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Postby kelvinkris101 » July 19th, 2011, 7:02 pm

This underwater level can be tricky...This is one of my level for the 14th contest! :
(Or...I think it is... :facepalm: )
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C'mon You know...
    You're to slow.
    You're to good.
    Runouw is aswome.
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Re: kelvinkris101's levels

Postby ~MP3 Amplifier~ » July 20th, 2011, 11:24 am

*ahem* Sorry for picking on your level on the LDC thread... anyway I'm gonna review it:

GOOD POINTS:

+ It's fun to complete and the obstacles are good.
+ It's definitely an A-B level for the LDC.

BAD POINTS:

- It is quite laggy and very difficult to do triple jumps when it's like that.
- Although you took out the red coins you've still used glitches or high powered items, which we were told not to use. The blocks that turned so you could walk through them is basically a glitch, and also the high speeded green platforms used to make a trampoline isn't allowed.

IMPROVEMENT POINTS:

= Always read the rules for the LDC.
= Take out some of the obstacles to reduce lag.

Overall, I think your level achieved... 13/20
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Re: kelvinkris101's levels

Postby Zacky » August 9th, 2011, 6:17 pm

For the level to be in the contest, it must be in the vault.
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