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amusment park. ver.1.0

PostPosted: August 2nd, 2011, 5:59 pm
by koolkid
amusment park. ver.1.0
the all new amusment park!

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(note:in the poll please only do 1 of the how many silver star questoins)

Re: amusment park. ver.1.0

PostPosted: August 3rd, 2011, 2:29 pm
by Harmless
Oh, hello. I might as well give you a review on what I thought of your level, hoping it's ok with others...

Fun: 0/5. I am not kidding, this level wasn't fun at all. I mean, come on. A playhouse isn't a ride you see everyday at the amusement park in your state. More like a place where you can visit. Also, when I went in the playhouse to get a silver star, I got trapped and could not go back down. So, I tried again and skipped ahead, and lost my way from there. Too many doors at the ride emporium, and no clear directions. And earlier, the rollercoaster killed me due to invisible tiles... do you even test your levels??

Graphics: 3/5. You did ok when it comes to structures itself. The "rides" and everything was rather neatly laid out, but there was cut-off, especially at the beginning, where the grass and jungle tiles are.

Creativity: 2/5. I think you had a rather ambitious goal, but it didn't really flow well. The child's playhouse area needs to have a ladder or something you can get back to the ground on. Please...

Also, the rise and fall ride (Ride #2) was too slow. It could've been better, but it was the nearest thing I could get to a ride.

You got an average of...
1.7/5!

You could probably have done better if you fix what's mentioned above.

Re: amusment park. ver.1.0

PostPosted: August 3rd, 2011, 6:36 pm
by koolkid
Also, the rise and fall ride (Ride #2) was too slow. It could've been better, but it was the nearest thing I could get to a ride.

there's a ride in real life like that,go's up slowly and then drops you

Re: amusment park. ver.1.0

PostPosted: August 3rd, 2011, 7:38 pm
by Zacky
Did you really need to add a voting thingy? :o.o:
(How did you do that, by the way?)

Re: amusment park. ver.1.0

PostPosted: August 3rd, 2011, 7:47 pm
by Harmless
8 Bit Dude wrote:Did you really need to add a voting thingy? :o.o:
(How did you do that, by the way?)

Are you talking about my post when I hid the score? :shock:

I had to figure it out myself. You know those buttons on top when making a post with stuff like Bold and Italics? Right to the Font Color button is an "is" button. Click it, then put whatever text you want to be hidden inside the brackets. Like this!

Re: amusment park. ver.1.0

PostPosted: August 5th, 2011, 8:14 am
by koolkid
TheHarmless wrote:
8 Bit Dude wrote:Did you really need to add a voting thingy? :o.o:
(How did you do that, by the way?)

Are you talking about my post when I hid the score? :shock:

I had to figure it out myself. You know those buttons on top when making a post with stuff like Bold and Italics? Right to the Font Color button is an "is" button. Click it, then put whatever text you want to be hidden inside the brackets. Like this!

no,he ment the poll.

Re: amusment park. ver.1.0

PostPosted: August 6th, 2011, 9:23 am
by Harmless
Oh, yes, that. :o_O: