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Postby PoodleNoodle » August 5th, 2011, 6:51 pm

Cave of Solitude
A haunted cave. Two Shine Sprites. (First Level I hope you like it)

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Re: Cave of Solitude

Postby ScardySquaril » August 8th, 2011, 3:08 pm

Prepare for my rate....

FUN

WAY too easy, seriously, also too short, I only had a little fun in this lvl, seriously you can triple jump to the green platforms. How you can improve is make your lvls a bit longer, plus put some obstacles, or something to block Mario from reaching the platform very easily, like lava. 0.5/5

GRAPHICS

Seriously, no decorations in this lvl, pipes werent going anywhere, so the pipes in this lvl were useless, bare enemies also a problem in this lvl, another problem with the enemies is that there werent any varietys in them, next time, please put varietys of enemies and enough enemies, plus add decorations to make the lvl better, and also please, pipes leading to somewhere. Sorry but the score in this lvl is terrible. 0.5/5 (Because the blue blocks werent spam)

Lags

No lag at all, seriously, if it was laggy, I would take off a point. This Critera means that the score stays the same if its not laggy, and if it was, a point would disappear from the score.

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Your score is......1/5
Read the Improvement points in this rate and you could improve
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Re: Cave of Solitude

Postby ~Yoshi~ » August 8th, 2011, 3:35 pm

Here is my review.
Fun:It was just like you didn't do anything to get the shine. 0/1

Cut-off: some cut-off 0.5/1

differculty:Super Easy 0/1

Lag No lag 1/1

Other: Some Effort 0.5/1

Your overall score is:2/5 stars

Ways to improve is to put more time, and make your level longer and more challaging.
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Re: Cave of Solitude

Postby GMDragon11 » August 9th, 2011, 6:51 am

Here is my review

FUN:

Really! The size of that level is 65x70.Come on and the level is way too short.Too easy.Not fun. :troll: Fun Rating 0.5/5


GraphicsNo tress,coins, not even the cave tileset in that level :o.o: :o_O: .But you put some emeines,but put more.Sorry bro but
Graphics Rating 1/5

Other Check the settings of the rotaing blocks or circle platforms. Nothing fun. Lame
Other Rating 0.2/5

Total 0.4/5
To improve:
Make the level longer
Put some cave tress and cave tilesets
Get creative,change the setings of the rotating blocks or circle platforms.
Coins and more eminies.
Edit the level.Check what you made.And change the size of the level. 65x70 is way too short.

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