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Re: Sonicfan253`s How to make good stories guide! SECTION 10 OUT

Postby Demonik » June 13th, 2010, 10:01 pm

Topics merged. They aren't identical, but similar. Therefore, they're both in the same thread. Done and done. :)
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Re: How to write a story!

Postby MessengerOfDreams » June 13th, 2010, 10:03 pm

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See Sonicfan's guide for grammar points, but I suggest that you don't use smilies

If you want me to add anything anything else, please suggest something.



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Re: Sonicfan253`s How to make good stories guide! SECTION 10 OUT

Postby Buff_ » June 13th, 2010, 10:53 pm

And now since they are merge, can I ask that that you edit the name to something more appropriate? :D
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Re: Sonicfan253`s How to make good stories guide! SECTION 10 OUT

Postby Worst_master » June 15th, 2010, 1:50 am

Stop arguing about the merge.

WIll edit more and have Section 11?
This is quite long, but....... how about desciption each section longer?
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Re: Sonicfan253 and Buff's how to make good stories!

Postby Sonicfan253 » June 15th, 2010, 11:38 am

Title fix.
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Re: Sonicfan253 and Buff's how to make good stories!

Postby Worst_master » June 15th, 2010, 10:03 pm

Sonicfan253 wrote:Title fix.

It... made by .... Buff? You are copying, or just merge two guides..... together?
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Re: Sonicfan253 and Buff's how to make good stories!

Postby Sonicfan253 » June 16th, 2010, 6:23 am

I made this guide, Buff copied it with permission.

We merged our two guides together into one.
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Re: Sonicfan253 and Buff's how to make good stories!

Postby MessengerOfDreams » June 16th, 2010, 6:27 am

What he means is, Buff did Storyboarding, Sonicfan did grammar.
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I switch my signature a lot. If you wanna see some of my past ones, here you go.
Silent Conversations and a Crow's Final Song!
My latest story, and one of my personal favorites. A girl bound in silence finds the words to say to her prospective girlfriend as they visit her religious father in a dusty town on the edge of Kansas, where the crows' migration south brings forth anchored memories, the path to resolution, and a new start.

Form (25quared)
This might be like nothing you've seen before.
Updated Works! Some of my past best and current stuff: show
Writing Works!
Fanfic: Shut Up and Dance
why do I write so much about dancing you don't dance you've never danced in your entire life
lying little ♥♥♥♥ with your ♥♥♥♥ story ♥♥♥♥ you
also Diddy/Lucina <3

Fanfic: Worth a Thousand Words
Because the world needed a Samus/Dedede story
Fanfic: Ecstatic Silence
Just wanted to write and ♥♥♥♥ like this happens, you'd think I'd know better.
Fanfic: Far From the Edge
It's a dance that's been a long time coming for a brand new man and an unchanging woman, but once one takes the plunge there's no falling back up.
Original: Jealous Ghosts of the Mississippi
The story of Rachel meeting Amber after a lifetime of silence and being shunned
Original: Your Hand in Mine
One of my most personal stories about a dangerous romance. Now to be published in a college lit journal!
-------------------------
Recent LDC Work:
Level Series: Leaves From The Vine (ft Star King)
For the 29th LDC, a theme of grassland taken through the growth of our designing society. Won the 29th LDC!
--
Levels at Large:
Level Topic: Collection of MoD's Levels!
If you've ever wanted to see any level I made worth a damn, go here! From the quiet 14th LDC entrant Finis to the megasmash level series Dark, you can find links here!
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Re: Sonicfan253 and Buff's how to make good stories!

Postby Worst_master » June 17th, 2010, 4:11 am

MessengerOfYahweh wrote:What he means is, Buff did Storyboarding, Sonicfan did grammar.

So who did another?
The grammer mean the rules of grammer or....... the grammer of this guide?
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Re: Sonicfan253 and Buff's how to make good stories!

Postby Buff_ » June 17th, 2010, 7:52 am

Grammar used for stories i.e giving people a name, using connectives, periods/full stops etc etc
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