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Runouw.com and The 7 Golden Bullets

Postby Megar » March 7th, 2010, 2:59 am

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People In the Story:
SSR: SuperSpongerific
Runouw
Suyo: Superyoshi
Niklaw
four: fourinone
Zed: Zed98
MOY: MessengerofYahweh
Blablob
Sonicfan253
MIC: marioiscool254
Brando: brandobrawl

The Bullets:
MysteX
Onzors
Xzack
CrystalX
Dazz
MalozX
SSR's Bullet

Prologue

One day, SSR was walking to the General Artwork Section from the Chat. He had his Golden Bullet with him. With his Golden Bullet, He wasn't scared of anything. That was, Until he got this PM...
Mystery wrote:Meet me in Off-Topic. I need your Golden Bullet. Spambots are attacking.

He decided to take Niklaw with him, just to be safe, Incase this "Mystery" was a spammer.
"You sure we should do this?" Asked Niklaw.
"Yeah, Positive. Just going to say NO WAY, MAH BOI. NO ONE TAKES MA GOLDEN BULLET" replied SSR.
When they made it, No one was there, When suddenly, A spambot came out on SSR! It took the Golden Bullet, without noticeing Niklaw, and that was when Niklaw Got his Duel Swords out and killed it. It dropped the Golden Bullet and a note. Niklaw checked SSR. He was sadly knocked out cold. He checked the note. It said.....

Chapter 1: Niklaw's Note

Mystery wrote:Congratulations. You defeated the Spambot. Now i shall reveal that I am, THE LEAD SPAMBOT. I have targeted your website. I am sending my best Spambots out to take Your Golden Bullets. Our sensors indicate that a normal user and the site admin have one each.

"I have to show everyone this note!" Niklaw shouted. "Can't forget SSR though."
Niklaw ran to the Chat as quick as he could, got everyone, Even Runouw, to SSR.
Runouw said when they got there, In a low, dark voice, "Let me see that note again Niklaw." Runouw read the note.
"I knew this day would come." Runouw said. "We have to collect the 7 Golden Bullets. Luckily, SSR and I have one."
"That leaves only 5 to go," Brando said.
"True." four said. "But none of them will be here."
"I think the spambots have one." said MIC.
"Mcleod Gaming probaly has one of them aswell." Blabob mentioned.
"Yes, But we have to wait for SSR to be revived." Zed said.
"I know a place where I can get something to revive him." Sonicfan253 said.
"Well go and get it then!" MOY shouted.
"Hmm. Take your gun and SSR's Golden Bullet." Runouw said.
"Go on Sonicfan253!" said most people.
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Re: Runouw.com and The 7 Golden Bullets

Postby Megar » March 8th, 2010, 11:24 pm

~Chapter 2: Sonicfan's Journey: Part 1

Sonicfan253 walked out of the Off-Topic Section with SSR's Golden Bullet.
"So where was it again? Oh yeah, It was in WaffleWorld. Have to be careful though." Sonicfan said deeply to himself.
And that was when he heard a Spambot coming from behind! :o Sonicfan Shot the spambot with his gun, it destroyed the spambot, Leaving another note. The Bullet came back to Sonicfan the moment it hit the spambot.
"That's a good bullet!" Sonicfan yelled. But anyway, I'll read this note later. Right now I have to get to WaffleWorld. This is gonna take a while.....

---------------IN-FORUM-23-------------
"What do we do?" fourinone said to the other mods. It was an all-around meeting for mods all over the fourms.
"I say we experiment on Runouw's Gold Bullet." Suyo mentioned. He was impatiently waiting for Runouw to answer his question. Though Runouw knew that the day would come, he had no idea what TO do. When he then said....
"OK, We'll have to do what Suyo said. Let's get on with the experiment." He said in his low, dark voice.
"Ok. That's the only option, except for going out and those spambots killing us." Niklaw mumbled.
*Sigh* "Sonicfan is probally dead now." fourinone cried.

-------We'll-be-back-with-Sonicfan-in-Chapter-3---------
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Re: Runouw.com and The 7 Golden Bullets

Postby MessengerOfDreams » March 9th, 2010, 9:22 am

It's okay, but not very original at all, and the chapters are short. On the bright side, I like that you use less used characters in your story (Sonicfan253, for instance) but overall, I'm not overly entertained. 5/10.
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Re: Runouw.com and The 7 Golden Bullets

Postby Megar » March 9th, 2010, 11:19 pm

MessengerOfYahweh wrote:It's okay, but not very original at all, and the chapters are short. On the bright side, I like that you use less used characters in your story (Sonicfan253, for instance) but overall, I'm not overly entertained. 5/10.

Thanks for the fair rate, it does get better. Explosions, everything will pop-up.
Again, Thanks.
P.S A NEW CHAPTER IS COMING SOON TO A TOPIC NEAR YOU!
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Re: Runouw.com and The 7 Golden Bullets

Postby MessengerOfDreams » March 10th, 2010, 1:52 pm

I like your spirit. Keep it up and you'll be going places!
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Re: Runouw.com and The 7 Golden Bullets

Postby Megar » March 11th, 2010, 8:11 am

MessengerOfYahweh wrote:I like your spirit. Keep it up and you'll be going places!

Thanks, Also, You have a big role in this story. SPOILER ALERT! You find a Golden Bullet! SPOILERS END!
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Re: Runouw.com and The 7 Golden Bullets

Postby MessengerOfDreams » March 11th, 2010, 1:30 pm

Maybe a little smaller on the text. I could read it clearly.
Anyway, cool!
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also Diddy/Lucina <3

Fanfic: Worth a Thousand Words
Because the world needed a Samus/Dedede story
Fanfic: Ecstatic Silence
Just wanted to write and ♥♥♥♥ like this happens, you'd think I'd know better.
Fanfic: Far From the Edge
It's a dance that's been a long time coming for a brand new man and an unchanging woman, but once one takes the plunge there's no falling back up.
Original: Jealous Ghosts of the Mississippi
The story of Rachel meeting Amber after a lifetime of silence and being shunned
Original: Your Hand in Mine
One of my most personal stories about a dangerous romance. Now to be published in a college lit journal!
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Recent LDC Work:
Level Series: Leaves From The Vine (ft Star King)
For the 29th LDC, a theme of grassland taken through the growth of our designing society. Won the 29th LDC!
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Level Topic: Collection of MoD's Levels!
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Re: Runouw.com and The 7 Golden Bullets

Postby Zed98 » March 12th, 2010, 10:25 am

I love that I'm in the story!!! :D
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Re: Runouw.com and The 7 Golden Bullets

Postby Megar » March 12th, 2010, 1:21 pm

Zed98 wrote:I love that I'm in the story!!! :D

No Problem. It's just that i couldn't think and it just so happened that I seen you on the chat. So yeah. :lol:
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Re: Runouw.com and The 7 Golden Bullets

Postby Sonicfan253 » March 13th, 2010, 6:38 am

Hmm....cant wait to see what I do next! Oh snap another spambot >_< *Shoots it with lazer gun*
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