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Survivor: Unknown

Postby MessengerOfDreams » May 28th, 2010, 10:01 am

Okay, ground rules!

First off, DO NOT COMPLAIN IF YOUR CHARACTER ISN'T EXACTLY TO YOUR LIKING! IF YOU'RE A CHICK, DEAL WITH IT!

Second, if you're not in it, deal with it.

And... that's it.

Will have story up momentarily.

MessengerOfYahweh
Age: 22
Occupation: Photographer
Current Residence: Portland, Oregon
Gender: Male

Marioiscool254
Age: 20
Occupation: Musician
Current Residence: New York City
Gender: Male

Buffooner
Age: 21
Occupation: College Student (Former Military Member)
Current Residence: Ithaca, New York
Gender: Female

Blablob
Age: 30
Occupation: Weatherman
Current Residence: Daytona Beach, Florida
Gender: Male

Superyoshi
Age: 41
Occupation: Former Senator of California
Current Residence: Bozeman, Montana
Gender: Male

Niklaw
Age: 33
Occupation: Bar Owner
Current Residence: San Gabriel, California
Gender: Female

Fourinone
Age: 25
Occupation: Comedian
Current Residence: Boston, Massachusetts
Gender: Female

Yohsikid69
Age: 18
Occupation: Marathon Runner
Current Residence: Tacoma, Washington
Gender: Male

Avolerators
Age: 19
Occupation: Music Critic
Current Residence: New York, New York
Gender: Male

Aznchau4ever
Age: 34
Occupation: Filmmaker
Current Residence: Denver, Colorado
Gender: Male

Ridder
Age: ?
Occupation: ?
Current Residence: ?
Gender: ?

Star-Fawful
Age: 21
Occupation: Emo
Current Residence: Mammoth Caves, Kentucky
Gender: Male

Nin10mode
Age: 27
Occupation: Little League Coach
Current Residence: Brick, New Jersey
Gender: Male

Linkdroid
Age: 31
Occupation: Banker
Current Residence: Detroit, Michigan
Gender: Female

Kimonio
Age: 24
Occupation: Janitor
Current Residence: Beckville, Texas
Gender: Male

Kirby999
Age: 22
Occupation: Doctor’s Assistant
Current Residence: Lansing, Michigan
Gender: Male

Brandobrawl
Age: 19
Occupation: Author
Current Residence: Phoenix, Arizona
Gender: Male

Yoshi Boo 118
Age: 30
Occupation: Artist
Current Residence: Orlando, Florida
Gender: Female

Doram
Age: 59
Occupation: Video Game Designer
Current Residence: Johnstown, Pennsylvania
Gender: Male

24Murph
Age: 35
Occupation: Car Designer
Current Residence: Detroit, Michigan
Gender: Male

Teams:

Doram's Team
[*]Doram
[*]Marioiscool254
[*]Linkdroid
[*]24Murph
[*]Ridder
[*]Aznchau4ever
[*]MessengerOfYahweh
[*]YoshiKid69
[*]Buffooner

Kirby_999's Team
[*]Kirby999
[*]Niklaw
[*]Fourinone
[*]Kimonio
[*]Yoshi Boo 118
[*]Nin10mode
[*]Blablob
[*]Avolerators

Eliminated
[*]Brandobrawl
[*]Superyoshi
[*]StarFawful
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Re: Survivor- Idaho- (Cast Announced)

Postby MICrophone » May 28th, 2010, 10:19 am

A suggestion.
MessengerOfYahweh wrote:Superyoshi
Age: 41
Occupation: Former Senator of California
Current Residence: Bozeman, Montana
Gender: Male

Nobody is a Former Senator at the age of 41. That would mean you'd have to be elected to the Senate at age 30 (since it's a six year term and the minimum age according to the Constitution is 30) and you would have served only a term. That just doesn't happen. I would change that to something else.
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Re: Survivor- Idaho- (Cast Announced)

Postby MessengerOfDreams » May 28th, 2010, 10:24 am

Ok then.... Just left so I will fix that upon getting back. As for the rest...?
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My Most Recent Works: show
I switch my signature a lot. If you wanna see some of my past ones, here you go.
Silent Conversations and a Crow's Final Song!
My latest story, and one of my personal favorites. A girl bound in silence finds the words to say to her prospective girlfriend as they visit her religious father in a dusty town on the edge of Kansas, where the crows' migration south brings forth anchored memories, the path to resolution, and a new start.

Form (25quared)
This might be like nothing you've seen before.
Updated Works! Some of my past best and current stuff: show
Writing Works!
Fanfic: Shut Up and Dance
why do I write so much about dancing you don't dance you've never danced in your entire life
lying little ♥♥♥♥ with your ♥♥♥♥ story ♥♥♥♥ you
also Diddy/Lucina <3

Fanfic: Worth a Thousand Words
Because the world needed a Samus/Dedede story
Fanfic: Ecstatic Silence
Just wanted to write and ♥♥♥♥ like this happens, you'd think I'd know better.
Fanfic: Far From the Edge
It's a dance that's been a long time coming for a brand new man and an unchanging woman, but once one takes the plunge there's no falling back up.
Original: Jealous Ghosts of the Mississippi
The story of Rachel meeting Amber after a lifetime of silence and being shunned
Original: Your Hand in Mine
One of my most personal stories about a dangerous romance. Now to be published in a college lit journal!
-------------------------
Recent LDC Work:
Level Series: Leaves From The Vine (ft Star King)
For the 29th LDC, a theme of grassland taken through the growth of our designing society. Won the 29th LDC!
--
Levels at Large:
Level Topic: Collection of MoD's Levels!
If you've ever wanted to see any level I made worth a damn, go here! From the quiet 14th LDC entrant Finis to the megasmash level series Dark, you can find links here!
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Re: Survivor- Idaho- (Cast Announced)

Postby MICrophone » May 28th, 2010, 10:26 am

Well, while star's occupation may be funny, it's not very professional since it's not a real occupation…might want to change that, and generally little league coaching is a side job because it's volunteer primarily…nin10mode should also have a paying job. I laughed at Ridder having nothing; keep that. Otherwise it looks good.

EDIT: However, it is a known fact that Ridder lives in California according to the Runouw Map if you're interested in including that. You don't have to though.
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Re: Survivor- Idaho- (Cast Announced)

Postby Megar » May 28th, 2010, 10:27 am

Why arn't I in it?
You might wanna get Ridder with actuall stuff. GEE.
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Re: Survivor- Idaho- (Cast Announced)

Postby MessengerOfDreams » May 28th, 2010, 10:31 am

:redirects SS to second rule:
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I switch my signature a lot. If you wanna see some of my past ones, here you go.
Silent Conversations and a Crow's Final Song!
My latest story, and one of my personal favorites. A girl bound in silence finds the words to say to her prospective girlfriend as they visit her religious father in a dusty town on the edge of Kansas, where the crows' migration south brings forth anchored memories, the path to resolution, and a new start.

Form (25quared)
This might be like nothing you've seen before.
Updated Works! Some of my past best and current stuff: show
Writing Works!
Fanfic: Shut Up and Dance
why do I write so much about dancing you don't dance you've never danced in your entire life
lying little ♥♥♥♥ with your ♥♥♥♥ story ♥♥♥♥ you
also Diddy/Lucina <3

Fanfic: Worth a Thousand Words
Because the world needed a Samus/Dedede story
Fanfic: Ecstatic Silence
Just wanted to write and ♥♥♥♥ like this happens, you'd think I'd know better.
Fanfic: Far From the Edge
It's a dance that's been a long time coming for a brand new man and an unchanging woman, but once one takes the plunge there's no falling back up.
Original: Jealous Ghosts of the Mississippi
The story of Rachel meeting Amber after a lifetime of silence and being shunned
Original: Your Hand in Mine
One of my most personal stories about a dangerous romance. Now to be published in a college lit journal!
-------------------------
Recent LDC Work:
Level Series: Leaves From The Vine (ft Star King)
For the 29th LDC, a theme of grassland taken through the growth of our designing society. Won the 29th LDC!
--
Levels at Large:
Level Topic: Collection of MoD's Levels!
If you've ever wanted to see any level I made worth a damn, go here! From the quiet 14th LDC entrant Finis to the megasmash level series Dark, you can find links here!
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Re: Survivor- Idaho- (Cast Announced)

Postby StarF » May 28th, 2010, 10:33 am

Oh ha ha.
Might wanna change my occupation?
It's more of a personallity.
I'm Pretty sure I should put something here...
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Re: Survivor- Idaho- (Cast Announced)

Postby Blablob » May 28th, 2010, 12:37 pm

How the hell did I end up as a weatherman? :facepalm:


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Re: Survivor- Idaho- (Cast Announced)

Postby Avo » May 28th, 2010, 1:14 pm

19, eh? Well........eh....that's fine. This sounds cool! :D
Credit to Ridder for the awesome going-away avatar (:
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Re: Survivor- Idaho- (Cast Announced)

Postby YoshiKid54 » May 28th, 2010, 4:43 pm

18 years?
Yay. I know how to drive a car. XD
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