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Re: Pokemon Obsidian/Talc/(need another stone)

PostPosted: November 14th, 2012, 9:26 pm
by Kimonio
It's not the demo...and I didn't buy it either. onO

Let's just say it's confidential. Though I'm going to give VX A Lite(?), which from what I have heard is free.

The project will more than likely start up slowly, though, since I'm ditching the old idea, more or less. The story itself is going to be altered so it's slightly more realistic.


(I should really also edit that custom thread title, since I'm not a mod anymore...maybe later.)

Re: Pokemon Obsidian/Talc/(need another stone)

PostPosted: November 15th, 2012, 3:05 am
by Megar
I'm going to say a few things here.
1. Reboot the story. It doesn't have a Pokémon atmosphere and seems out of place and dark.
2. Don't give Shadro's Pokémon nicknames. Again, this gives a better atmosphere.
3. Your last stone should be Lapis.
4. Please. Don't make the moves you mentioned exclusive to Shadro's 'mon.

That is all. Good luck.