No lo estoy en alli.
Por que?
Lol jk.
But good luck with making this!!
Survivor: Unknown
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Re: Survivor- Idaho- (Cast Announced)
by TrappedTime » May 28th, 2010, 5:05 pm
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Re: Survivor- (Where Location?) (Cast Announced)
by MessengerOfDreams » June 2nd, 2010, 1:46 pm
Runouw Voice-Over
20 peoples from all walks of life, will unite to start the ultimate test. They will live on a deserted Island in New Zealand, with limited supplies. They will be forced to set up camps, compete in challenges, scrounge for food to survive. The loser of each round will vote one person off of their team, or tribe. The last one left after all the votes will become the ultimate survivor.
THIS.
IS.
SURVIVOR.
Blablob leaned over the balcony of the boat, peering out on the storm. Brando walked next to him and said “Some Storm Brewing, Eh?”
Blab shook his head, replying “Nah, I’m a weather reporter for Hurricane Central. That’s like a bit of sprinkling compared to that.”
Brando laughed. “I’m from Phoenix. That’s like a hurricane to me.”
Mic was humming to himself as the boat pulled up onto shore. The place looked beautiful, he had to admit, but that wasn’t to say that he looked forward to it, seeming as it was probably infested with bugs and filth and probably dangerous animals. He shuddered at the thought.
Buff slapped his back. “Hey, don’t worry about it. In my short-lived days in the military we stayed in places that made this island here look like the Hamptons.”
Mic smiled. “How long were you in the military?”
Buff removed a strand of hair out of her eye and nervously responded “Uhm, actually, I lasted 4 months before I punched the Sarge in the Nose and was dishonorably discharged.”
Moy snuck up behind the both of them with a camera and said “Cheese!” Mic and Buff simultaneously pushed him back.
Buff laughed. “Ironic, really. I was just telling Mic this funny story from my days in the military.”
Moy laughed. “Let’s hear it!”
Buff snickered and lightly punched Moy in the nose, not hard enough to hurt him, though. Moy laughed and said “So that explains a lot.”
“Why did they even let you bring a camera in the first place?” Mic asked.
“It’s a hidden camera!” Moy said before laughing loudly, only to find that both Buff and Mic had shaken their heads in embarrassment.
“Moy, leave the humor to us, ‘kay, mate?” Buff sighed. “You just killed it.”
Moy nodded. “Either way, the three of us, we stick together, kay?”
Mic nodded. “Deal.”
Buff just nodded. “Whatever, gents.”
Kimonio looked over the railing, feeling a lot more anxiety than the rest. “Hey, Kirby.” He asked a companion he had made on the journey over, “Are there, like, sharks in the water?”
Kirby nodded. “As much sharks in the water as a VV Brown song.”
Kim shook his head. “I’m gonna pretend I understood that. How about alligators?”
Kirby nodded, this time silent.
Kim sighed. “God I am glad I don’t live here.”
The boat reached the dock, and everyone filed out. Runouw was waiting for them.
“Hello, contestants.” He said. “Welcome to the island.”
“Where are we?” Star-Fawful asked. He was easy to spot, dressed all in black.
Runouw smirked. “You’ll never know till the end… that is, if you make it to the end.”
Yoshi Boo raised an eyebrow. Also easy to spot in her paint-ruined shirt, she stepped forward and said “So you’re keeping us here in the middle of god-knows-where?”
“Is this legal?” Doram, the oldest of the group asked.
Runouw smirked again. “Sure is. Deal with it.” Everyone seemed genuinely shocked by Runouw’s lack of respect for other people, especially his elders. He pulled out a hat and said “Well, I have your 20 names in here. I will draw 2 names. Those people start by picking a member for their team. To keep with the secrecy, the teams will be the red team and the blue team. Then, each newly picked member will pick another member, and so on until the end. Then, you have the tribes.”
Suyo nodded. Hopefully he would be picked first, he had a good idea of who he wanted on his team.
Runouw pulled a name out of his hat. “Doram…” he read. Doram stepped onto the Red mat. Slowly, almost painfully so, Runouw pulled out the second name and said “… and Superyoshi!”
Superyoshi grinned and started to step forward.
“Just kidding. Kirby999! And this time I am serious!”
Kirby hesitantly stepped onto the blue team’s mat.
Runouw threw the hat into the ocean. “Let the sharkies eat the rest of the names. Doram, you start.”
Doram pointed to 24Murph, shuddering at Runouw’s snide statement. “I choose you.”
Kirby was next. “Kim.” He said to no one’s surprise.
24: “Aznchau4ever.”
Kim: “Niklaw.”
Azn pointed to a character in the shadows who looked similarily to Vivi from Final Fantasy. “That person, whoever it is.” The character didn’t respond, and Azn could only assume it was Ridder.
Niklaw looked around and said “Fourinone. The comedian woman.” Four laughed and joined the rest, telling Niklaw “That reminds me of this one guy, his name was Shadow Squid…”
The shadowy Vivi-Ridder thing pointed at Buff, who joined the group and winked at Moy and Mic.
Four stopped talking to Niklaw and said “Shadow- I mean, Brandobrawl.”
And so it continued, with Blab, Avo, and Yoshi Boo 118 joining the Red team and Moy, Mic and Yoshi Kid 69 joining the Blue.
Nin10mode, Star-Fawful and Superyoshi remained. It was Yoshi Boo’s turn.
Nin10mode shuddered around, trying unsuccessfully to hide his nerves, Star looked like he couldn’t care less and Superyoshi just looked confident.
Yoshi noticed Nin10mode. “Aw, over here, dude. Don’t worry, it’s not the end of the world.”
Nin10mode sighed and said “What do you mean? It’s cold out here.”
Before Yoshi Kid 69 could open his mouth, Runouw stopped him. “No more decisions.” He said. “If you’re not on a team…” he started, and shocked everyone by finishing with “You have been eliminated.”
Suyo fell in the sand. Star shrugged and got back on the boat.
20 peoples from all walks of life, will unite to start the ultimate test. They will live on a deserted Island in New Zealand, with limited supplies. They will be forced to set up camps, compete in challenges, scrounge for food to survive. The loser of each round will vote one person off of their team, or tribe. The last one left after all the votes will become the ultimate survivor.
THIS.
IS.
SURVIVOR.
Blablob leaned over the balcony of the boat, peering out on the storm. Brando walked next to him and said “Some Storm Brewing, Eh?”
Blab shook his head, replying “Nah, I’m a weather reporter for Hurricane Central. That’s like a bit of sprinkling compared to that.”
Brando laughed. “I’m from Phoenix. That’s like a hurricane to me.”
Mic was humming to himself as the boat pulled up onto shore. The place looked beautiful, he had to admit, but that wasn’t to say that he looked forward to it, seeming as it was probably infested with bugs and filth and probably dangerous animals. He shuddered at the thought.
Buff slapped his back. “Hey, don’t worry about it. In my short-lived days in the military we stayed in places that made this island here look like the Hamptons.”
Mic smiled. “How long were you in the military?”
Buff removed a strand of hair out of her eye and nervously responded “Uhm, actually, I lasted 4 months before I punched the Sarge in the Nose and was dishonorably discharged.”
Moy snuck up behind the both of them with a camera and said “Cheese!” Mic and Buff simultaneously pushed him back.
Buff laughed. “Ironic, really. I was just telling Mic this funny story from my days in the military.”
Moy laughed. “Let’s hear it!”
Buff snickered and lightly punched Moy in the nose, not hard enough to hurt him, though. Moy laughed and said “So that explains a lot.”
“Why did they even let you bring a camera in the first place?” Mic asked.
“It’s a hidden camera!” Moy said before laughing loudly, only to find that both Buff and Mic had shaken their heads in embarrassment.
“Moy, leave the humor to us, ‘kay, mate?” Buff sighed. “You just killed it.”
Moy nodded. “Either way, the three of us, we stick together, kay?”
Mic nodded. “Deal.”
Buff just nodded. “Whatever, gents.”
Kimonio looked over the railing, feeling a lot more anxiety than the rest. “Hey, Kirby.” He asked a companion he had made on the journey over, “Are there, like, sharks in the water?”
Kirby nodded. “As much sharks in the water as a VV Brown song.”
Kim shook his head. “I’m gonna pretend I understood that. How about alligators?”
Kirby nodded, this time silent.
Kim sighed. “God I am glad I don’t live here.”
The boat reached the dock, and everyone filed out. Runouw was waiting for them.
“Hello, contestants.” He said. “Welcome to the island.”
“Where are we?” Star-Fawful asked. He was easy to spot, dressed all in black.
Runouw smirked. “You’ll never know till the end… that is, if you make it to the end.”
Yoshi Boo raised an eyebrow. Also easy to spot in her paint-ruined shirt, she stepped forward and said “So you’re keeping us here in the middle of god-knows-where?”
“Is this legal?” Doram, the oldest of the group asked.
Runouw smirked again. “Sure is. Deal with it.” Everyone seemed genuinely shocked by Runouw’s lack of respect for other people, especially his elders. He pulled out a hat and said “Well, I have your 20 names in here. I will draw 2 names. Those people start by picking a member for their team. To keep with the secrecy, the teams will be the red team and the blue team. Then, each newly picked member will pick another member, and so on until the end. Then, you have the tribes.”
Suyo nodded. Hopefully he would be picked first, he had a good idea of who he wanted on his team.
Runouw pulled a name out of his hat. “Doram…” he read. Doram stepped onto the Red mat. Slowly, almost painfully so, Runouw pulled out the second name and said “… and Superyoshi!”
Superyoshi grinned and started to step forward.
“Just kidding. Kirby999! And this time I am serious!”
Kirby hesitantly stepped onto the blue team’s mat.
Runouw threw the hat into the ocean. “Let the sharkies eat the rest of the names. Doram, you start.”
Doram pointed to 24Murph, shuddering at Runouw’s snide statement. “I choose you.”
Kirby was next. “Kim.” He said to no one’s surprise.
24: “Aznchau4ever.”
Kim: “Niklaw.”
Azn pointed to a character in the shadows who looked similarily to Vivi from Final Fantasy. “That person, whoever it is.” The character didn’t respond, and Azn could only assume it was Ridder.
Niklaw looked around and said “Fourinone. The comedian woman.” Four laughed and joined the rest, telling Niklaw “That reminds me of this one guy, his name was Shadow Squid…”
The shadowy Vivi-Ridder thing pointed at Buff, who joined the group and winked at Moy and Mic.
Four stopped talking to Niklaw and said “Shadow- I mean, Brandobrawl.”
And so it continued, with Blab, Avo, and Yoshi Boo 118 joining the Red team and Moy, Mic and Yoshi Kid 69 joining the Blue.
Nin10mode, Star-Fawful and Superyoshi remained. It was Yoshi Boo’s turn.
Nin10mode shuddered around, trying unsuccessfully to hide his nerves, Star looked like he couldn’t care less and Superyoshi just looked confident.
Yoshi noticed Nin10mode. “Aw, over here, dude. Don’t worry, it’s not the end of the world.”
Nin10mode sighed and said “What do you mean? It’s cold out here.”
Before Yoshi Kid 69 could open his mouth, Runouw stopped him. “No more decisions.” He said. “If you’re not on a team…” he started, and shocked everyone by finishing with “You have been eliminated.”
Suyo fell in the sand. Star shrugged and got back on the boat.
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Re: Survivor- (Where Location?) (Cast Announced)
by MICrophone » June 2nd, 2010, 1:56 pm
This is good…you introduced the setting, the characters, and the situation well. Keep going! 
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Re: Survivor- (Where Location?) (Cast Announced)
by MessengerOfDreams » June 2nd, 2010, 1:58 pm
Whoops... looks like I'll have to add a plot twist seeing as I forgot Linkdroid... >_<
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Re: Survivor- (Where Location?) (Cast Announced)
by MessengerOfDreams » June 2nd, 2010, 2:41 pm
Pardon my double post...
THE THEME SONG IS UP!
THE THEME SONG IS UP!
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Re: Survivor- (Where Location?) (Cast Announced)
by Ridder » June 2nd, 2010, 2:57 pm
Your epic Noviceness knows no bounds.
You showed Nin10mode twice in the video.
You showed Nin10mode twice in the video.
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To say that Nothing is True is to realize that the foundations of society are fragile, and that we must be the shephards of our own civilization.
To say that Everything is Permitted is to understand that we are the architects of our actions, and that we must live with the consequences, whether glorious...or tragic."
-Ezio Auditore da Firenze explaining the Creed, 1514, Masayaf.
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Re: Survivor- (Where Location?) (Cast Announced)
by MessengerOfDreams » June 2nd, 2010, 2:58 pm
Wow... only you would go out of your way to be a b*tch.
Anything good about my story?
Anything good about my story?
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Re: Survivor- (Where Location?) (Cast Announced)
by Ridder » June 2nd, 2010, 3:14 pm
Epic but simple twist is Epic but simple.
You just killed two birds with one stone, and you didn't even have to throw it very far.
You just killed two birds with one stone, and you didn't even have to throw it very far.
THE CREED: Nothing is True. Everything is Permitted.
"...That's rather cynical."
"It would be if it were doctrine, but it is merely an observation of the nature of reality.
To say that Nothing is True is to realize that the foundations of society are fragile, and that we must be the shephards of our own civilization.
To say that Everything is Permitted is to understand that we are the architects of our actions, and that we must live with the consequences, whether glorious...or tragic."
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Re: Survivor- (Where Location?) (Cast Announced)
by Yoshi Boo 118 » June 2nd, 2010, 4:14 pm
A female.
YOU MADE ME A FEMALE?
...Jk.
Anyway, this story has some great potential. I'll rate it when there's more to read.
EDIT: Yippie, I'm 30! *Drinks beer*.
YOU MADE ME A FEMALE?
...Jk.
Anyway, this story has some great potential. I'll rate it when there's more to read.
EDIT: Yippie, I'm 30! *Drinks beer*.
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Re: Survivor- (Where Location?) (Cast Announced)
by YoshiKid54 » June 3rd, 2010, 5:20 am
What an epic story. Keep on going!
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