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Tomb of King Koopa the 2nd

PostPosted: July 18th, 2011, 5:34 am
by Zunar
Tomb of King Koopa the 2nd
This is a remake of my other ToKKt2. It has more "tears of the moon", more graphical stuff, and it's, to an extent, harder than the previous. However, there are a few typos. There are actually five "tears of the moon", not three or four. Three was the original, and four was the beta version of this remake. Five is the actual number.

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Re: Tomb of King Koopa the 2nd

PostPosted: July 30th, 2011, 6:04 am
by Master1.0
Personally, I didn't really think it was all that good. It had cutoff, very small amounts of decorations, and no background, blah blah.

Seeing how I am nice, I'll give you a 3

Re: Tomb of King Koopa the 2nd

PostPosted: July 30th, 2011, 7:13 am
by Zunar
Cutoff? You mean the pyramid at the very beginning? Not much could be done about that unless I changed it to a pipe in the top of it.

What decorations can be put in a tomb, really?

What background should be in a tomb?

Re: Tomb of King Koopa the 2nd

PostPosted: July 31st, 2011, 1:19 pm
by SuperMIC
TheZunar123 wrote:Cutoff? You mean the pyramid at the very beginning? Not much could be done about that unless I changed it to a pipe in the top of it.

What decorations can be put in a tomb, really?

What background should be in a tomb?


Check out Venexis' Calamari Cove, there's a tomb-like place that you should look at.