Re: Le Créateur
Posted: January 3rd, 2010, 1:12 pmTheBetterGamer wrote:Lrmaster132 wrote:Just leave him alone. He can learn. Just read it. He just can stand people not thinking he is perfect and awesome.
Aww thanks.
I love you.
*Changes into critic lover*
Go criticise all you want.
Maybe longer sentences would make my story bette.
OOH! And more detail.
Don't forget plot.
O.o Ummm... Creepy.... Okay... Just work on the story!
