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This is good for a short story

What, Runouw's Secrets? Cause you DO know these are reviews, amirite?

Mind if I do the next review?
And thanks for reviewing my story! Ill keep your advice for my future stories, Because I have alot of new things planned.

Life inside a level

An interesting story about Nin10mode getting trapped in levels, A storm happens and sends Nin10mode into his computer. Unfortunatley landing in Super mario 63, He passes through levels (With the help of the forumers). But through the story, The plot takes a COMPLETE twist, Nin10mode (Or...somebody?) Wakes up in bed, starting something else. Hang on just a sec. Nin10mode was supposed to be inside LEVELS, And now hes in real life? I dont know if this is a dream or not. But that takes off a point, Overall: An awesome story.

9/10

"The cake is a lie"

Yeah... I probably should've made it clearer. In "Stars of Hope - Preparation," That's Star-fawful that I'm speaking as.

I'd love to get a TRC review... crap I broke mah own rule! :wears shirt saying "Hypocrite" all day:

Runouw's Forum: Review

By- Kimonio





The Plot: Okay, so like all stories, this is based on when the army of spambots, spammers and trolls attack at once. The mods and a few selected members are used to fight off the army and save the site.

THE GOOD: Good personalities, good descriptive writing, and great use of action. 10/10

THE BAD: At some point, when Nero was killed, you magically brought him back. But how? You were fighting Oren. Also, I got confused when I read about the merging. o_O......Meh, that's about it for me.


OVERALL: Meh. You got a good score. 10/10.

I don't think it's fair to be reviewing your own stories, especially if you're gonna be rating 10's.

Which is why i need someone else to do it!

@Blab: So I made Runouw's Forum? Brandobrawl's epic story?.......Awesome.

I think he's referring to Moy and his story, Kim.