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Re: STORY REVIEWS- (Today's Story- Runouw's Secrets)

Postby Blablob » March 26th, 2010, 3:42 am

KIMONIO!!!! wrote:Runouw's Forum: Review

By- Kimonio





The Plot: Okay, so like all stories, this is based on when the army of spambots, spammers and trolls attack at once. The mods and a few selected members are used to fight off the army and save the site.

THE GOOD: Good personalities, good descriptive writing, and great use of action. 10/10

THE BAD: At some point, when Nero was killed, you magically brought him back. But how? You were fighting Oren. Also, I got confused when I read about the merging. o_O......Meh, that's about it for me.


OVERALL: Meh. You got a good score. :D 10/10.


That simplify things a bit?
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Re: STORY REVIEWS- (Today's Story- Runouw's Secrets)

Postby zebtrestalala » April 15th, 2010, 5:22 am

The review is by Kimonio, the story is by Brandobrawl.

ANyone want to review the story that I haven't updated in forever?
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With that in mind, check out my clever, well-thought, and generally amazing level series!
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Or My Second Series! This one's cool too! -http://runouw.com/forums/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=2122&p=16280#p16280
Or if Last Legacy is more your thing, check out this one! -http://runouw.com/forums/viewtopic.php?f=81&t=39328&sid=c9a97fe200ffcb08c2ce64ebf877591a
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Re: STORY REVIEWS- (Today's Story- Runouw's Secrets)

Postby MessengerOfDreams » April 19th, 2010, 1:36 pm

Okay, this is breaking my own rule, but I could really use a review on TRC- The Official Copy, it's long but engaging. I would really appreciate it.

P.S. I haven't seen anything updated lately or close to finishing, which is why this has died.
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