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Brisingr
Eragon

You know, I once thought of reading these books, but then once I saw how thick they were..........

In the words of the wise, I said

George Lopez wrote:You are so grounded, coffee will look at you and say DAMN!

And you are right, somewhat, buff, about my leaving, but you know, I'm going to come back around, every, what, four times a month?
just to see if anythings changed.


OT:.............*bursts out in laughter* Publisher? Runouw.com Connection?
I bet, in book format, it will turn out to be about twenty pages long. You can try, but seriously. No. Not yet.

Uhm, combined and redone, the book takes up 150 pages. Great support as usual, Ridder.

Liak I sied.

You can try, but seriously. No. Not yet.

Indian? O_O

Avo is an indian name, eh? Strange.......

Okay, what do you want to be named?

I don't know! Maybe a common name like Ryan Smith or somethin' (I don't wanna give out my REAL name....)

Like you did all that time ago... and on youtube.

..........touche......

Fine, name me whatever you want.....

This is what I have done since finishing TRC


1. Have improved flow to about 100 sentences

2. Have fixed tiny plot holes

3. Have edited the *expletives* from the Sequel.

4. Extended the ending a little bit.

[*]WHAT TO DO NEXT

5. Make the first chapter a heckuva lot longer, describing Runouw.com as a website. (I could use help with this.)

6. Double check for grammar.

7. Send out to friends and family.

8. Get started sending out to publishers!