "road" is wrong, it is quite tedious, but if it is a "maze", it doesn't. Why you're not going to try the platforms? There're enough types for you to choose, are you really 'fraid with them or you want to get much reputation by making those levels? You just tried to spam some enemies and put some ugly platform on your level terribly. I cant stand it at all.
(Much, not "more", I'm not talking the pre-thump-up period, but the post-reputation period)
Graphics: 0.5/5
Sorry again, but what have you done? You just tried to hold on the blue bricks, and tried to spam anywhere and claim it is a maze. The tile is completely cut-off at all. At least you use some background-tile to decorate a bit, but you didn't do it. Ehhhh...I'm completely disappointed. Totally fail.

Secondly, you've not put even one decoration at all. And coins? Lacking of decoration cause serious drops of marks in graphics. Even though one? Try to place one, they're not that hard for you. Also, the Fludd is floating in the mid-air a bit. I'm on the moon or space? <_<

Thirdly, I don't understand why there's lava in that "maze" and with the blue bricks. You can put them, as long as they don't cut-off, rite? Try to place them regularly, horizontally and reasonably. No sense at all. >_>

Fourthly, I really suggest you to choose another background. It doesn't fit. And the music. Secret course music sucks.

Others: 0/5
Self-explanatory, rite?

Overall: 2/20
Don't be too surprised, this level isn't really enjoyable. To prevent this, just tried to make your level longer, with the following tips,
1) Erase some inappropriate items
2) Try to place the blue bricks horizontally, don't spam them, and add some background "wall" tiles as well.
3) Add some more ways, it is a maze rite?

Why don't you go to the LD. Play the level series. Too old so find a way to browse my levels. Just a susggetion

[~MP3 Amplifier~]

gmdragon11, you already have another level topic, please move this level to the other topic if you haven't already.