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Re: After

Postby brandoprojectm » January 18th, 2011, 9:49 pm

MessengerOfDreams wrote:...Jessica throws Rebecca over the bridge to her death.



...finding out why Jennifer killed her, and most important, what's next.


Phail. :3

Also, this sound a lot like The Afterlife by Gary Soto. It's a great book BTW, and if you haven't read it, you should.
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Re: Story discussion

Postby Oranjui » February 20th, 2011, 4:02 pm

1.
UsuarioTHf wrote:
UsuarioTHf wrote:Story about the Pokémon Unova region.

Basically a B/W story.

:awe:

If I get to do this, I'd know what to do it with...Or most importantly, WHO to do this with...

Preview if I actually do it: show
March 7th 2011.

It was a really special day for me...And two of my friends too.
I could say the day was...Meh. Was like any other day when I'd hang out with my friends in my house.
It was 6:30 PM. It was already pretty dark at that point. We were all sitting on the floor of my house's balcony, except me. I was looking at the sky for no real reason. Then I saw a thunder. No sound, though.

"Y'know, each day I keep asking myself what's going on with these thunders. I hear nothing, and it's not raining, but I still see them."

"Possibly the Thunder gods are fighting but we can't see them..."

"Geez. Garcia, you're always with your pointless conclusions." "Anyways, I wonder when Black and White will be on stores."

"...Eduardo, you know we don't care about Pokémon."

"What about it, Andrea? It's my opinion."

A small argument started between the two, but it was interrupted by a thunder that actually had sound.

Eduardo stared at the sky. "Well, that one did sound..." Andrea and Garcia stood up from the floor and looked at the sky, too.

If I recall correctly, the next thing we saw was a giant flaming whirlpool swirling vertically trough the sky...Eventually, it took shape of a tornado and then...It just vanished in thin air.
We all were shocked. Especially me. I though "Thunder and fire...Could it be Zekrom and Reshiram? ...Of course not. Pokémon don't exist in real life, after all."

However, this was not all of that true...

A giant thunder and a wall of fire struck the floor at the outside-bottom of the tower, just in front of us. We somehow got launched into the floor of the balcony...I didn't get why. I didn't get why the thunder struck there on first place. My tower has a lighting rod. I still stood up.

I was amazed. I couldn't believe what I was seeing.

The spirits of Reshiram and Zekrom. How did I know they were spirits? Well, they were transparent, and floating and...And...Oh shut up Dennis...Anyways...

"Reshiram and Zekrom?!" I yelled out loud in shock. "Are you guys able to see what I'm seeing?"

"A weird white monster with wings and a black robot monster with wings too?" Replied Andrea.

"I see the same as Andrea." Said Garcia. "But...Reshiram? Zekrom? What the heck are you talking about?"

I stared at both of them. "If you'd actually play Pokémon and check internet sites more often, you'd know, but I'll explain you."

"Legendary Pokémon. They're powerful, cool and awesome. Reshiram and Zekrom are no exception at all. Being main legends from the Unova region, they're part of the Tao trio, sometimes called the energy trio. It's the collective term used to refer to the three powerful legendary Pokémon of the Unova Region: Reshiram, Zekrom, and...Um...What was the last one? Not sure. But I'm sure it's Ice-type. According to Unova myths, the trio were created during the war plaguing the region."

"Myths? War? I think we're missing something around here."

"Geez, Andrea. Lemme explain.

The mythologies of the trio are different yet somehow connected. The origins of Zekrom and Reshiram are told in legends, as they were once a single powerful Dragon Pokémon used by two brothers ruling the nation. However, the brothers' rule caused great conflicts as they fought over how best to rule the nation and, due to the fighting, the dragon was split into two separate Pokémon. Each dragon resided with its respective master, Reshiram with the older brother and Zekrom with the younger brother, and they decided to fight in an endless battle. It was foretold that they would fight until the region of Unova was destroyed. To stop the battle, the people decided to put both dragons into a deep sleep.

The Ice-type's origins are much different than those of the other two. The third dragon came down to Earth from an icy meteor and crashed into a place called Giant Hole. An old legend in a certain town describing that Pokémon claims that it would take people and Pokémon away from the town and eat them; this is why the town is now surrounded by a giant wall. Another claim is that it's the corpse of the original Dragon Pokémon after it got split into Reshiram and Zekrom...Wait. Why the heck are you guys sleeping?!"

Garcia woke up and stood up. "Damn. You bored us to death. Sum it up...Andrea, wake up."

"...Huh?"

"Okay. To sum it up, Reshiram and Zekrom are Legendary Pokémon."

ROOOOOOOOOAAAAAAR!

"Damn! Reshiram, Zekrom we're right here! No need to roar!"

"...You three. You three are the chosen ones."

Andrea was shocked. "D-d-did Reshiram just...Talk?"

I was surprised, but not because of Reshiram talking. "Telepathy. Certain Pokémon can use telepathy to talk...But, what's with that chosen one thing?"

"Chosen...Chosen to save the Unova region from doom..."

"Doom?"

"No time to explain...You have to go with us. While you're away from this dimension, time will not elapse...Your family will not know what happened. "

Garcia and Andrea both stared at me, like if they were asking if it was true.

"Guys, a Legendary Pokémon's power is... Powerful. Being able to make volcanoes erupt, control weather, represent emotions, grant wishes, cause nightmares, cure nightmares...Heck, even control time, space and antimatter! Point is, we should believe them."

"...Fine." They both said at the same time.

With a smile on my face, I asked "So...How do we go to Unova?"

"..."

We were all surrounded by a portal that sucked us in.

After a long time floating on it, we finally reached the Unova region.

That's when our adventure started...



TO BE CONTINUED ONCE I GET BLACK. NO. NOT KIDDING.

If you're gonna right this, you need to learn that there is no such thing as a "thunder". There are lightning bolts, but no "thunders". :awe: And lawl, it's all invisible. xD
edit: Wow I was an ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ in 2011



2.
brandobrawl wrote:
MessengerOfDreams wrote:...Jessica throws Rebecca over the bridge to her death.



...finding out why Jennifer killed her, and most important, what's next.


Phail. :3

Also, this sound a lot like The Afterlife by Gary Soto. It's a great book BTW, and if you haven't read it, you should.

Exactly.
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Re: Story ideas N' stuffs.

Postby AlucardX60 » April 8th, 2011, 11:49 am

Epic new epicness storah that I haz created. :3: show
Why does one fight?
Is it to resolve a conflict? No conflicts can be resolved just as well with words.
Is it simply part of humanity? Possibly.
However for most fighting is a pleasure. A addiction to which can never be cured, only grow.


*BOOM*
High in the sky of the town two men can be seen fighting. There power equal and yet unsurpassed by any other. The blast the had gone off flung the duo to tall buildings opposite each other. Both landing sideways feet first on the building. A glowing orb of light can be seen growing bigger and bigger in there hands. Simultaneously as if they knew exactly when the other would they shoved off towards each other to begin the battle again. Even from the distance here there battle cries can be heard.

"VANDARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRX!!!"

"VOLCOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE!!!"

*BOOM*
Went another blast creating a orb of light around them. From here only a silhouette can be seen. A axe and a sword always deflecting the others attack before it can get close. The light finally cleared there faces can be seen clearly now. They are full of a resentment like no other.

"Do you enjoy watching them? Or do you simply like the stain on that window"

"Uh?" The startling voice of Blablob came from behind MICrophones's position in the tall rundown building "I thought this place was cleared."

"You know why they have such power right? In truth they didn't wish for such power. It was there desire to fight that made them the way they are." Blab said ignoring MIC's comment. His eyes still just a blank emotionless stare.

"So it's possible that someone else can attain such power?" MIC's eyes the same emotionless stare as Blab.

"I see. Yes it is possible. But the price for doing so... it's not worth it. They now think only of fighting. While there power is limitless they can do nothing that you can do right now. Laugh, cry, love, they only feel resentment. If you truly want power then do what it is that was taken from them." Satisfied that he had received the knowledge he was looking for Blab left.

"So to attain there power one must give up the joys of life..."


"Check mate. I win again." MIC was back at the 'safe' zone that became the new Runouw city after Vandarx and Volcove's thirst for a battle consumed it.

"Dang it. One more game I'll get you this time for sure!" The enthusiastic Oranj held up his fist in confidence.

"Nah I got things to do. Maybe another time." MIC said as he got up and started walking away.

"Heheh next time for sure!" Returned Oranj with his trademarked Naruto like smile.

MIC made his way through the familiar streets all along thinking about the fight. Whether it's worth it to feel such power.

*Crash*
The window of the tavern shattered as ShadowtheBowser was flung through it unconscious. MIC peeked into the tavern and was surprised to see a all out bar battle. Bottles were broken, chairs smashed to bits. The battle made him wander. Is the thirst for a battle truly the only thing that sets them apart from us? He began to walk on as Demonik walked out with his double-barrel to stop the raging battle.

"I SHALL OBTAIN THAT POWER!!!" Brandobrawl's scream echoed through the city calling more users to add to the already large crowd of onlookers.

MIC rushed over to the crossroad across from him to see a glowing glyph like drawing below Brando, only his finger tips were on the the glyph as to hold down the blue electric orb in his right hand. The power must have been great as he required his left hand around his wrist to help hold it down. Taking his attention away from Brando he saw Fourinone standing across from him. MIC was shocked to see the gun in his hand pointing at Brando. They had been very close friends just yesterday.

"That is what I was talking about." Blab's voice once again came from behind MIC "He has taken up this power and in return he now has no friendship of any kind. Only the thirst."

"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!" MIC turned attention back to Brando who was now starting a dash towards Four with his right hand held out ready to give him a killing blow.

*BANG*
Four tried to hold back the tears on his face as he dropped to his knees next to Brando's dead body but it was futile to resist. The sadness rubbed off onto everyone else as they hung there head at the loss of the fellow member. After a minute of mourning the crowd dispersed still thinking about Brando's death. This pain that is caused by such power. Is it necessary? Wouldn't it be reasonable to think that one could attain the power while keeping everything intact? His words echoed throughout his mind as he arrived at his home.

Plz review so I can make it moar epic for a final version cuz I think this is the most epic thing out of all the epicness I haz created. *shot*
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Re: Story ideas N' stuffs.

Postby RedLink » April 8th, 2011, 11:59 am

Great Story ALU! *even though wtf is going on*
So Yeah epic and what not.
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Re: Story ideas N' stuffs.

Postby AlucardX60 » April 8th, 2011, 12:15 pm

RedLink wrote:Great Story ALU! *even though wtf is going on*
So Yeah epic and what not.
*cough*aboutme?*cough* :awe:
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lol Thanks for review. :3

RedLink wrote:*even though wtf is going on*


Well other then the fact that super-powered people (such as Vandarx and Valcove) can fly and stuff everything else should be considered perfectly normal. I've come to think of it has a anime with similarities to Big O minus the giant robots. :3
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Re: Story ideas N' stuffs.

Postby WickedOreo » June 29th, 2013, 5:33 pm

Spoiler: show
-Dr. Ackerman, Peter "Pete" (Major antagonist)
-Age: 24
-Occupation: Ph.D, Oncology major
-Prerequisites: 3 years of medical school (for supplementary studies), completed college, goes to Tufts University, will graduate
Relationship status: Single (doesn't want a woman in life yet because he is consumed with the need to revive his father)
Wants to: Work as an oncologist (with a Ph.D) because his father died of brain cancer
-Personality: Somewhat introverted, gets along with most people. He doesn't go to parties or drinks because he is too focused in his studies.
Doesn't believe in a god or deity because he believes that the gods shouldn't have taken away his father.
Is diagnosed with Asperger's Syndrome/ASD (obsession with reviving father)
Doesn't work well in a social environment (has trouble talking about his past)
-Storyline:
Graduates from university
Recruited to work on experimental cancer research from the government (agrees)
Overcome with the idea of being able to revive father with the research
Creates carcinogenic "undead", first is a sucess, then fails because father is quickly disconfigured and brain tumor bursts, infecting Ackerman and turning his father into almost a lump of flesh
Commits/attempts to commit suicide after the tumor bursts (which turns into a failed experiment)
Is infected himself and genetics cause him to be "undead" (genetics that cause a greater chance of cancer more quickly affect him, while causing cancer cells "on steroids")
\Rage and illogical thoughts, signs of ASD are still apparent, but brain's core functions are slowly deteriorating
Government locks Ackerman up because he is a threat to all (they cannot kill him because of his extremely fast-growing cells that cause his skin to grow thick)
Hazmat team that tries to lock Ackerman up is attacked and infected
America is slowly infected from Boston down throughout North America, South America
*Undead note: Destroying the brain will prevent them from walking, bones will become obsolete and/or protrude from the body, being able to hinder or cause appendages to be lethal
\Burning bodies will quickly dispose of the body, though radiation will erradicate virus (highly dangerous on live humans)
\The desire to want to be loved (basic human function) causes them to want to migrate to humans, no hunger
\Can have loss of up to all five senses
Surviving humans try to go to Boston to find Ackerman and find way to kill them
Ackerman is found guarding body, rage is subsided, wants to die, tells ways to kill
Ackerman is consumed and fights one last time before infecting group with exploding brain tumor and dies for good

I'm working with this plot in order to write a story, or perhaps a series or trilogy or whatever. While revealing the main plot of the story in the spoliers, I want to just overline the idea and ask the community if it's good, needs improvement (sideplots will definitely be added, of course), or if the idea of carcinogenic zombies to be too far-fetched.
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Re: Story ideas N' stuffs.

Postby Newgeneration » December 6th, 2013, 12:51 pm

I've been writing a little story here and there, but I haven't really done much with it recently. I'm not really a writer, so it's fairly bland and unfinished. I don't even know where I'm taking it, so I'm probably going to scrap it and start a new one. It's pretty bad when I don't even know what the ♥♥♥♥ I'm doing... :o_O:

I'm gonna have to think this next one through very carefully.
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