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Re: Follow the Butterflies

Postby Asterocrat » September 5th, 2011, 10:20 am

JSlayerXero wrote:Don't feel bad. You got 7th, and it's only your 2nd try. Me, I got 19th. WOO! I'd give a rating, but apparently I have to do something before my ratings are accepted. (Probably get a level or several up)


Just sayin'. I got 6th on my first try. Then 1st on my second try. So yeah.

Anyway.

Follow the Butterflies by ~MP3 Amplifier~

4/5 Rank: A


Rating details:

--- Fun: 2.25/3
Well, that was a bit of fun! I surely enjoyed this little level. Though sometime it seemed hard and I was a bit raging in front of my computer, but otherwise, it was really good. A bit short.

--- Graphics: 0.75/1
Sure it was nice graphics! Trees, coins were well placed, not too much enemies, and no lag at all! Which is quite exceptionnal. But no 1-ups.

--- Other: 1/1
I like the idea of following the butterflies. I also like the part where you had to climb a mountain to get to the top of a mushroom. Though the end was quite hard, I somehow enjoyed it. That makes full score!


--- Overall: 4/5
Well, that quite a nice level, too bad you didn't get 6th place at least. It needs a bit of improvment but it's a nice level and it's quite rare to play good levels like this this days. Nice job.

--- Advices: Add 1-ups. And the end it's a bit too hard, you just threw away some flipping platforms and clouds. Make it a bit easier and a bit more, well, better-looking. See what I mean?
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Re: Follow the Butterflies

Postby Karyete » September 5th, 2011, 10:28 am

Star King, MP3 did add a 1-up. AT the start, a mushroom is camouflaged under the log.
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Re: Follow the Butterflies

Postby Asterocrat » September 5th, 2011, 11:03 am

Karyete wrote:Star King, MP3 did add a 1-up. AT the start, a mushroom is camouflaged under the log.


Okay. Never mind. It doesn't change my star rating :awe:
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Re: Follow the Butterflies

Postby ~MP3 Amplifier~ » September 5th, 2011, 12:11 pm

Thanks for the review SK. :)

I've been currently working on my new level for the Earth And Sky theme, but my crappy internet connection is playing up, and everytime I load up SM63 on playedonline.com it doesn't load up properly like it usually does. Which is a pain, because playedonline.com is the only place I've stored my new level, and it's not finished, but it took me a while to get where I am with it now. I don't know if I'm gonna get that level back now... :cry:
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Re: Follow the Butterflies

Postby MessengerOfDreams » October 10th, 2011, 7:13 pm

I gotta say, StarK. In the Level Designer there is NO point in 1 ups for their proper use since you get an infinite amount of tries, therefore she doesn't deserve to lose any points over it. In fact, the only use for 1 ups is for a special skills challenge, like SMW's Dragon Coins or Star Coins. An optional mechanic that isn't necessary.

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Re: Follow the Butterflies

Postby ~MP3 Amplifier~ » October 11th, 2011, 7:54 am

Thanks MoD. I'm starting to get a bit of confidence about my place in the LDC now.. really looking forward to hearing the results! :D
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