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Postby Yoshi Boo 118 » June 11th, 2011, 2:19 pm

World 1-4
A remake of World 1's castle in SMB.

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Re: World 1-4

Postby Asterocrat » June 13th, 2011, 9:15 am

Level: World 1-4

2/5 Rank: C


Rating details:

--- Fun: 1.5/3
Okay, let's say it was a bit of fun, but I got bored easily... There is no monsters, you jump sometimes... I can't see enough fun in this D:
--- Graphics: 0/1
Well, I know it's hard to add graphics in a castle, but where are the enemies, the coins, the 1-ups?
--- Other: 0.5/1
Remakes FTW and I liked the way the finished.

--- Overall: 2/5
Oops... That was a little bad. Better luck next time :)

--- Advices: Add enemies, coins, 1-ups, even if there is none of them in the real level... It's the fun and the graphics that counts, and I don't think the player will look in the real level to see if there is a coin or enemy that is effectively here...
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Re: World 1-4

Postby SuperLuigi9624 » July 14th, 2011, 8:43 am

WHAAAAT?! This deserves five. Bowser Battle was brilliant.
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Re: World 1-4

Postby Republic » July 14th, 2011, 7:09 pm

Luigi Fan 64 wrote:WHAAAAT?! This deserves five. Bowser Battle was brilliant.


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Well, if that deserves a five, then what shall some original-make level , like Star King's Dimension get? (Suppose you only can rate 0~5)

I only know, remakes is mostly lacking of creativity. However, at least you give some new creation, like the "bowser" and the flipping platform to replace the fire balls.

I can only give you a 1.25

FUN: 1/3

There is way too few things in the castle, you don't have to copy it totally, it is called "remake", so you can add some enemies, try to adjust the difficulty. The 1 marks is given for the "bowser". It is quite funny, right?

GRAPHICS: 0.25/1

There is no any decorations, as I know it is in a castle, but you can still add some rocks, or whatever. Coins and 1-ups are also needed. However, I didn't find any cut-off and corrupted tile here, thank you for not using them. :D

OTHERS: 0/1

Self-explanatory, nothing special, but minus zero point five for a remake.

- Remake

OVERALL: 1.25/5

I can only give you a 1.25. I really don't appreciate remakes, actually you're copying, not remaking. Try to add more your own ideas. Remember it is a remake, not copy. Remake, copy. Remake, copy. Remake, copy. Understand now? Now I can give you some solution to solve the problem.

1) THE ROTATION:

Firstly, replace the platform: Use Rotating blocks. Type in the following, and set a "x" you like, for example, "6".
Right Speed: x
Right Length: 4x
Right Offset: 0
Up Speed: x
Up Length: 4x
Up Offset: 2x

Acceleration: 0.5
Size: 12
Type: Red (1)

Rotation speed: 90 (yes)
Rotating Cooldown: 0

And you get a stupid red rotating blocks which is surrounding around in a circle pattern.

Secondly, repeat, enlarge "x" by 1 each time. And you can get a "fire wall" surrounding around. When you touch them, you will lose 2 hp. Try.

2) THE REMAIN
Delete all platforms afterwards. Add some enemies and coins, especially some blue one. So they can decorate your levels better. Instead of no decoration.
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