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xordy's levels

Postby xordy » July 21st, 2011, 12:51 am

Here it is:
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Re: xordy's levels

Postby ~MP3 Amplifier~ » July 22nd, 2011, 12:22 pm

I've decided to review your level.

GOOD POINTS:

+ I like the fact it's in Spanish (because you probably are Spanish yourself) - I've decided to use Google Translator for this. ;)
+ I like the green platforms at the start - it has the same excitement as an automatic level.
+ I like how you get three choices to go which way at the end, and you don't die in any of them, which makes it less frustrating.

BAD POINTS:

- The warp pipes at the start and the logs aren't very neatly laid out and don't give the level a very good first impression.
- Don't use the metal arrow, unless you're in metal.
- There's lots of space you haven't used in the second level transition side, it doesn't look as if you've been bothered to shorten it or add more to it.

IMPROVEMENT POINTS:

= Be careful not to use the metal arrows unless you're actually in metal.
= Don't waste space - use it! For example, put a cliff edge in the second transition so it's not going on forever.

Overall, I think your level achieved... 12/20!
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