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Help Me Improve...

Postby Avo » April 13th, 2011, 3:59 pm

As you may know, I've started a new story called ''The Legend of Avo 2''. It's gotten some mixed reviews and I need some help. How to improve my writing, what I can add, because if I keep going like this, the story might fall in popularity because of how it is written. Any suggestions is welcome cuz I need it.
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Re: Help Me Improve...

Postby *Emelia K. Fletcher » April 14th, 2011, 10:01 am

You could, for starters, listen to the advice in the reviews themselves.
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Re: Help Me Improve...

Postby Avo » April 14th, 2011, 10:10 am

MKSTAR26 wrote:You could, for starters, listen to the advice in the reviews themselves.


Sometimes the reviews do help me, but they don't do it well. I need some more advice than just statements from reviews.

Oh, and a GMod being dead for a year and nobody caring is quite weird.


That's not the point.
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Re: Help Me Improve...

Postby *Emelia K. Fletcher » April 14th, 2011, 10:32 am

Well...

Honestly I can't think. It's like I have a permanent case of writer's block.


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Re: Help Me Improve...

Postby Avo » April 14th, 2011, 10:42 am

Well, one thing I might do is before I release a chapter, I send it to someone so they can give me advice on what to add/take out.
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Postby *Emelia K. Fletcher » April 14th, 2011, 11:20 am

Avolerators wrote:Well, one thing I might do is before I release a chapter, I send it to someone so they can give me advice on what to add/take out.


Send it to me.


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Re: Help Me Improve...

Postby Avo » April 14th, 2011, 11:39 am

MKSTAR26 wrote:
Avolerators wrote:Well, one thing I might do is before I release a chapter, I send it to someone so they can give me advice on what to add/take out.


Send it to me.


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Re: Help Me Improve...

Postby AwesomeJRFD » April 14th, 2011, 8:50 pm

Avolerators wrote:
MKSTAR26 wrote:
Avolerators wrote:Well, one thing I might do is before I release a chapter, I send it to someone so they can give me advice on what to add/take out.


Send it to me.


OK.


Me too. :awe:

It's always better to send it to more than one person.
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