gomba's levels

[gomba]

I'll also review your Outerspace level gomba.

Creativity: 6/10. The level was a little short and didn't have as much uber creativity in it. The slingstars at the end were nice, but the fourth sling star made me die and made me miss the 5th one. My expression then:

The Harmless

is this the problem at sling star number5 that you hit the skelegoonie?

please answer so i can fix it

but now i gonna do this:make a auto-jump at the begin,remover the rocket fludd,make the skelegoonies easier to kill and (if that whas the problem remover that skelegoonie that hit you at sling star #5)


found:the sling star problem
fixed:i made a autojump,no rocket fludds,less silver stars(15) and the sling star problem is fixed

[SuperMIC]

Well, a quick review from me... I'll do the Ship of Doom one...

FUN - 3/10
GRAPHICS - 1/5
OTHER - 1.5/5

The level didn't impress me much at all. The level lacked HORRIBLY on the graphics side; the waters overlapped and were floating in mid-air... the level itself didn't really make sense. It was impressive that you remodelled a same area three times, but still a lot of work needs to be done. The level was kind of boring and the storyline wasn't very engaging at all.

OVERALL - 5.5/20

WHAT YOU NEED TO DO:

1) Fix the graphics - add a ton of decor, reduce cut-off, make only one layer of water...
2) Add more fun to the level... fix the storyline, make the level more challenging, etc.

Yeah... sorry. It really didn't do it for me. :/

-SuperMIC

[gomba]

Well, a quick review from me... I'll do the Ship of Doom one...

FUN - 3/10
GRAPHICS - 1/5
OTHER - 1.5/5

The level didn't impress me much at all. The level lacked HORRIBLY on the graphics side; the waters overlapped and were floating in mid-air... the level itself didn't really make sense. It was impressive that you remodelled a same area three times, but still a lot of work needs to be done. The level was kind of boring and the storyline wasn't very engaging at all.

OVERALL - 5.5/20

WHAT YOU NEED TO DO:

1) Fix the graphics - add a ton of decor, reduce cut-off, make only one layer of water...
2) Add more fun to the level... fix the storyline, make the level more challenging, etc.

Yeah... sorry. It really didn't do it for me. :/

-SuperMIC

ther is not realy a sea/beach decor,so i dont realy know what i can use as a sea/beach decor.
but anyways now i got the idea that i must change the f*cking last part of the level.
i gonna work on it!

[Harmless]

I'll also review your Outerspace level gomba.

Creativity: 6/10. The level was a little short and didn't have as much uber creativity in it. The slingstars at the end were nice, but the fourth sling star made me die and made me miss the 5th one. My expression then:

The Harmless

is this the problem at sling star number5 that you hit the skelegoonie?

please answer so i can fix it

but now i gonna do this:make a auto-jump at the begin,remover the rocket fludd,make the skelegoonies easier to kill and (if that whas the problem remover that skelegoonie that hit you at sling star #5)


found:the sling star problem
fixed:i made a autojump,no rocket fludds,less silver stars(15) and the sling star problem is fixed

I did not hit a skelegoonie. When I used the fourth sling star, I really did miss. I did nothing to alter my position or where I aim.

[gomba]

the sling star must be ok now

I'll also review your Outerspace level gomba.

Graphics: 7/10. The graphics honestly were not bad, except there was some cut-off at the beginning. Also, the items that made the elevator to the silver star, some were showing while others were hidden. Otherwise it was a decent level. But I would like Mario/Luigi to auto-jump out of the warp pipe in the beginning rather than just stand on it.

The Harmless

what is the cut-off?,cant find it

[Harmless]

The stairs.

[gomba]

here is OUTERSPACE V2:

Code: Select all

60x40~0*39*3d0*39*3d0*39*3d0*39*3d0*39*3d0*39*3d0*88*3e3d0*38*3e3d0*38*3e3d0*38*3e3d*10*0*29*3e3d0*8*3d0*29*3k3d0*8*3d0*28*3h3d*2*0*8*3d0*27*3h3d*3*03d*5*0*2*3d*2*3f0*24*3h3d0*2*3d03f0*3*3d0*2*3d*22*0*5*3g3d0*2*3d03f0*3*3d0*2*3e3d*7*0*20*3g3d*3*0*3*3d03d0*2*3e3d*7*0*21*3g3d*2*0*3*3d03d*25*0*8*3l3d0*3*3d03d0*2*3d*2*3f0*27*3j3d0*3*3d03d0*33*3d0*3*3d03d0*33*3d0*3*3d03d0*33*3d*5*03d0*39*3d0*33*3d*7*0*33*3d*4*0*36*3d*4*0*36*3d*4*0*36*3d*31*0*9*3d*4*0*26*3d0*9*3d*4*0*26*3d0*9*3d*4*0*26*3d0*9*3d*4*0*26*3d0*9*3d*4*0*26*3d0*9*3d*4*0*26*3d0*39*3d0*39*3d0*39*3d0*7*3e3d0*30*3d0*7*3e3d*32*0*260*3d*6*0*34*3d0*4*3d0*34*3d0*4*3d0*34*3d0*4*3d0*34*3d0*4*3d0*34*3d0*4*3d0*34*3d0*39*3d0*189*~1,6,1199,5,-4,Right|42,3,1201,1,40|37,154,1175,20,-5|37,46,947,50,0|5,58,1130|81,512,210,15|5,45,948|5,1798,1124|5,1378,1180|5,1486,386|5,1791,391|5,1803,45|5,1515,94|40,1044,1208,1264,279|55,545,1216,1|55,544,1127,1|55,544,1031,1|55,544,943,1|55,546,868,1|52,996,495,1|53,966,1212,1|53,1088,1211,1|51,1132,1211,1|51,1042,1201,1|51,982,1207,1|141,89,1132,1,270|5,45,42|37,47,42,15,65|141,28,1132,1,90|141,259,207,1,180|40,335,240,4,1201|42,367,240,1,0|42,300,240,1,0|40,263,240,501,252|69,699,550,0|40,995,511,1342,190|38,479,172,0,75,100|142,349,217,1,305|39,1264,287,994,510,1|40,506,247,513,128|70,591,374,1|70,619,375,1|70,639,375,1|70,664,374,1|70,681,375,1|70,716,373,1|70,564,375,1|70,699,375,1|19,549,573,180,0|35,369,515,1,0|35,427,475,1,0|35,361,451,1,0|35,431,423,1,0|35,369,388,1,0|35,429,355,1,0|35,371,321,1,0|82,1263,1198|73,61,1217,can%20you%20find%20all%20the%2015%20silver%20stars%3F|5,1265,270|5,721,306|6,1598,703|5,567,489|82,495,539|43,896,273|31,1201,254,1,5|31,1168,300,1,0|31,1209,327,1,0|31,1166,367,1,0|34,1171,446,1,0|41,1108,425,1,0|41,1108,393,1,0|41,1236,423,1,0|41,1236,391,1,0|41,1236,359,1,0|41,1236,327,1,0|41,1236,295,1,0|41,1236,264,1,0|41,1236,232,1,0|40,1236,194,1042,1204|34,1328,206,1,0|34,1474,181,1,340|37,1513,93,20,60|37,1803,48,15,-175|37,1792,388,21,-65|37,1486,388,15,195|37,1379,1181,15,50|37,1798,1126,20,0|37,1812,721,15,-65|35,1266,291,1,0|35,1267,296,1,0|35,1265,298,1,0|35,1265,303,1,0|35,1265,304,1,0|35,1265,306,1,0|35,1265,308,1,0|35,1265,310,1,0|35,1265,313,1,0|35,1265,316,1,0|35,1265,317,1,0|35,1265,319,1,0|35,1265,321,1,0|35,1265,323,1,0|35,1265,325,1,0|35,1265,326,1,0|35,1265,328,1,0|35,1265,329,1,0|35,1265,334,1,0|35,1265,336,1,0|35,1265,338,1,0|35,1265,340,1,0|35,1265,342,1,0|35,1265,345,1,0|35,1264,347,1,0|35,1263,349,1,0|35,1263,354,1,0|35,1263,354,1,0|35,1263,355,1,0|35,1263,359,1,0|35,1263,360,1,0|35,1263,362,1,0|35,1263,365,1,0|35,1263,365,1,0|35,1264,368,1,0|35,1263,374,1,0|35,1263,376,1,0|35,1263,376,1,0|35,1263,377,1,0|35,1263,380,1,0|35,1264,382,1,0|35,1264,386,1,0|35,1264,389,1,0|35,1264,391,1,0|35,1264,394,1,0|35,1264,396,1,0|35,1264,399,1,0|35,1264,403,1,0|35,1264,406,1,0|35,1264,408,1,0|35,1264,412,1,0|35,1264,422,1,0|35,1264,427,1,0|35,1264,428,1,0|35,1265,414,1,0|35,1266,435,1,0|35,1265,437,1,0|35,1265,438,1,0|35,1265,440,1,0|35,1265,442,1,0|35,1265,447,1,0|35,1265,449,1,0|5,1811,722|35,1252,995,1,0|35,1193,995,1,0|35,1180,773,1,0|35,1249,773,1,0|35,1218,773,1,0|35,1258,611,1,0|35,1196,611,1,0|34,1094,580,1,25|33,992,548,1,0|34,1084,499,1,315|5,1021,447|5,512,208~17~13~OUTERSPACE%20V2

[Harmless]

Hmm. Let's see if you've improved it.
*Playing level*
Hmm. Good job. You fixed a lot of major points. I'd say your overall score went up by 10 points! Well done. However, the level could still be longer, and the sling star at the beginning of the level made me miss the second one. However, it was still very well done.

[gomba]

thanks.
(i fixed the sling star)

[gomba]

Well, a quick review from me... I'll do the Ship of Doom one...

FUN - 3/10
GRAPHICS - 1/5
OTHER - 1.5/5

The level didn't impress me much at all. The level lacked HORRIBLY on the graphics side; the waters overlapped and were floating in mid-air... the level itself didn't really make sense. It was impressive that you remodelled a same area three times, but still a lot of work needs to be done. The level was kind of boring and the storyline wasn't very engaging at all.

OVERALL - 5.5/20

WHAT YOU NEED TO DO:

1) Fix the graphics - add a ton of decor, reduce cut-off, make only one layer of water...
2) Add more fun to the level... fix the storyline, make the level more challenging, etc.

Yeah... sorry. It really didn't do it for me. :/

-SuperMIC

guys right now i try to fix a lot of things on my level:the ship of death
i hope you guys like the ship of death V2