Le Créateur [Argument topic]

[TrappedTime]

Argue here about my not story.
Because that's what it has become with people.

[zebtrestalala]

TBG, you can't make a story topic without a story in it. You can announce that you're making it in chat or something, but at least put a preview of it or something, please.

Also, is this going to be in French?

[Buff_]

You seem to have your story straight, but your writing needs work. Try to make it more fluent and try to use complex sentences instead of many small sentences.

[TrappedTime]

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAUUUUUUUUUUUUUUGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHH I HATE CRITICS!!!!!!!!

[Suyo]

If you don't want critism, don't make stories.

Please don't repeat the stuff from the other topic.

And TBG, listen to critism which helps you make you story better.

[TrappedTime]

I will make a story how I want to make it.
I'm going to ignore criticism.

[Ridder]

I will make a story how I want to make it. I'm going to ignore criticism.

If you won't let people criticize you, then you have no point in being here. You might as well tell your stories to yourself if you don't want anyone else's opinion on it.

[TrappedTime]

I never said people couldn't criticise.
I just won't actually do what they say to do.

[spookyghost]

Just leave him alone. He can't learn. Just don't read it. He just can't stand people not thinking he is perfect and awesome.

[TrappedTime]

Just leave him alone. He can learn. Just read it. He just can stand people not thinking he is perfect and awesome.

Aww thanks.
I love you.
*Changes into critic lover*
Go criticise all you want.
Maybe longer sentences would make my story bette.
OOH! And more detail.
Don't forget plot.