Nwolf's Levels

[Nwolf]

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Supershroom (January 2nd, 2015, 2:56 am)

[~MP3 Amplifier~]

I'm going to review your level - "Iceland".

GOOD POINTS:

+ I enjoyed the volcano but not the icy path as much.
+ The penguins decorated the scene well.

BAD POINTS:

- In the volcano side, what you designed wasn't really a volcano. It was more like a lava land. There were a few cut-offs.
- On the icy path side, there were a lot of lava cut-offs. If you wanted lava, then you should've used the proper animated tiles.
- There weren't any enemies or yellow coins.

IMPROVEMENT POINTS:

= Use more snowy trees and decorations.
= Use more enemies and yellow coins to collect, to make it funner.
= Use less cut-offs. Be neat with tiles.

Overall, I think your level achieved... 13/20!

[Harmless]

It seemed that no one rated your other levels, so I'll rate StarRoad.

Fun: 9/10. I had a lot of fun playing this level. It was a little short in general, but what made me spend the equivalent amount of time completing a medium length level was the fact that the difficulty was set to hard, but not impossible.

Graphics: 7/10. Ok, I guess this level wasn't designed for graphics, but even if it wasn't it was still pretty good! I don't really have any complaints, yet nothing to say either.

Creativity: 10/10. The best part of the level. The creativity. The best creative element you put in the level was the tiles. The fact that the invisibility and invincibility stars changed what tiles were solid and what were not was pure genius. And so was the lava that blocked you unless you got invincibility! It was kinda like back and forth, except once, and boy was it fun dying three times on the level just to complete it.

Overall... 26/30! Great job on this. Period.

Those two minutes I used of my life playing this shall not be refunded.
~ The Harmless

[JSlayerXero]

I'm gonna rate 100% Movement. Note, I'm going to review the edits now.

Fun: 6/10
Okaaaay. The beginning is, surprisingly EASY? o_O Okay, to be fair, the various speeds didn't hurt it that much. Just when you go above 7 or 6 it's really hard to stay on them. But overall the beginning was nice. Nothing too different. But then in comes the part AFTER the lava. O_O It's gone from nigh impossible to incredibly easy. All because you gave use the F.L.U.D.D. Personally, for the pendulum issue, I edited this to use 4 pendulums with two block in-between (yours is 3 blocks for reference sake) and it was still hard and annoying due to the way pendulums work; but it was much more fair. The triangles are pathetic with the F.L.U.D.D. when, they were the hardest part before. Overall, you went from Nigh impossible, to very easy. It's still possible to fail, it's just much harder. It is a bit more fun now.
Graphics: 3/5
The tile cut-off is fixed, and same with the pipe. Really, this isn't spectacular, but it isn't bad.
Other: 4/5
+ The course is great
= Moving the start point isn't useful anymore as the level is easy you could remove the checkpoint sign if you want. But, it imposes nothing.
Total: 13/20
You gained 7 points from my original review. This level is average or above average, I'm not sure which. However, this level isn't half as bad as it used to be. It's easy instead of super hard. And, that's not that big of an issue. I wouldn't mind "some" more challenge, seeing as how the F.L.U.D.D. basically removes all the challenge, and even sucks out the fun from the Star Collecting, but it IS your choice to use it. Much improved.

[Nwolf]

@JSlayer: Nothing. I was bored. Had no ideas for a good level. The triangle part was EXTREMLY hard, you are right. But it wasn't impossible.

[JSlayerXero]

I edit my review post. You level is much improved now. Though, using the FLUDD SERIOUSLY reduces most of the difficulty from the hardest parts of the level. But, it's definitely better now.

[Nwolf]

@TheHarmless: Thanks! You're right, it wasn't designed for graphics. Runouw made a level like this too, I think it was in this mountain...

@MP3: Thanks for the bad points (no really, thanks!). I've edited the level a few days ago... and tried to get rid of the bad points.


I've posted 2 new levels: Green Hills and Mario Skywalker.

[Zacky]

Don't you want to post your series "Nworlds"? I think the series is pretty good.

[Nwolf]

My level series topic: The Nworlds

[GMDragon11]

AWesome levels

4/5