Volk City

[Koopa Yoshi]

Volk City
What? Klonoa 2? No, Super Mario 63

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[Asterocrat]

Level: Volk City

4/5 Rank: A

Rating details:

--- Fun: 1.5/2
Right. It's a good level, I have to admit it.
--- Graphics: 1/2
Where are the trees (alright, we are in a city. Forget about the trees), the coins, the 1-ups?
--- Other: 1/1
Nice effects with the Bill Bullets.

--- Overall: 3.5/5 => 4/5 (Impossible to rate a half)
Really good level, Koopa Parayoshi! YAY

--- Advices: Add coins, 1-ups, and (if you can) trees. Maybe make it longer if you can, it would be nice

[Republic]

@Star King:
Fun:1.5/2
Graphics:0.5/2
Others:1/1
1.5+0.5+1
=2+1
=3
LOL ANOTHER CALCULATION WRONG TROLOLOLOL. THE CALCULATION IS TOO AWSUM! I LOVE IT. YOU SHOULD INCREASE THE MARKS OF FUN BY 9001!
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Review:
FUN: 1.25/2

To be honest it is not perfectly fun. Firstly, I do not think only enemies on the road is fun. I just used run and spin attack all the enemies and I finished the level. However, you have put some bullet bill to demolish the blocks. But they're set a bit slow. But this is still good. Add more of them. The clouds on the top of the house is quite challenging, the usage of bullies is quite wonderful. Great. But have you thought it is a kinda lacking of originality? This level really require more original and creative stuffs. It is just a normal level. Moreover, it is a bit short. So that the level isn't quite fun.

GRAPHICS: 1.25/2

You're a great graphic designer, I even can't find any cut-off and odd tiles here. The jungle tile merge with the metal. Since most people rarely use that tile. The interactive tiles are placed quite good. But the houses are too plain. You may put some cabin windows for madness and some decoration beside them. You've also added some water as a pool. The platforms on the pool show you're prudent, since most people forget them.

However, this level is really lacking of decorations. I can hardly find any decoration here.

OTHAH: 0.5/1

Nothing special here, c'mon, show your madness of level skills.

OVERALL: 3/5

THis level isn't bad, but it is just quite normal I have some suggestion to your level. Firstly, you can lengthen your level a bit. A city isn't that small? It is just a village. Secondly, you can add some decoration, for example, some trees, or cave trees. Fences are also recommended, they fits in every level. Thirdly, be original and creative. Imaginative ideas can keep player's eyes on your level and obtain wide acceptance and support from them.

With the ideas above, you can improve your level a lot. The main point is you don't use your own ideas in this level. You just tried to make a normal level.

[Asterocrat]

@Star King:
Fun:1.5/2
Graphics:0.5/2
Others:1/1
1.5+0.5+1
=2+1
=3
LOL ANOTHER CALCULATION WRONG TROLOLOLOL. THE CALCULATION IS TOO AWSUM! I LOVE IT. YOU SHOULD INCREASE THE MARKS OF FUN BY 9001!

Oh god

Fixed. The note is still the same.