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As you may know, I've started a new story called ''The Legend of Avo 2''. It's gotten some mixed reviews and I need some help. How to improve my writing, what I can add, because if I keep going like this, the story might fall in popularity because of how it is written. Any suggestions is welcome cuz I need it.

You could, for starters, listen to the advice in the reviews themselves.
Oh, and a GMod being dead for a year and nobody caring is quite weird.

MKSTAR26 wrote:You could, for starters, listen to the advice in the reviews themselves.

Sometimes the reviews do help me, but they don't do it well. I need some more advice than just statements from reviews.

Oh, and a GMod being dead for a year and nobody caring is quite weird.

That's not the point.

Well...

Honestly I can't think. It's like I have a permanent case of writer's block.

Well, one thing I might do is before I release a chapter, I send it to someone so they can give me advice on what to add/take out.

Avolerators wrote:Well, one thing I might do is before I release a chapter, I send it to someone so they can give me advice on what to add/take out.

Send it to me.

MKSTAR26 wrote:

Avolerators wrote:Well, one thing I might do is before I release a chapter, I send it to someone so they can give me advice on what to add/take out.

Send it to me.

OK.

Avolerators wrote:

MKSTAR26 wrote:

Avolerators wrote:Well, one thing I might do is before I release a chapter, I send it to someone so they can give me advice on what to add/take out.

Send it to me.

OK.

Me too.

It's always better to send it to more than one person.