Fun: 6/10. You gave me a good platforming challenge all right. Yet it was actually rather easy with the hover and rocket fludd, thus taking down the challenge at that point. I also had several issues...
- The Warp Pipe next to the sign that says "If you don't have 4 silver stars, take the warp pipe", didn't do anything. It kept on taking me back to the same pipe I just went in.
- Then, when I just decided to go on, you didn't need the stars in the first place. All you needed was one, simple, red coin. Now what's the fun in that, gathering stuff that was not even needed later?
Graphics: 4/5. You did well here. I saw a lot of good tile placement and interesting use of tiles and decor. However, when I used the sling star to get the second silver star (which is the one where you blast through the ice blocks), I saw cutoff shortly after I got through. It let me down a little bit. Also, I saw crooked pipes, but I wasn't so sure if you wanted it there like that or not, so I just decided to leave the issue.
Other:
Good:
+ Love the platforming (up to the fludds). (+0.5)
+ Decor was used nicely. (+1)
Bad:
- The signs at the end of the level were fairly insulting... one of the rules is no insults or wording that may show insulting. (-1.5)
- The signs at the end also were not that funny. (-0.5)
- Fludds pretty much ruined the challenge. (-1.5)
Total: 1/5
Overall score: 11/20! You have some pretty big work to do on the level. The layout of the level is fine, but some other things in the level in general need to be fixed as shown above.
