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50x30~0*28*2K2M0*28*2K2M0*28*2K2M0*28*2K2M0*28*2K2M0*28*2K2M0*28*2K2M0*28*2K2M0*28*2K2M0*28*2K2M0*28*2K2M0*28*2K2M0*28*2K2M0*28*2K2M0*28*2K2M0*28*2K2M0*28*2K2M0*28*2K2M0*28*2K2M0*28*2K2M0*28*2K2M0*28*2K2M0*28*2K2M0*28*2K2M0*28*2K2M0*28*2K2M0*28*2K2M0*28*2K2M0*28*2K2M0*28*2K2M0*28*2K2M0*28*2K2M0*28*2K2M0*28*2K2M0*28*2K2M0*28*2K2M0*28*2K2M0*28*2K2M0*28*2K2M0*28*2K2M0*28*2K2M0*28*2K2M0*28*2K2M0*28*2K2M0*28*2K2M0*28*2K2M0*28*2K2M0*28*2K2M0*28*2K2M0*28*2K2M~1,67,827,0,0,Right|6,224,189|11,108,793|11,125,791|11,140,788|11,157,787|11,170,787|11,184,790|7,216,791,9,0,30,0,0,0,Right,none,0.5,3,1,25|41,93,757,1,0|10,41,749|32,847,734,1,0|35,1162,363,1,0|34,721,535,1,0|34,861,534,1,0|34,623,533,1,0|34,531,530,1,0|40,850,480,476,180|43,704,665|143,78,758,0,0|143,952,831,1,90|143,633,477,0,0|142,847,458,1,270|139,483,233,1,0|139,436,238,1,0|139,402,244,1,0|137,265,201,1,0|137,266,178,1,0|137,266,156,1,0|137,266,139,1,0|137,267,122,1,0|137,267,104,1,0|10,55,752|10,20,813|10,34,815|10,45,827|10,4,801|10,26,751|9,922,758,0,0,0,0,0,0,Right,none,0.5,40,6,Left,3,72,1|9,978,806,0,0,0,0,0,0,Right,none,0.5,40,6,Left,3,72,1|9,271,59,0,0,0,0,0,0,Right,none,999,100,6,Left,9,72,1|9,231,266,0,0,0,0,0,0,Right,none,0.1,100,1,Left,1,99,1|34,105,240,1,0|39,847,726,159,494,1|39,1257,189,121,222,5|34,1125,228,1,0|34,1250,211,1,0|34,1274,198,1,0|35,95,497,1,0|35,159,494,1,0|35,219,496,1,0|37,141,426,15,40|35,394,371,1,0|40,1164,317,1473,360|34,174,168,1,90|34,174,117,1,90|34,31,170,1,90|37,103,159,15,5|35,703,309,1,0|35,764,309,1,0|35,825,309,1,0|35,883,310,1,0|35,942,310,1,0|35,995,323,1,30|35,1043,349,1,25|35,1100,364,1,0|73,438,200,Salta%20al%20vacio%20de%20la%20derecha%21%21%21|73,97,233,al%20saltar%2C%20giro%20a%20la%20derecha%20y%2E%2E%2E%20tachan%21%21%21%21%21%21%21|41,94,849,1,0|41,93,817,1,0|41,92,787,1,0|7,382,814,3,0,30,0,0,0,Right,none,9,3,1,25|7,467,853,9,0,99,0,0,0,Right,none,0.5,3,1,25|73,1339,860,Me%20pas%C3%A9%2E%2E%2E|73,93,741,Disfruta%20del%20viaje%20%3BP%0D%20|30,1022,244,1,330|73,867,303,En%20una%2E%2E%2E%2C%20en%20otra%20llegaras%20a%20tu%20meta%2E%0DCual%20sera%20la%20buena%3F%3F%0DDe%20todas%20maneras%20si%20te%20equivocas%2C%20dejate%2E%2E%2E|34,1403,313,1,270|34,1472,386,1,0|34,1477,241,1,0|34,1541,318,1,90|59,1517,311,1|59,1516,276,1|61,1487,287,0|59,1444,283,1|59,1469,258,1|59,1438,309,1|59,1523,298,1|59,1450,261,1|59,1488,259,1|59,1429,277,1|59,1423,300,1|59,1458,300,1|59,1460,278,1|39,1492,232,926,267,1~17~13~Mario%20Galaxy

[~MP3 Amplifier~]

I've decided to review your level.

GOOD POINTS:

+ I like the fact it's in Spanish (because you probably are Spanish yourself) - I've decided to use Google Translator for this.
+ I like the green platforms at the start - it has the same excitement as an automatic level.
+ I like how you get three choices to go which way at the end, and you don't die in any of them, which makes it less frustrating.

BAD POINTS:

- The warp pipes at the start and the logs aren't very neatly laid out and don't give the level a very good first impression.
- Don't use the metal arrow, unless you're in metal.
- There's lots of space you haven't used in the second level transition side, it doesn't look as if you've been bothered to shorten it or add more to it.

IMPROVEMENT POINTS:

= Be careful not to use the metal arrows unless you're actually in metal.
= Don't waste space - use it! For example, put a cliff edge in the second transition so it's not going on forever.

Overall, I think your level achieved... 12/20!